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Metal Sonic's Revenge...starts...

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Xeno Metal Knuckles

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Ok we are going to start off with our opening posts and Metal Sonic is going to have his own unique opening. The rest of you will basically have yourself meeting the others and making a union to stop Metal Sonic...whether your running away from Metal Sonic's Forces or traveling through a forest..you going to meet the other Rpgers in the openings (Except for Metal Sonic)...now on with The RPG

All of the Normal Rules For an RPG apply to this one...no godmodding etc...

You may Rpg in either First or Third Person

Metal Sonic
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"Computer interface,report current status of the Master Emerald's location." Metal Sonic ordered as a digitized face appeared on the screen. "Mechs 1242-1269 are on there way to Angel Island. Is there anything else you wish to see" The Computer said as Metal Sonic's Eyes narrowed. "Nothing more." Metal Sonic said as he went outside and looked towards the dense forest ahead. "Soon...very soon I will have my revenge on you Sonic The Hedgehog.."

Metal Sonic went back inside the base just as the Computer turned on by itself. "Master Emerald has been retrieved. request permission to order mechs to finish off Red Echinda." The Computer asked as Metal Sonic turned his head back towards the Computer. "No..I wish to finish that Echinda off myself. let him live for now...bring the Master Emerald to me" Metal Sonic said as his Pink Blade started glowing yellow..."What does this mean?" Metal Sonic asked himself as he stared at the blade.
 

Scar

Hadouken!
<Zero the Hedgehog...I wish I could be sure that was my real name...that I knew where I was...but as of now, I don't. > A black hedgehog said, standing atop a cliff overlooking Station Square.

A light breeze was picking up. The moon shone on the cliff Zero was standing on, like a spotlight. The cold night air was nothing to Zero. He'd faced worse. Much worse. It was too the point where cold didn't bother him in the slightest. His crimson eyes shifted, and he stared down at Station Square.

<I feel it. A Chaos Emerald... > Zero thought. <I still don't have one, but this is a start. Nothing's gonna stop me now! It starts here... >

Zero tightened his fists, and turned around. He was now facing a path, apparently headed down the mountain into the city below. The hedgehog ran down the street at speeds of about 90 MPH, absolutely nothing compared to his true speeds. Within seconds, he was at the foot of the mountain, facing the entrance to Station Square. Another second, and he was speeding across the bridge into the city, swerving out of the way of cars entering and leaving Station Square and jumping over those he couldn't avoid...
 

Knightblazer

Memories in the Rain
Lucied the Twilight Wolf ©
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Humming my favourite tune, I strolled through the lush evergreen forest, where the birds chirped, and animals ran freely here and there. The bright sun shone down on me, passing its warming rays through me. I grinned as I contiuned walking down the path, munching on berries I had found a few hours earlier. Deilicious... I thought my myself, muching merrily on a couple more berries.

Tossing a few berries onto the ground, I sat down for awhile and watched, grinning slightily, as the animals all scampered about and try to take the berries. After 10 minutes of fighting, a squrriel eventually triumphed and took the berries to his hidey-hole. I got up again, and made my way to a clearing. There, I saw a blue Hedgehog, a two tailed fox and a Red Echinda. "Umm... hi," I said, as I introdued myself to what I understood as the famous Sonic and Co.

"So, you're here to find out what caused disturbance at your home?" asked Tails, as he nodded to Knuckles.

"Well, the Master Emerald's been stolen once again by Eggman, so that may be the problem..." trailed off the Echinda as he looked ashamed of his actions. I could only watch in sadness.
 
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Raposa Dalua

<-Awesomeness
Miles "Tails" Prower
"Rikki"

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Tails looked on sadly, having no words of comfort for his Echidna friend. The fox clearly remembered what happened the first time the Master Emerald was stolen. He certainly didn't want to see Angel Island fall into the ocean again, once was more than enough for him. His trademark, the double tails, even seemed to be sagging in sadness with the rest of his emotions, despite the brave face he held. He looked on as more newcomers arrived, all wanting to put a stop to the madness that had begun.

