Okay. Now, can we keep this thread from becoming a discussion about grammar? PLEASE?
Anyways a repost so has the same errors, so if that bugs you, sorry, I've been too busy atm to go through and use spellcheck to correct grammar issues and typos. It's called Life and it hits as hard as an oxygen tank to da head. And same reason as before for it being posted: because someone claims I stole my rp idea from another user/their story. >.> nice. Plaugirism claims.
Repost: Because someone was an *** and rated this one star. Get a life ***. Anyways rating this 5 so even if an *** downrates it it's still 3 and probably where the stars belong anyways.
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Chapter One
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To many he was a god. Immortal. Everlasting. But to two, he had been a mate, and would have been a father. But thanks to the greed of man, he lost the people that worshiped and protected him, and the last mews. He really did not need protection, for he was immortal. But his mate. The last coloney of mews were slaughtered, and Axel was left to mourn this for many years.
For the sin of killing, and touching the shed blood of his mate and child as he avenged them, Axel's once pristine white fur drained to a dark, malevolent black. His paws became blood red, as did the end of his tail. Stripes of red ran down his back, proclaiming this Mew, that had once been pure and innocent to evil; Had both seen it and commited the acts of sin.
For long years that stretched into eternity, he wasted away. But never could die for how could an immortal perish? It wasn't as if he hadn't tried. But without him, the world could fall into chaos. So he stayed, drifting across time, enveying Celebi for the time travelers ability to skip through time, to see both past and future. But much like him, bound to this path and unable to do anything to change events to a more favorable outcome. What was, was. What would be, was unknown, for Celebi could niether speak, nor act on what he knew.
His sorrow was as haunting to him as the songs of the Lugia in the ocean. His fury had dulled over the years. For no matter how much he wanted to hate humans, the sins of the few, did not sin the many. And he was already being punished for shedding the blood of what sinners he had already slain.
He was prepared to spend eternity alone with occasional contact from other psychic legends, as he stayed in a mountain far from most. Deep in the waters there, sleeping for decades at a time. Trying to bide his time untill the world would end and he would be released, and finally not be alone anymore.
But years stretched on, and on. Blurring into decades. Centuries. Nearly a millenia.
And then the mew was shaken from his latest slumber by a tickle of something. Something so old he had long since forgotten what it was. And for a whole year it tickled the back of his mind, and it wasn't untill the mental scream came over him did Axel know what, and who it was. But by then it was too late to save her.
But the child!
Somehow they had been brought back to life, his mate was gone, he had realised it to slowly. But in his grief he felt the strong pull of the child. It still lived! His heart felt like it was starting to beat again. The child was alive, and he felt the life force it was giving off very well.
With an extra burst of energy he burst out of the water and zoomed off, heading towards the signal, so quick in trying to get there, he forgot to call out to his child, to tell it he was coming.
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Axel may have been a Mew. And he might have been a god. But still he had his limits. He had to venture half way around the earth to where he felt the cry was coming, and that took time he had little paitience for. As he had to keep himself from being seen by humans. He had to keep his energy up enough to fly, meaning resting atleast once a day, for hiding himself from sight took alot of energy too.
He feared he'd be to late to where he felt the child's energy. And he nearly was.
Axel found himself hovering over an island, far off the coast of the closet land mass, Kanto. A volcano that lay dormand showed how it had come to be in this place, and small houses marked it was inhabited by humans. A lush tropical forest that once evidently covered the whole island now lay in small patches and dots. And amongst the ugly scars against the beautiful green, lay a large mansion like building, and the signals were coming from that, and strongly.
Circling in the air a moment, he dipped down and headed for the building, and just as he was getting to it, explosions rocked the building. Tearing holes in it and sending up pillars of flame and smoke. An increddible ammount of rage, hatred and loathing swept through the air after it, Axel found himself disorintated. What was causing this?
Axel only discovered the cause as he came in lower, spotting humans in white outfits screaming and running for their life. And chasing after them was then ball of malice and hate. Screams of terror filled the air as the door they had just fled through seemed to be torn right off it's hinges. A loud roar thundered across the open land before the trees the scientists fled towards muffled the sound to anything beyond it.
The being was tall, maybe nearly six feet in hieght. It's fur was a soft cream like color. it stood on two strong hindlegs that ended in a stretched out hind foot, and at the end three large clawed toes dug into the earth, while a fourth dewclaw like one lay a bit higher up than those. A long bulbed ending tail of amythist swished back and forth behind the enraged creature, as the five fingered hands clasped and the horned head was thrown back as another cry of anger escaped it's snarling face. A strong yet thin neck attached the head to the body, while a second, tube like growth attached to the back of the head and attached to the body just between the shoulders. It seemed like eather a mistake, or a possible support to the other neck.
But it didn't matter whichever it was for, as it just seemed to help add to the appearence and feeling that this was a monster that wanted to slaughter everything.
