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Misty's Miracle - (AAMRN) - (PG-13)

I have informed many of this, and it's finally here. My fanfic entitled, Misty's Miracle.

It has been rated PG - 13. Violence: Hardly any Sex: A little Suggestive Dialouge: A little

It also contains some stuff that you normally wouldn't learn in school until you're at least 13.

Also, I'm not the only one who deserves credit for making this fic possible. Without the help of some, this fanfic wouldn't even of been born. So at the end of each chapter, I will give special thanks to those who deserve it.

Also, I will put in the length of each chapter for those who are serious about it.

Now, here it is: Misty's Miracle.

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Misty's Miracle.

Summary: Ash and Misty have been married for some time, and Misty wants to have kids. However, after failing at even becoming pregnant for so long, they decide to find out what's wrong. When Misty discovers that she has a rare condition that makes it increadably hard for her to become pregnant, and has a good chance at killing the baby if she does, how will she react? And, if she does become pregnant, will the baby survive?

Chapter 1

Length: 2.85 pages.

Our story begins in Pewter City. Here, in the city of stone, a black spike haired man, who is the world famous Pokemon Breeder, known as Brock, is getting married. He is getting married to Suise, a white woman with long dark green hair.

Brock had met Suise a long time ago in a place called Scissor Street. There, she ran her own Pokemon Salon, that was dedicated to making pokemon look beautiful on the inside. Susie was amazed by Brock’s knowledge of Pokemon care, and she gave him her beloved Vulpix, a fox kit Pokemon with six tails. A few years later, they met again. At that point, Susie had decided to enter Vulpix into a beauty contest. It wasn’t until five years after that, that they met up again. At that time, Ash, a tanned, black hair man, who was also at the wedding, had just become the Pokemon Master of the world. Susie didn’t recognize Brock right away, but Vupix did. It didn’t take long after Vulpix had jumped into Brock’s arms for Susie to realize just who she was looking at. In fact, Brock had grown a good amount of a beard, which is why Susie didn’t recognize him. They were dating since.

It is now 3 years after they met, and it’s hard to believe that Susie was marrying Brock. In fact, it was hard to believe that any woman would marry Brock, because of the way he acted in front of pretty girls. It was just down right embarrassing with the way he flirted with them. But there was just something that Susie couldn’t help but love him about. In fact, Brock had asked Susie to marry him 8 months ago. Brock had decided to shave off his beard for this special day.

Among the audience, were some of his best friends. Ash, in a black and white tux, Misty, a red haired girl, who was Ash’s wife, who is also a Water Pokemon master, dressed in a cascade blue, sleeveless, one piece dress, and two Pikachu, medium sized yellow rat Pokemon. Ash’s Pikachu, who was male, only having a black bow tie on, he has had since he started his journey. But Misty, who’s Pikachu was female, nicknamed Pik, wearing only a pink bow in her hair, she has had hers since a time when Ash and Misty were separated, because of duties she had to do at the gym, while her sisters were away on a trip around the world. Misty had found Pik in the basement of the gym, all hurt and covered in dirt. In fact, with how dirty she was, Misty didn’t recognize what pokemon she was, until she got her all cleaned up. She was only going to take care of it for a few weeks, just until she got her strength back, then release her back into the wild. But by that time, they had grown so attached to each other, that Misty decided to keep Pik, but never really use her for battle, as Pik didn’t like that.

A few months after that, Pikachu met Pik at a fair, and was instantly love struck. It was as if, he had never seen such a more beautiful creature in the entire world. Ash had run into Misty at the time, and ended up knocking her over. After she introduced Pik, she noticed the way Pikachu was looking at Pik, and decided that her and Ash should leave Pikachu and Pik alone for a while. They became friends really fast, so fast, it was as if they had met somewhere before, but they didn’t know where.

Ash and Misty have been married for 18 months. He confessed his love to her during the fair that he met Pik at. She was about to die for a third time. It was either life or death. Misty said she couldn’t hold on when she feel off a cliff. Ash begged her not to let go, and told her right then and there that he loved her. That there was no one else in the world who he would want to be with in the end. Hearing this somehow gave Misty the strength to pull herself up. After Misty had gotten up, she took time to sink in everything that had already happened. She then told Ash that she has always loved him, but never had the courage to tell him, because she was afraid that it would destroy their friendship that meant so much to her. Ash also confessed that he had had feelings for her since he didn’t know when. However, he was too focused on Pokemon to even notice. They shared their first kiss right then and there.