There was a strange wolf (whose face seemed more lizaridish than wolfish), Lucied was his name, or so he had introduced himself. He seemed like a kind fellow; one who knew when to be serious and when to throw a water balloon at you. This creature had similar coloration and markings to that of Shadow, a trait that made Tails just slightly suspicious of who he really was. Still, it was too early to make any sort of real observation without getting to know him first. A swishing sound made him glance upwards, and he saw the next arrival seemingly falling from the sky...

~~*~~

Rikki hovered over Station Square, holding a flyer in her icy blue paws. Despite having flown for quite awhile, her large stores of endurance kept her tails whirring like she had only just begun her flight. She whistled idly as she looked from the paper to the roads, and back to the paper again, trying to locate the area of forest in which everyone was meeting to discuss the breakdown of "Robotnik's" latest plan. Hmph. She didn't know how, or why, but she knew some meanie had come back and killed him. She witnessed the act herself, though was unable to see exactly what happened, or who commited the crime. All she knew is that he was a silly little contraption that needed to be taught a lesson. And then her, and the meanie, and her uncle could all have cookies.

The little hybrid smiled at the thought of sharing cookies with a fellow killer as she finally spotted the clearing. She let her tails give way, and fell into a nearby tree with a thump. She leapt from branch to branch, kicking off the trunk of a tree on the opposite side of the path and leaping towards the ground. Rikki then proceeded to tumble through the clearing and land in a heap on the grass; her emerald eyes going in and out of focus as those who had already arrived looked at her as though she were some sort of idiot. She placed a furry hand to her head and held it still, then helped herself off the floor, not bothering to brush off any dust that might have gathered on her. With a rather toothy grin, she folded her hands behind her head and merely smiled, leaving the flyer she had found lying in the dirt.

"This is the union, right?" she asked, pausing only to figure that telling them her code wasn't the best choice, and merely said, "I'm Rikki, and I want to help."
 

Momoko Lover

Hop, Skip, Jump!!!
Tylan the Chameleon - 2 weeks ago

As I searced on the crow's nest, in my little boat, I noticed a large city in the distance. Surprised, as I hadn't seen anything in days, I looked in my binoculars, and was a little nervous at what I may find in such a big city. I thought to my self, "I don't ever remember being in a city as huge as this!"

When I reached the unknown city, I found many people talking, and so much hustle and bustle of the town. "If Knuckles is here, it will sure take a while without any address, or form of identification." I said to myself, a little discouraged. After what it seemed to be 2 hours of long searching, there was Knuckles, Sonic, Tails, and some other wolf-like creature.
 
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bronislav84

I <3 Catgirls
Streak

Station Square's night was young, and I had a bad feeling something was up. I heard rumors of trouble brewing after hearing about the death of my Dad, Robotnik. The rumors pointed to the forest and a meeting. I also sensed I wasn't alone in the night, as a black something wizzwd by on the roads, dashing past cars on it's way to the forest. I felt like following it, but then another black something jumped behind me.

I pulled out my Sword and turned around, slowly. "Friend or foe?" I asked.

"Humph. I can't answer that, for I'm not really sure right now. With the death of Robotnik on the news, I was thinking I'd try to take over the world myself." sad the thing in the darkness.

"You can't be serious...." was all that came out of my mouth.

"Nah, I'm not serious, but I have thought about it. I'm Shadow the hedgehog, and you are....."

"Streak, and I'm not exactly sure what I am. All I know is that the ones following me have finally stopped, after the death of my Father." I said to the newcomer.

"If you mean Eggman, then stop calling him your Father. He is no Father to you, since he was murdered." He said, crossing his arms like he usually did.

"I've been sensing a Chaos Emerald around here, ever since you lost all of yours. That was you, right?" I asked, putting away Green Destiny.

"Yea, that was my fault. I kinda scattered them around the world again. He he. If you're going to the forest, then why not come along, Brother. That nose of yours reminds me of mine. Ha ha." He said, with a few laughs in between his speech.

I didn't say anything for a bit, and just kinda felt my nose. Robotnik didn't tell me me much when he made me. Only that I was related to Sonic, Tails, and Knuckles. Was I related to Shadow too?