It seemed to understand the scientists were trying to flee from it, and it drew an arm up, black energy forming into a ball at it's fingertips before it was thrown with great force towards the escaping humans. They screamed again, sure that this would be their pace of death.
That is, it would be if Axel hadn't shown up.
A large barrier apeared between the humans and the lethal attack, and while there was an explosion and Axel wondered if he would come to regret saving the humans later, for now the attack had been stopped. And Axel now had the duty to protect them and everything else from the monster.
‘YOU!’ It screamed, spotting Axel as the dust cleared, and the mew's blood red ears twitched as he heard the gasps coming from behind him when the humans realised what had exactly saved them all from certain death. Though his attention was dragged away from that as the monster screamed another cry of ‘you’ and charged him, another glistening ball of dark violet and ebony energy crackling and snapping to life in the five fingered hand as it flew through the air in an arc towards Axel.
He didn't know or understand how the creature had come so close to him in the span of a few seconds. With it so close he couldn't throw up a barrier, and trying to attack would only cause him to be harmed also. Leaving Axel's only option: avoiding the attack all together.
Tumbling through the air with a squeak like mew, Axel avoid the attack. His red striped ebony body gleaming from the few bright flickers of light that came off the orb of dark energy. A grunt came from the monster as the hand and attack slammed into the ground, for a second nothing happened. Then it seemed the world exploded and the earth screamed in pain as it sandy soil was sent upwards and out around like some parody of smoke, pelting all with small rocks, broken turf and soil.
The monster grinned, bearing sharpened fang like teeth to the world as it hissed in victory, tail snapping back and forth as it eyed the cowering humans several yards away. Growling like some demon it started to advance, eyes begining to glow once more-
And with no warning a black and red shape bursts out of the ground, a snarl on it's face as blood red ears were pinned against it's head. With barely a sound outside of a loud crack of bone striking bone, the Mew landed a very strong headbutt attack against the monster.
It realed backwards, crying out in pain the creature stumbled back. It whimpered, holding a slowly healing jaw as violet eyes glared out at the smaller, more agile one with hate. ‘You,’ it seethed out, speaking for the first time. ‘I will destroy you! I your shadow will surpass you Mew!’
Axel's blue eyes grew round from shock and surprise. No, no this couldn't be. This just could not be! But as the anger and rage washed over him, Axel felt the faint tug of the familiar feeling that had been drawing him here all along. And all he could do, was stare in shock and horror, at what had become of his child.
What had those humans done to his baby?
Anyways a repost so has the same errors, so if that bugs you, sorry, I've been too busy atm to go through and use spellcheck to correct grammar issues and typos. It's called Life and it hits as hard as an oxygen tank to da head. And same reason as before for it being posted: because someone claims I stole my rp idea from another user/their story. >.> nice. Plaugirism claims.
Repost: Because someone was an *** and rated this one star. Get a life ***. Anyways rating this 5 so even if an *** downrates it it's still 3 and probably where the stars belong anyways.
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Chapter One
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To many he was a god. Immortal. Everlasting. But to two, he had been a mate, and would have been a father. But thanks to the greed of man, he lost the people that worshiped and protected him, and the last mews. He really did not need protection, for he was immortal. But his mate. The last coloney of mews were slaughtered, and Axel was left to mourn this for many years.
For the sin of killing, and touching the shed blood of his mate and child as he avenged them, Axel's once pristine white fur drained to a dark, malevolent black. His paws became blood red, as did the end of his tail. Stripes of red ran down his back, proclaiming this Mew, that had once been pure and innocent to evil; Had both seen it and commited the acts of sin.
For long years that stretched into eternity, he wasted away. But never could die for how could an immortal perish? It wasn't as if he hadn't tried. But without him, the world could fall into chaos. So he stayed, drifting across time, enveying Celebi for the time travelers ability to skip through time, to see both past and future. But much like him, bound to this path and unable to do anything to change events to a more favorable outcome. What was, was. What would be, was unknown, for Celebi could niether speak, nor act on what he knew.
His sorrow was as haunting to him as the songs of the Lugia in the ocean. His fury had dulled over the years. For no matter how much he wanted to hate humans, the sins of the few, did not sin the many. And he was already being punished for shedding the blood of what sinners he had already slain.
He was prepared to spend eternity alone with occasional contact from other psychic legends, as he stayed in a mountain far from most. Deep in the waters there, sleeping for decades at a time. Trying to bide his time untill the world would end and he would be released, and finally not be alone anymore.
But years stretched on, and on. Blurring into decades. Centuries. Nearly a millenia.
And then the mew was shaken from his latest slumber by a tickle of something. Something so old he had long since forgotten what it was. And for a whole year it tickled the back of his mind, and it wasn't untill the mental scream came over him did Axel know what, and who it was. But by then it was too late to save her.
But the child!
