Mew Sprite

[Mewmie the shiny Mew]

This is my first sprite and I know it's a bit small bit I made it from scratch. Please rate. I made a shiny version, too!
http://i22.*******.com/u0dxf.png
http://i22.*******.com/2uszzuv.png
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[Sird]

It is quite unique. 8/10. But the tail is a little too big.

 

[Mewmie the shiny Mew]

Sorry. I always thought Mew looked cuter with a bigger tail.
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[Skarigon]

8.5/10

Tail is Humungus.

 

[blazikenBAM]

the tail is big, but it suits it well :3

i really like the pose. it's very original. the only things you could change are:
-the tail is pointy-ish. round out the tip maybe
-where the back leg connects to the body, you don't need that little curved line, or at least make it less pronounced.

good job!

 

[Sird]

the tail is big, but it suits it well :3

i really like the pose. it's very original. the only things you could change are:
-the tail is pointy-ish. round out the tip maybe
-where the back leg connects to the body, you don't need that little curved line, or at least make it less pronounced.

good job!

Not big, but long.

 

[Kyuubi-Chan]

Cute, but like everyone else said; tail is too long.

 

[Mewmie the shiny Mew]

OH! Too LONG! I thought you were all talking about the TIP being too big! My bad. Yeah it is long.
If you look at some official pics or sprites of Mew she does have the curved line, bit I do agree it's a bit too much. and the tip it a bit too pointed. Thanks for the advice! It's my first so I need as much advice as I can get to get better.
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[eeveerose]

its adorable!! the tail make it soo cute! 10/10

 

[Mewmie the shiny Mew]

Thanks! That's how I saw it. I'm happy to get the constructive critisism, too!
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[Sird]

Thanks! That's how I saw it. I'm happy to get the constructive critisism, too!
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A good spriter is one that accepts critisism.

Remember that.

Not like the other thread 'Ransho 2'. Who refuses it.

Why don't you try Celebi and Jirachi? I am sure they would be cool.

 

[Mewmie the shiny Mew]

Thank you! I'm probably happier to get it than most because I know I'm not a perfect spriter because I just began. I think I will try Celebi next.
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[Alzi]

The tail is perfect just make the end of it smaller.

 

[Mewmie the shiny Mew]

Man, I'm so confused! Some people say for it to be shorter, some say it's good. Which should I do?!
Sorry, I'm stressed.
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[BabyLugia]

That's awesome!
It's really cute, especially the shiny one! ^-^

~Lugia~​

 

[Mewmie the shiny Mew]

Thanks! I like the shiny one better too for obvious reasons (my name)
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[Munchy.42]

WOW! First sprite? Thats brilliant. Infact its better than I can scratch now and I've been spriting for a year! But like other peole have said, the tail is a bit too long. Make it shorter and it'll be perfect!

 

[eeveerose]

oh maybe you can do eevee too! ^^ lol

 

[Mewmie the shiny Mew]

Maybe. I'll do multiple sprites but I'm pretty slow so it might be a while.
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[marth271]

I think it looks a bit weird...But i gusse it's okay :-/