He noticed I was feeling my nose, but didn't say anything. Instead, he jumped down from the building and ran off, amost as if daring me to try to catch up.

And catch up I did. As we neared the Jungle, I heard voices coming from somewhere ahead, and stopped short of crashing into a girl who had just dropped from the sky. Shadow was a bit ahead, but he had already found a comfortable spot on one of the trees.

"Oh, e-excuse me Miss. Sorry to b-bump into you like that." I said, slightly embarrased.
 
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Xeno Metal Knuckles

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OOC: Excuse me for interupting but for those of you who were aware that I posted earlier..I deleted that post...so continue on with your posts and ignore my previous post. Now that most of the Openings are done...we are going to get to the start of the main Rpg..

Metal Sonic
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4 Mechs came in with the Master Emerald as the other Mechs followed them. "Set it down on that pedistal over there" Metal Sonic ordered as he pointed his blade towards a grey pedistal. the Mechs set it down on the pedistal and Metal Sonic jammed his blade into the Emerald..Metal Sonic then pulled the blade out of the emerald and then pointed it at one of his mechs. He was able to shoot a yellow orb out of his blade and it hit the mech and the mech turned a bright gold. "So this blade has the power to harness the energy of Chaos and use it on objects..such as the mechs..or even myself to make them turn... super..." Metal Sonic said as he order the mechs away. "Now to get Sonic."Metal Sonic said as he clutched his sword and walked outside

He started his jet booster and started flying towards the forest with 30+ Mechs following him. "Iam coming for you Sonic...you may have defeated me when I transformed into Metal Overlord but you won't beat me now."Metal Sonic said as he slowly lowered himself to the ground and pointed his blade towards Sonic,Knuckles,Tails,Rikki,Shadow,another Hedgehog and a wolf that he didn't know of. "destroy them." Metal Sonic said as the Super Mech that Metal Sonic had transformed earlier cut down the trees and let the other mechs have a free path to the gang. The Mechs surrounded the union as Metal Sonic held his blade tightly and then told the mechs to make a path so the group see him.."Finally I'll have you all destroyed along with Robotnik." Metal Sonic said as he aimed his blade towards them.
 
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Scar

Hadouken!
Zero ran down the street, swerving and veering out of the way to avoid on-coming traffic. He finally stopped at the end of the street, and skidded to a stop right in the middle of a four-way intersection. He glared thinly, and looked around. He saw that a car was speeding toward him. It was apparently damaged, as it had a huge dent in the hood and its windshield was shot. Zero just stared at it, and rolled himself into a ball. Amazingly, Zero became surrounded by a golden field of energy- this was his Spin Dash Attack.

Zero shot forward at amazing an amazing speed, and rammed into the car. It actually flew over Zero and into the air, flipping over before crashing onto the ground. The other cars on the street swerved to a stop, a few crashing into buildings or streetlights. Zero was now standing straight up, completely unharmed! He turned his head and looked behind him to see the destruction he caused. His facial expression didn't change at all, and in a brief moment he was looking forward again...

But he couldn't advance just yet. For standing in the hedgehog's way was a ten-foot tall humanoid robot. It was a shiny chrome color, and had a very simple design. Its right hand was replaced with a cannon of some sort while its left arm simply had three claws coming from the end, and it had very long, thin arms and legs. Its eyes were set in a permenant glare, and were a piercing red color. Its torso was thin and in the center was a black insignia that looked like a metal hedgehog's head...

"Destroy...hedgehog..." The robot said in a mechanical voice, raising its gun so that it was pointed directly at Zero.

"Hedgehog...?" Zero asked himself quietly. "So...you want a piece of me?"

"I was given orders...to destroy...a hedgehog. Are you the one...they call Sonic?" The robot groaned mechanically.

"Sorry to disappoint you, but no." Zero spat coldly. "But if it's a fight you want, it's a fight you'll get."

Zero stood his ground firmly, and stared at the robot for a second. The robot didn't respond, the barrel of its arm cannon just began glowing with a bright red light. A second later, the robot was firing a beam of red energy at Zero.

