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Metroid Prime Hunters

Zora

perpetually tired
Rating-My guess about PG-13, but I need an answer from an expert.
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Metroid Prime Hunters

Table of Contents
0 The Seven Hunters

Prologue:
Galactic Federation Report 45635
Estimated Speed: Fast
Mission: After Aran, Samus cleared away Tallon IV from Space Pirates a mysterious distress call came. With the fall of the Impact Crater, the distress call was not able to interpret. This data needs to be brought to Galactic Federation headquarters. The distress call has been located in Research Lab Aether in the icy slopes of Phendrana Drifts.

Chapter Zero: The Seven Hunters
Tallon IV orbit 12:30 AM Day 1
Samus made her desperate return to the Tallon IV, in order to retrieve the distress call at research lab Aether. However she decided to take a little shortcut in land at the entrance of Space Pirates Research lab. She noticed that the turrets were active. She then used two missiles to destroy them. She spoke in here microphone that wrapped around her cheek. She said “This is Samus Aran. The station is active; I repeat the station is active.” Samus then jumped over the broken bridge that once linked the landing platform and the lab together. As she entered though she noticed that no space pirate was around, but the turrets were active.


Research Lab Aether 1:45 AM Day 1
A space pirate said “Our old leader has been wounded by the evil one. However the great Weavel will rise again, with his apprentice Kanden will protect Weavel and-" Then the tank that Kanden was in exploded. Another Space pirate said “Warning, his final adjustment has not been complete. Then a red figure hiding above said “You species framed me. You will not separate me from my home without a fight.” Then the red figure tried to leave when the door opened. A different space pirate said “it is Samus Aran. Use the back exit. Then Kanden used his weapon which reveled a cave and he left by turning into a worm. The Space Pirate’s locked the door on the way out. The red figure said “I better thank Kanden for this.” He or she had a grin on his or her face as he or she left. Samus then put on her scan visor and looked around. Then she scanned a computer with different attributes. Her scan visor said “Corrupted call picked up. Location: Impact Crater pit. Samus said “There is more then this then what was thought. I need reinforcements at the Impact crater pit.


Impact Crater Pit 6:02 Day 1
After Samus left her ship to go to the Impact Crater Pit she settled in the foggy valley. She said “What is this peculiar fog.” The Galactic Federation ship landed as Galactic Federation troops left. They all searched around until one said “Hey over-” Then a beam hit him sending him into an abyss. He said “What is this blue?” Then the connection went out. She said “Don’t move. It is phazon. This pit is centered around Phazon Mines. Then the thing that shot him dropped it started shooting more Galactic Troops. Samus was shot but survived from hiding beneath a rock. She went unconscious for a few seconds why the mysterious thing went into a ship that Samus saw flying. She jumped into her ship and chased after it.


An icy planet in the Alimbic Cluster 13:57 Day 1

The red figure said “Noxus I have caused the Space Pirates to leave at there Phendrana research lab.” Noxus on top of an ice pillar said “My gods have told me what to do. They told me to destroy to prevent you from having the ultimate power.” The red figure said “What ultimate power?” Noxus wasted no time and targeted the red figure. The red figure went into his ship and flew off. Noxus jumped into his ship and chased after him or her. He said “Trace you fool, working for me is going to be your last and final mistake.”

Tallon IV 14:01 Day 1

Kanden said “Over twelve hours of searching and I find my missing equipment. What is this? “Your master will have asked by this time to collect the ultimate power.” Kanden said “I have no master.” Then in the cave a very different Space Pirate appeared. He said “So you are just now a failed experiment. I will get the power my self. I don’t need you anymore.” Then the cave started to collapse, Kanden gathered whatever he could and took off in a ship that was also there. The Space Pirate on the other end left through a special tunnel. When he emerged back on Phendrana drifts he said “Weavel you fool, you could have killed him.” Then he signaled for his ship to fly and left Tallon IV in hopes of finding Kanden.

Rocky Summit in the Alimbic Cluster 14:06 Day 1

After hunting for his tribe, Spire returned home to find it in ruins. He dropped his fresh lunch and rushed to see what was wrong. Then he started to roll down a hill that was near him. At the bottom he ran into a helmet of a Galactic Federation troop. He then said “I will destroy thee.” Then he left to the secret lab of the Solid Rock People. There he put the helmet in a scanner and initiated a scanning program. The program took about ten seconds until it said “Positive Corporation Match are as followed: Galactic Federation. Finger prints also indicate a creature that’s not in the SRP archive.” Spire said my mission is clear.




Chapter 1: Octolith's

Space 15:03 Day 1
Noxus was red hot on Trace's tale. Trace connected to Noxus's ship by wireless communication. Trace said "Why destroy my about something I don't need to no about?" Noxus started to reply until both ships flew by a planet. A message said "The fottress- it has been destroyed. All Aether-" the communication lagged for a bit and when it caught up the blend of old and new words from the lag caused more of a delay in the message. But it countinued after a while. "Talk to him. The one. Our energy is out here. Please they have taken over. This last haven is destroyed." Noxus drifted off from Trace and said "This planat isn't right. One is dark with curses, the other is light with blessing. I have heard of a yen-yang planet but this is unmatched by any planat." Trace flew off and said "On this map there is a planat. I will make my way there." Trace shut off his communication so Noxus shouldn't used it. As Trace neared his destination he saw two other ships. Trace said "What is that Orange ship and that Blue ship-"


Space 15:32 Day 1

Samus was flying her so-called orange ship until she noticed the red ship that was just floating in Space. Samus has gotten herself into too much trouble already from not defending her federation from the attack. However she should have also payed attention to the rocky planat they were flying by to see another ship coming. It was very big and rocky. Samus turned her ship around and juiced up her ship. She knew that if she lingered, she would be destroyed. The rock ship followed Samus's ship. Samus connected to the Galactic Federation and said "This is Aran, Samus. We have been attacked by one creature and another I presume is folling us." The Galactic Federation said. "Make refuge on the technical planat Revera. You can easily hide there. Go to sector 768934 and the password is 67854"


Mystery Planat's Orbit 15:49 Day 1

Noxus said "After scanning this planat there are no Octolith's. I better get going. Then he turned around and left he said "I should go to the center of the Alimbic Cluster. Work my way out to find the ultimate power."