Later, after he had beaten all of the leagues in the world, and had become Pokemon Master, he asked Misty to marry him. She happily accepted. Also, when they got married, Pikachu and Pik did too. A little double wedding sort of thing.

Among the audience also, was May, a light skinned, long brown haired girl, now a master at Pokemon coordinating, and Max, a black-haired teen with glasses, who was now the champ of the Kanto league.

Also with the audience was a green haired man named Drew, who May was getting married to. May had met Drew a long time ago. They were both into Pokemon coordinating, and Drew wanted to be the best. He always showed that he had feelings for her in one way or another. It took some time for May to put all of the clues together, and she eventually figured it out. She figured it out when it was the championship for the #1 Pokemon Coordinator. It was a battle between May and Drew. The battle was the fiercest they ever had. In the end, amazingly, both their pokemon fell at the exact same time, resulting in a tie. After that, they had celebrated their victory at becoming #1, and that’s when May told Drew that she had figured out that he had been telling her all along in his own way, that he really likes her, and she confessed that she really liked him too. They were going out after that, and now, a marriage was on the way.

The priest had just finished, making it official that Brock and Susie were husband and wife. They sealed it with a passionate kiss.

We now meet at the scene of Ash and Misty driving back home to Cerulean City. Ash had decided to live with Misty at her home town, since she was still called to the gym from time to time, and she didn’t want to be far from there. Misty was in deep thought, as they were driving home in Ash’s Cadillac. Pikachu and Pik were sound asleep in the back, lying on each other with their heads touching, as it was late. Misty decided to have a serious conversation with Ash.

“Ash,” Misty began, getting Ash’s attention, “how long have we been married?”

“Eighteen months.” Ash answered her, ”Why?”

“Well, I was thinking, don’t you think it’s about time we started having kids?”

“Misty, we’ve been through this before. You know how little of a father figure I had, being raised only by my mom. I have no idea of how to be a good father. Which is why I’m taking those parenting classes. After I graduate from that, then we can have kids.”

“But that just doesn’t feel soon enough.” Misty protested, “Besides, you’ve had tons of practice with plenty of baby pokemon, right?”

“Yeah, but a child is completely different from a Pokemon.”

“I know, but I don’t want to wait until you graduate.” Misty’s eyes started filling with tears.

Ash then pulled the car off the road, and looked over at Misty.

“Misty,” He said, using his two fingers to make Misty look at him. “If you really feel that strongly about it, then... I think we should too.”

Misty gave Ash a kiss as if to say thank you. “How soon can we start?” She asked.

“Soon.” He answered. “We won’t have the strength to do so tonight, and I want us to be ready for it.”

Ash and Misty kiss once more.

“Do you promise?” Misty asked.

“I promise.”

They give one final kiss as if to seal the promise, before driving back home to Cerulean City.

---End Chapter 1---

Special Thanks:

You: For reading and reviewing it.

Me: For making it.

WaterEevee: He/She was the one who came up with Pik. She is from the story, "In the Voice of A Gypsy." I also got full permission to use Pik in this story.

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Well, what do you think? Please be totally honest.

If this ends up being at least decent, I will post the next chapter on Saturday.

I'll see you later.
 

Water Spirit

~*Animus Aquae*~
The first to review this wonderful fic and certainly not the last. :) (I feel so privilaged!)

(When reviewing I'm always honest, so please don't yell at me for critisism)

Anyways, thanks for the PM and I really like the storyline so far. The only thing that I will say about it is IMO, it was a bit to short. I understand that it is more of an introduction chapter where you are explaining what has happened to your characters as they have got older but it did seem a bit short. (but don't worry about that - the quality is fine). I like it that you've given Brock a beard! lol that's a great touch to show his maturity.

A minor point of critisism is your tense use. It's hard to describe and I don't want to get you down with a load of critsism, but if it just seems to be a one off thing then I won't both commenting on it but if you continue it in the second chapter then I will. (It could just be because of this being the opening chapter for the story that you end up switching tenses, so don't worry.) :)

Oh! I wondered where I had read about Pik before and I couldn't remember where! (WaterEevee's story is great BTW) :)

In all, great so far and make sure to PM me when new chaps are up. I hope that you won't feel offended by all of my critisism, but hopefully you'll agree that an honest opinion is a helpful one. You've got yourself a reader to the end here. :)

Good luck!

WS
XxX
 

Blazing Charmander

Well-Known Member
Well, i said i'd review your fic and i now am. Anyway, thanks for the PM. I nearly forgot about your fic. Sorry.

Anyway, it's quite short, but a reasonable length for the intro. Although, i do recall you warning us about how long the chapters can be.