The beam of light was aimed perfectly, however Zero merely smirked and a second later, he was gone. The energy-blast flew harmlessly down the street, and eventually hit a street light, knocking it over and launching it through the air. The robot looked confused, but had no time to contemplate the situation, as Zero reappeared directly behind it! He leapt up into the air, surrounded by the same energy as when he used the Spin Dash attack. This was his Homing-Attack, otherwise known as the Jump Dash. Zero shot forward, locked on to the robot's torso, and knocked it backwards. The tall robot stumbled backwards, but regained its footing somewhat easily just as Zero hit the ground, though it was damaged.

Zero didn't waste a second. He began charging up his Spin Dash, and shot toward the robot. He hit its right leg, piercing the metal on its lower-leg and letting out some loose wires. Zero stood straight up again, but the robot was quick to counter. It raised its clawed arm into and air, and swung it down on Zero. He jumped backwards and avoided the attack, but the robot continued to swing at him. Zero ducked and swerved to either side to avoid the attacks. The robot couldn't seem to land a single hit. Finally, apparently getting frustrated, it jabbed at Zero using the full extents of its strength and speed. The hedgehog leapt straight up into the air, and landed on the robot's thin arm with perfect balance.

"Say good-bye..." Zero said, tightening his fist. "CHAOS BEAM!"

Zero's fist glowed with a strange crimson energy, and he pointed it toward the robot's face. Immediatly after it was aimed, Zero released an extremely powerful beam of energy at the robot. The beam was concentrated into a small area at first, but as Zero tightened his focus, it grew and eventually engulfed not only the robot's head but a portion of its torso! Zero leapt backwards and off the robot's arm, being kept in the air by the Chaos Beam, and letting it grow even larger thus engulfing the entire robot! When Zero landed on the ground, the strange robot was nothing more than a pile of scrap!

"This'll happen to anyone who gets in my way..." Zero muttered under his breath before turning and running away, leaving the people on the streets awe-stricken and scared out of their minds...
 

Momoko Lover

Hop, Skip, Jump!!!
Tylan the Chameleon

As I got closer and closer to Sonic and the others, I noticed a robotic figure.
"What the heck is that?" I said, a little frightened. "No time to explain, just run Tylan!" Knuckles said. "Not without you guys!" I exclaimed. I was thinking that maybe Knuckles is right, maybe I should run, but I didn't want to look like a coward in front of my friends.

"Well, are you leaving or not?" Knuckles asked. "No, if I was leaving, don't you think I would've left already?" I answered, annoyingly. "Well, get ready for a rough ride. "Metal Sonic, here we come!" Knuckles cried.

OOC:This one is short because this is where I finally get to them, and I couldn't really get into this without it being a short scene or whatever you want to call it.
 
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Knightblazer

Memories in the Rain
Lucied the Twilight Wolf ©
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Suddenly, "BOOM!" we all crouched down and coverd our ears as the trees exploded out of the blue. What's happening...? I thought to myself. After a few moments, we all cautiously got up, scanning the area for any one. But there was none, until...

"Umm... who is that guy?" I asked, pointing at another Hedgehog who had just appeared through the tress that had been blasted off moments ago. He was, well... metallic all over, and carried a pink blade, and was accompained by a huge group of machines.

"Lucied, quiestions can be asked later. But for now, RUN!" exclaimed Sonic as he grabbed my paw and without a warning, tore at warp Sonic speed. (Not suprising for me, though). The pace just flashed past me. Trees... mountians... lakes, they just flashed past us like a picture book. After a sometime, Sonic suddenly stopped. I got up, looked, and felt my jaw dropped.

I was starring at a HUGE cave, the biggest I had seen. Even the caves in the mountians were tiny compared to this one. But why was I here? Looking around, I could see many trees covering the surroundings. Evidently, this was their secert base.