Revera 17:08 Day 1
Samus said to the door and noticed a panal and typed in five numbers, 6-7-8-5-4. The door opened and Samus said "I am one of the Galactic Federation." A trooper came put and said "She is the famous hunter, Samus Aran." Samus stepped in and closed the door. The same trooper said "Your ship is on auto-fly and going into our secret landing platform. Samus said "Okay, I need to be save. By the way, where are the beds. Staying up for fifthteen hours straight is harder then you think. The trooper said "Third floor to the left."


Center of the Alimbic Cluster 18:56 Day 1
Noxus said "My scanner is picking up Octolith's left and right. But I will stick to my plan. No need to wonder off. Wait is that a lava filled planet. Dang it. I hate heat." But Noxus landed anyways on some dried lava. He then ran off hoping from dry lava to dry lava, heading for an Octolith.

Revera Galactic Federation Base 19:26 Day 1
An alarm woke the almost everyone up. When Samus got up she said "Wait I need to review the distress call. She went into to nearest computer and used her cannon to but the data in by linking up to a Galactic Federation USB port. The data picked up this information. "Our fottress is gone. They- message terminated, message terminated..." The computer kept saying that.


Revera Mechanical Highway 19:31
While Samus downloaded the work, the Galactic Federation troops were busy going on there flying combat bikes. They hovered over the ground about two feet. They then left to go on a the Mechanical Highway. After about five minutes they passed by another person or creature. Three of them turned around the other went to scan the area. The three troops who were on the other person's tale said "Who are you?" The pirate grinned and said "Weavel the Space Pirate." The trooper said "I hate Space Pirates. They have there head infused with their body and there right arm has that yellow blade. And the wires that go over their head make them look mechanical. And their black makes them look even more evil." Weavel said "Do I look like that?" The trooper said "Put the head down, remover the armor, and get some wires and blade and you are set." Weavel then turned his bike around and took out a gun and shot at the three bikes causing them to explode. Weavel said "Don't ever say rude things about a space pirate again."


(Chapter to be countinued)
 
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lil_erago

What...am...I...?
Good idea but not a lot of description, like the surrounding area what the space pirates look like (not everyone knows what or who they are). But otherwise I think it's very good, with original way of showing e.g Tallon IV 14:01 Day 1
 

Zora

perpetually tired
Chapter 1 part 2

Revera Galactic Hideout 19:33 PM Day 1

The alarm said "Red alert, Red alert." Samus said "What in the world was that! "Metroids have invaded. Metroids have invaded." Smaus said simple I can take this way out." Then the alarm said "Space Pirate invaded main entrance..." Samus said "Space Pirate or Metroids. I will go with Metroids-" The alarm said "Ten minutes until explosion." Samus said "My life gets easier everyday."

Revera Glactic Hideout Back Exit 19:34 PM Day 1
Samus jumped down and went through the blue door she noticed a lot of metroids floating around not giving a care. She said "Well lets deal with them." Samus shoot all of them and the door opened. She said "Well all I have to do is keep one step ahead." She ran through the rooms defeating enemies on the way. Enventually she stepped into a room. She saw a black four-legged monster, but before she could get a good scan of it, it went through the walls. Then out came another Samus, but with green armor." Samus said "What the?" The green Samus shoot at her, but samus managed to Scan it.

ING Project 0986 Prototype
Weak-spot-Helm.

Samus took out her gun and shoot a missle at the prototype. Then the wall fell and the landing bay was revealed. However one thing stood out beside her ship-a eight sided greenish stone. She quickly grabbed it and jumped into her ship. The Galactic Federation base collapesed behind her. From an explosion.

Destroyed Galactic Federation Revera Base

"Cough, Cough," coughed Weavel. He said "I survived that explosion. Who planted it. I didn't. I would of left anyways." Then he saw a blue figure on top some rubble. He picked up Galactic Federation helmets. Weavel took out his gun and pointed at him and said "What are you doing?" The blue figure said "I am simply gathering framing items." Weavel said "What are going to frame." The blue figure said "Not what, but who. I frame people and destroy the galactic federation." He turned around and shot at Weavel's pelvis, but his torso lifted up and his legs lowered and the bullet went right through the two parts of Weavel. The blue figure said "Sylux, you idiot. You could of got him." Then Sylux dropped his 'framing items' and left through his space ship. Then Trace dropped down and said "It is revenge time."

Lava filled planat-Alimbic Core 00:02 AM Day 2

Noxus said "I found one. An octolith. One of the eight sided greenish stones!"

Galactic Federation Headquarters 00:37 Day 2
Samus said "I am arriving." A trooper said "Aren't you supposed to be at Revera." Samus said "The base was destroyed." The trooper said "Who?" Samus said "A space pirate I presume. But I found two important pieces of information. I must go to the research lab." The trooper said "Right away sir." Samus said "It is ma'am."

(Chapter to be countinued)
 
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