Oh, i'll have to do the rest of the review tomorrow. I have to go out right now. Anyway Great fic at the moment. Keep it up.

~Blazing Charmander~
 
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Kris Bambii

Guest
This was an awsome chapter! I'm sorry that I don't have anything else to say, but I think that's all I had to. PM me when the next is up.
 

Cyndaquil

Soaring high above
Story lines cool, and everything else id fine, just a bit longer next time, Yeah the opening chapter doesn't matter coz its setting the scene but meh, longerss cool!
 

Minako

オタク
That was such an adorable chapter! *giggle*
I love AshxMisty simple stories. I hope you continue!!
It was a short chap, but I still love it!!

^___^

Best of luck,
~Ai,
Mina.
 
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Shining Lapras

Guest
Great story so far. I love pokeshipping stories! I also like the idea of Pik. It so cute that they had a double wedding.
 
Thank you all for your comments. :)

This chapter did better than I thought. You can expect the next chapter on time Saturday morning. (Mountian Standard Time) :)

Also, Water Spirit, there are actually times, though rare, where it is appropriate to switch tenses. It only happens if doing so, makes the story make more sense. This was the case for me this time around. :)

I am making some last minute editing on the next chapter, so it should be easy for me to post it on time. :)

Until later, see ya. :)

;151; - Mew!
 
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Garagara

Guest
I really like it. It's got tons of different shippings too. Which is really awesome. I like it and I think that it's a very nice story. Good job.
 
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Mistystar89

Guest
I think that your story is really cool and cute at the same time. I'm loving the plot so far, so cute! Please continue as I really like this story so far and you've got yourself a reader! ;)

Best of Luck,

~*Mist*~
 
Thank You so much for your positive reviews. Gives me great hope in the end.

Now, as for who asked, Yes, Brock & Susie is Breedershipping, and I've always liked that.

I gave Brock a beard, becuase I just at first came up with the line of her not recoginizing him, but then that wouldn't show true love with just that up, so I gave a very possible reason. Besides, I kinda like Brock better with a beard. :)

Now, with the next chapter, I won't be focusing on Ash & Misty as much as some people would expect. Instead, I'll be focusing more on another couple... but I won't tell you who. You'll just have to wait and see. I'll still have some good Pokeshipping moments though. :)

I'll see you guys later. :)
 

Blazing Charmander

Well-Known Member
Right then, where was i. Oh yeah. Sorry i had to rush off like that, but i was literally called by my mom because i had to go out. Anyway back to reviewing.

I really like it at the moment. I like that you've added both Contestshipping and Breedershipping too. And i wondered why you gave Brocko a beard but i read further and i now understand.

Well that's all i have to say for this chapter, but i will be waiting for the next chapter.

~Blazing Charmander~
 
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Ryuu

Guest
Awwwwwwwwww!!!!

You put so many shippings here, pokeplayer.

Ash + Misty = DUH!
Brock + Susie = Breedershipping
May + Drew = Contestshipping
Pikachu + Pik = Godknowswhat shipping

I loved the descriptions, and imagining Brock with a beard made me laugh for five whole minutes.

Keep up the good work!

P.S. So many people are bringing up AAML fics...I'm working on one too. ;)
 
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roodude15

Guest
Wow you seem to have an interesting story. I don't see anything wrong with it. I really like the description and how the story has to with Ash and Misty and how she wants to have a child. I like the Brock and Susie marriage. Anyways nice story so far. It was very interesting to read the first chapter and I will patiently wait for the second.

~roo~
 
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AnimeFanatic73

Guest
wuz poppin' pokeplayer984, i like the intro, even though it was kinda short. but i understand that it's basically just an introduction chapter. So you're basically setting everything which is cool by me. I like the way you described whats been goin on since they all parted ways and how they found each other again. that was aight ^^. Well just PM me when you post your next chapter, aight? I'm looking forward to it. lata. *waves*
 
||Flaming Phoenix|| said:
Awwwwwwwwww!!!!

You put so many shippings here, pokeplayer.

Ash + Misty = DUH!
Brock + Susie = Breedershipping
May + Drew = Contestshipping
Pikachu + Pik = Godknowswhat shipping

I loved the descriptions, and imagining Brock with a beard made me laugh for five whole minutes.

Keep up the good work!

P.S. So many people are bringing up AAML fics...I'm working on one too. ;)

Well, two Pikachu showing romance in a way a human would, I like to call PikaPikashipping. :)

Also, I look forward to your upcoming fanfic.

Just a few last things to add in with Chapter 2, and it will be ready for you guys.

I'll see ya later. :)
 
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