"We're gonna be here for a while, pal, so make yourself comfortable," said Sonic as he entered the gigantic cave. I then proceeded to gather a pile of leaves and put then in a two sacks; one big, one small, and heaved them into the cave, where it seemed to be a mixture of everything. The X Torando stood at one corner, with a workshop and a couple of gadgets. On another corner was hung a very old and battered punching bag. Things were scattered here and there. Sceleting a spot nerby the enterance. I placed the sacks there, the smaller one on the top of the bigger one. And laid down there, resting after that breath-taking experience.
 
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Xeno Metal Knuckles

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Metal Sonic
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"I would rather not attack me at the moment or you might be killed by my mechs. or by my new weapon. In fact Robotnik feared me when I got this weapon" Metal Sonic said as the blade started shining a bright yellow. "Your precious Master Emerald is gone and your without your super forms. I don't think you stand a chance. If only you knew the powers this blade possessed. I'll let the mechs deal with you." Metal Sonic said as he pointed his sword at Sonic. "I will be the one to kill you...and I will see that it happens. If you were disposed of earlier I would have to go to these extents to kill you" Metal Sonic said as he looked at his mechs as Sonic and the wolf ran off in the distance

"Cowards" Metal Sonic commented as he suddenly looked at the others still here "Now come on and face me if you wish to die" Metal Sonic said as he shot Yellow Orbs out of his sword to 2 of the mechs. They both turned gold as Metal Sonic spinned his blade a bit.."So who wants to fight me first." Metal Sonic yelled as his eyes narrowed in thirst for death. "If any of you interrupts my two Super Mechs will be glad to kill you" He said as he held his sword in one hand and got ready to fight.
 

Raposa Dalua

<-Awesomeness
Tails
Rikki

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Rikki had just gotten used to the bold, glorious feeling of standing on her own two feet when she suddenly found herself on the ground again, her face smushed neatly against the dirt. Some stranger had just stopped himself from a full on crash with her, but there was enough momentum to cause the absent minded girl to stumble forward. She backed into a kneeling position, her hands supporting her front as she shook her head rapidly. Again, the dazed feeling took a few seconds to wear off, but several knocks to the head could do little to worsen her already quite severe brain damage. Once her head was cleared, she flipped herself over so that she was sitting cross-legged about ten inches or so from where Streak stood.

"Oh, e-excuse me Miss," he stuttered out, "Sorry to b-bump into you like that."

Her emerald eyes narrowed as she observed the rather embarrassed hybrid. Two tails, awkward hedgehog spikes that seemed to curve away from each other, and the familiar scent of a sibling drifted about this odd creature. Rikki wasn't quite able to place that he was another clone, but there were enough vague clues to tell her that he at least knew Robotnik somehow, someway. But whenever she tried to figure it out, the thought slipped away from her. This didn't bother her much, however, as she simply chose to sit there and smile.

"Well, no hard feelings, right? I can always kill ya later," she replied in a tone that would seem totally innocent yet creepy at the same time, "I'm Rikki by the way. What's your name, Mr. I-Run-Into-People-'Cause-It's-Fun?"

If Streak replied, she wouldn't have heard it, for the minute she had finished speaking a mass of mechanical beasts decided to make itself known. Its leader, a metallic hedgehog bearing a strong resemblance to Sonic ordered that the group be destroyed. This type of destroying was most likely to be swift and brutal.

"That's the meanie who hurt my uncle, it has to be," she murmured, and though she sounded angry, a bright smile still adorned her face, "If the others are going to run, then I'm staying here to hold some of the mechs off."

She whisked out the boomerangs from the chain belt hanging loosely around her waist. With a swift 'whirr' sound, the slicing beams locked into position, ready to slice and dice. She let fly the one in her left hand, emerald eyes flicking back as her ear twitched, indicating an enemy coming from behind. She flipped back, landing on top of the Eggbot. She drove her right hand through the central core, the blades on her boomerang slicing through the essential wiring quite nicely. Just as she was pulling the right boomerang back out, she reached out with her left hand and caught the other one, which had just come flinging back after dealing out its own carnage. She stood, holding the wiring of the destroyed mecha and beginning to spin around with it. The fox used the momentum of the spin to lift the mecha off the ground and throw it at a nearby robot, the extra weight crushing it into the ground. She sighed happily, and went out to take her next victim.

