A Warriors Story - I like the ye olde feel to it. Reminds me a bit of Solstice's Blackthorne and Forefather's When Our England Died. Vocals are pretty good, if not a little strained at times. I like it though.
A Mhionn Fola - This is harder due to it being less of a finished product unlike the track above which sounds as good as finished. Definitely needs some mixing work doing. Vocals far too loud in the mix. And you have to watch your noise floor when recording, there's so much background noise in your vocal recording that it feels like two completely unrelated things playing at the same time. This coupled with them being far too loud really doesn't work. Riff wise it's alright, the tone is too clean sounding productionwise, as I say it's clear it was recorded separately to the vocals. The folky bit is ok though, quite a nice way to end the song.
Ultimate Bravery - Same as above really.
Certainly has promise. And your folk sections are probably better than your metal sections, but that's probably down to them sounding finished unlike the other bits.
Just reading the comments on facebook, your mate Tim is an idiot. Since when has The shitter the Better been a good thing? A Demo is supposed to draw attention to you band and make them stand out. Back in the early days of black metal, you know why Bathory, Hellhammer, Early Mayhem demo's had poor production? Because it's the best they could afford/achieve back then. Compare Twilight God's to Under the kThe Return, the production has increased significantly, so it clearly wasn't Quorthon sounding kvlt for the fun of it.
If the technology, is there, use it.
He also sounds like such a poser, "I like it... I guess that comes from listening to ALOT of black metal demos though " as if he's sayign 'ooh look at me aren't I cool, I've heard black metal demo's.'
Well so have I, and I own black metal demo's, and let me tell you, they don't all sound like ****.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I_nT3ieNlag
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lp1Z3Wp777U
I can't find it on youtube, but Old Corpse Road's Echoes of Tales Once Told Demo is another.
And even this
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I5f1GVcOskA
which is a harsher recording, still sounds good cause it's mixed and recorded properly.
But keep at it, there's certainly potential.