Somehow they had been brought back to life, his mate was gone, he had realised it to slowly. But in his grief he felt the strong pull of the child. It still lived! His heart felt like it was starting to beat again. The child was alive, and he felt the life force it was giving off very well.
With an extra burst of energy he burst out of the water and zoomed off, heading towards the signal, so quick in trying to get there, he forgot to call out to his child, to tell it he was coming.
-
Axel may have been a Mew. And he might have been a god. But still he had his limits. He had to venture half way around the earth to where he felt the cry was coming, and that took time he had little paitience for. As he had to keep himself from being seen by humans. He had to keep his energy up enough to fly, meaning resting atleast once a day, for hiding himself from sight took alot of energy too.
He feared he'd be to late to where he felt the child's energy. And he nearly was.
Axel found himself hovering over an island, far off the coast of the closet land mass, Kanto. A volcano that lay dormand showed how it had come to be in this place, and small houses marked it was inhabited by humans. A lush tropical forest that once evidently covered the whole island now lay in small patches and dots. And amongst the ugly scars against the beautiful green, lay a large mansion like building, and the signals were coming from that, and strongly.
Circling in the air a moment, he dipped down and headed for the building, and just as he was getting to it, explosions rocked the building. Tearing holes in it and sending up pillars of flame and smoke. An increddible ammount of rage, hatred and loathing swept through the air after it, Axel found himself disorintated. What was causing this?
Axel only discovered the cause as he came in lower, spotting humans in white outfits screaming and running for their life. And chasing after them was then ball of malice and hate. Screams of terror filled the air as the door they had just fled through seemed to be torn right off it's hinges. A loud roar thundered across the open land before the trees the scientists fled towards muffled the sound to anything beyond it.
The being was tall, maybe nearly six feet in hieght. It's fur was a soft cream like color. it stood on two strong hindlegs that ended in a stretched out hind foot, and at the end three large clawed toes dug into the earth, while a fourth dewclaw like one lay a bit higher up than those. A long bulbed ending tail of amythist swished back and forth behind the enraged creature, as the five fingered hands clasped and the horned head was thrown back as another cry of anger escaped it's snarling face. A strong yet thin neck attached the head to the body, while a second, tube like growth attached to the back of the head and attached to the body just between the shoulders. It seemed like eather a mistake, or a possible support to the other neck.
But it didn't matter whichever it was for, as it just seemed to help add to the appearence and feeling that this was a monster that wanted to slaughter everything.
It seemed to understand the scientists were trying to flee from it, and it drew an arm up, black energy forming into a ball at it's fingertips before it was thrown with great force towards the escaping humans. They screamed again, sure that this would be their pace of death.
That is, it would be if Axel hadn't shown up.
A large barrier apeared between the humans and the lethal attack, and while there was an explosion and Axel wondered if he would come to regret saving the humans later, for now the attack had been stopped. And Axel now had the duty to protect them and everything else from the monster.
‘YOU!’ It screamed, spotting Axel as the dust cleared, and the mew's blood red ears twitched as he heard the gasps coming from behind him when the humans realised what had exactly saved them all from certain death. Though his attention was dragged away from that as the monster screamed another cry of ‘you’ and charged him, another glistening ball of dark violet and ebony energy crackling and snapping to life in the five fingered hand as it flew through the air in an arc towards Axel.
He didn't know or understand how the creature had come so close to him in the span of a few seconds. With it so close he couldn't throw up a barrier, and trying to attack would only cause him to be harmed also. Leaving Axel's only option: avoiding the attack all together.
Tumbling through the air with a squeak like mew, Axel avoid the attack. His red striped ebony body gleaming from the few bright flickers of light that came off the orb of dark energy. A grunt came from the monster as the hand and attack slammed into the ground, for a second nothing happened. Then it seemed the world exploded and the earth screamed in pain as it sandy soil was sent upwards and out around like some parody of smoke, pelting all with small rocks, broken turf and soil.
The monster grinned, bearing sharpened fang like teeth to the world as it hissed in victory, tail snapping back and forth as it eyed the cowering humans several yards away. Growling like some demon it started to advance, eyes begining to glow once more-
And with no warning a black and red shape bursts out of the ground, a snarl on it's face as blood red ears were pinned against it's head. With barely a sound outside of a loud crack of bone striking bone, the Mew landed a very strong headbutt attack against the monster.
It realed backwards, crying out in pain the creature stumbled back. It whimpered, holding a slowly healing jaw as violet eyes glared out at the smaller, more agile one with hate. ‘You,’ it seethed out, speaking for the first time. ‘I will destroy you! I your shadow will surpass you Mew!’
Axel's blue eyes grew round from shock and surprise. No, no this couldn't be. This just could not be! But as the anger and rage washed over him, Axel felt the faint tug of the familiar feeling that had been drawing him here all along. And all he could do, was stare in shock and horror, at what had become of his child.
What had those humans done to his baby?
End Chapter One