Tails himself was having a fairly difficult time. It had been quite awhile since he fought anything without his handy mecha somewhere nearby, and he was currently cursing himself for not bringing it along. His blue eyes darted left and right as he began to teach himself all the old tricks he used for beating down baddies. Spindash into one robot, ricochet into the next, uncurl, tail slash, repeat. He soon became a swirling whirlwind of death, cutting into robots and letting their ruptured energy cores do the rest. In this case, the battle certainly was brains over brawn, as he dodged over and under the lasers of the robots, which in turn struck other robots.
 
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Shadowcat

Guest
OOC: You guys post too fast...

BiC:

Amy Rose

"I'm shopping, and I'm so bored... Oh my gosh! That's a Topaz Necklace! Give me that, charge it to my credit card!" Amy said to the cashier, giving the cashier her credit card.

"Now, what should I do?" Amy asked herself, with the shopping bags by her side. She carried them at left the shopping mall, her credit card maxed out. Amy then saw the mysterious hedgehog running around town, just destroying a robot.

"TAXI!" Amy shouted, calling for a taxi.

"What do you want?" The driver asked.

"FOLLOW THAT HEDGEHOG!" Amy screamed, wanting to catch up with the myserious hedgehog running around town.

"Lady! Through my twenty years of driving, I wanted someone to say something like that!" The taxi driver said happily.

"JUST CHASE THAT HEDGEHOG! AT TOP SPEED!" Amy yelled, and the taxi driver soon chasing the hedgehog at top speed. Amy opened the window, and got ready to shout at the hedgehog.

"YOU THERE! STOP!" Amy shouted, pointing towards the mysterious hedgehog, Zero, who just destroyed a robot and was scaring the people.

OOC: I don't know where everyone is...... Just say I met up with Zero.
 
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Xeno Metal Knuckles

Guest
OOC: well...your not missing much...

Metal Sonic
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"Medding in my plans...no matter I brought reiforcements." Metal Sonic said in a serious tone. Super Mechs started appearing from behind Metal Sonic and they surrounded the group..I think your familiar with Super Forms..well thats how powerful these bots are..your doomed. There is no chance for you to live if you can't turn super..now enough with the meddling..I wanted a challenge and I will get one. If I have to kill all of you to get to Sonic I will do so" Metal Sonic said as he twirled his blade and aimed it towards the group.

Metal Sonic shot lasers out of his eyes and they hit Rikki and Metal Sonic laughed. "You are one pathetic creation of Robotnik. Iam his ultimate creation and you are only at the mid tier of creations. you have no chance at fighting me." Metal Sonic said as he rushed towards Rikki and grabbed her. He pointed his sword at Rikki's neck and narrowed his eyes. he threw her towards a mech and the mech caught her and kept her from breaking free. then Rikki some how broke free and lunged towards Metal Sonic. He blocked her fish with his hand and then pushed her away as he laughed.
 

bronislav84

I <3 Catgirls
OOC: This is absolute CHAOS, people. No pun intened.

Has anybody noticed that the RP is going way too fast with the bad guy revealing himself right from the start?

Forget the bad guy revealing himelf, what about the plot changing and forcing everybody to post so much? At this rate, how are people gonna get to sleep and not worry about their characters getting killed?

Xeno, please check your PMs.


Raposa Dalua and ~xXSapphireXx~: It's not really a good idea to use the name of a character until they actually introduce themselves. Just a note.

IC: Streak, Shadow

She introduced herself as Rikku, and then jumped into the fray. I only had a few seconds to yell out my name before the lazers came from all directions. I jumped around to avoid the shots, and wished I had a Chaos Emerald for Chaos Control. I looked in Shadow's direction, and saw that he was already using Homing Attack on some of the bots. Where the heck were they coming from, anyway?

Then I looked around and saw that a metalic Hedgehog had appeared with a sword. some of the others were calling him Metal Sonic, so I found out his name pretty quickly. Pulling out Green Destiny, I jabbed it into the insides of the nearest robot, and then twisted it around for good measure. there seemed to be no end to theme, and he just called in more. I sighed, and just continued slasing and punching the horde of bots, trying to get to those Gold ones.

Suddenly, I sensed somebody was behind, and saw that it was another one with a Lance, trying to jab me. A punch sent him spiralling into a tree in a heap of metalic scrap. After slashing a few more down the middle, I made it to one of the Gold ones.

"So, this is the supposed Gold Robot? Ha!" I said, and tried to slash him vertically down the middle with my Sword.

He dodged and tried to shoot his blaster at me. Man, it seems that ray Metal has makes these hunks of junk smarter. I then ran around him and attacked ina flury of punches, and he was reduced to scrap.
 
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Xeno Metal Knuckles

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OOC: I have noticed the increase in speed...perhaps it wasn't smart to make this Rpg...

The Rules state that you are not allowed to kill someone off without there permission...so I can't kill them.

My plots tend to start fast but they slow down over time...(Ive seen it happen before)

This Post might slow down the plot making everyone relax about the issue.

Metal Sonic
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"Iam tired of this senseless medling...I'll let you live..but mark my words you will be suffering soon enough."Metal Sonic said as the Mechs started flying off. Metal Sonic flew off along with the mechs back to the base. "They are lucky they are getting a break. I could of killed them but it will be more fun to make them suffer slowly." Metal Sonic said as he went inside the base and glared at the computer.

"Report on current statis of the location of Sonic" Metal Sonic demanded as he set his blade down on a table and looked at the computer. "Location: Hidden Base hidden deep in the forest. no other data available" The Computer said as Metal Sonic's Eyes narrowed in disgust. "I'll never be able to find Sonic at this rate" Metal Sonic said as he looked at his blade. "Iam still not at full power..." Metal Sonic declared as he went into deep thought.

OOC: No fighting and no being worried about your character.
 

Tiana_M

Espeon Hybrid
OOC: I second what Bron said earlier. Xeno, I know you created this Rp but, you've got too many reinforcements, the magic sword making super robots is a bit much, and you could try to make your posts a little more in-depth by adding feelings and other stuff to make the posts longer than two paragraphs each.

And KnightBlazer, Sonic never ever runs from fights. And so far both metal and the original have ended up doing so. This is not very true to the Sonic I remember.
 
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Xeno Metal Knuckles

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OOC: I'll lay off the Magic stuff but the sword is a key role in the Plot....and about the posts I'll make them longer...(Just tired right now...but that is no excuse for me to godmod....)
 

bronislav84

I <3 Catgirls
OOC: This will just tie in after my little fight scene that I added.

That's fine, Xeno. I was just worried that this RP might fail for a while there.

IC:
Streak, Shadow

"He's....leaving?" asked Shadow of no-one in particular, standing amoung a pile of wrecked robos.

After the smoke cleared, Metal was flying off on some kind of Jetpack, and I was standing with robot wires on my claws, and two Gold robots on top of a small pile of normal ones.

OOC: I'm tired. Let's pick up normally tomorrow. Oh, and I edited in a fight into that post. I hope it's okay with people.
 
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Shadowcat

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OOC: Xeno Metal Knuckles, you should put up a discussion thread. I shall not be posting again until the introductions are done.

BiC:

Amy Rose

The mysterious hedgehog ran away, ignoring Amy's shouts. Amy was really ticked off at his attitude. He was like another Sonic.

"HEY YOU! COME BACK HERE WHATEVER YOUR NAME IS! HEY! COME BACK!" Amy shouted angrily at the Hedgehog.

"DRIVER! FOLLOW THAT HEDGEHOG! AT TOP SPEED!" Amy yelled at the driver, who immediately nodded, scared of Amy. The mysterious hedgehog ran away, the driver tried to chase him, but failed to do so, as he was too fast.

"ARGH! MISTER DRIVER! WOULD YOU JUST FOLLOW THAT HEDGEHOG AS FAST AS YOU CAN?! NOW WE LOST HIM!" Amy screamed at the driver.

OOC: Amy shouting part... Pure anger... Anyways, is Chris, still in the RP, but as a NPC? If not, where do we live? Amy is the girl who doesn't live on the streets...
 
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