More than just friends......[Contest Shipping]

[Torchic23]

This is my first shipping fic, I've edited the chapters many times, so many of the first comments by readers may not be true anymore! Enjoy it anyways!

Fan Art

Drew TC-Me
MayTC-Me & Pokesho
Banner-Llybian Minamino (By request)
Drawing-Haruka-Fan

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Rating [for chap.1]: G

Chapter 1
The Beginning
"Blaziken, try another Blaze Kick!" Yelled a young girl. Her Blaze pokemon jumped up and furiously kicked through a Raichu, an electric mouse pokemon, with a flaming clawed foot. The girl flipped her deep brown hair out of her face and put on a smirk. "Finish it Blaziken!" Shouted the girl again.

Blaziken grabbed the Raichu with it's strong claws and spun it around by its lightning bolt tail, then slammed it to the ground. The orange rodent tried desperatly to get back up but eventully fell back to the ground, exhausted. A panel of judges were watching the whole battle quietly. The instant the Raichu hit the ground, the judges put red x's on a little screen on their stand.

"After another great battle, May and Blaziken win again! That means they'll both go on to the finals!" Shouted the beautiful announcer, Vivian, her orange hair waving from running back and forth across the stage, watching the battle carefully. May's sapphire blue eyes seemed to be lost in thought for a moment but then she heard the announcer and smiled at her well trained blaze Pokemon.

On another stage, two trainers were also finishing up a battle. A quiet boy and his Flygon would also be going to face May in the finals. Back on May's stage, May hugged her Blaziken. The soft golden feathers of her Blaziken made her want to stay in the postition forever! She was proud of her Blaziken for doing so well, in fact, its battling skills seemed better than usual!

The crowd behind her cheered too, but who wouldn't? Blaziken put on an impressive display! May exited the stage, trying to hold in her pride, and went back to the lobby to find out where the next battle was to be held.

"The finals will take place on stage two, good luck!" Said the lady at the front desk, watching the young coordinator pass by to another door. May nodded, then pushed the door open that revealed a long hallway which she knew would lead to her destination. May walked through the long hallway, speeding up a little, this battle would hopefully go fast so she could get her ribbon and relax.

May was now sixteen, she was quite pretty too. She wore a red poke ball bandanna, red T-shirt, black biker shorts, and a trendy white skirt over them. Around her waist was a yellow fanny pack in which she used to carry around her ribbons and Pokemon. May had experience with contests before, so this one was easy, at least, that's what she thought...

May entered stage two, examaining the room. The ground was dirty from previous battles but you could see a little bit of green peaking out, a panel of judges were on a wall close to her, and all around her was a crowd of cheering and screaming fans.

The other boy came out from the other side of the stage. He had emerald green hair and green eyes, and wore a black long sleeved shirt under a short sleeved lavender jacket, and lastly, he wore plain blue jeans.

"We'll put five minutes on the clock as always! Now start the match between May and Drew!" Called Vivian.

Drew quietly sent out a red and white pokeball. Out of the ball came Flygon, a mighty dragon pokemon, who's red and green scales shone in the bright lights of the Contest Hall. It waved its strong wings a little, kicking up a little bit dust on the stage.

May got a little tense, but sent out her pokeball as well. Her previous partner, Blaziken, came out with a cool little flip. It noticed the crowd and decided to show off a little. Blaziken roared and shot flames out of its wrists, which left the audience in awe. The crowd was so obviously impressed by the two strong looking pokemon, as they clapped in approval and yelled for the battle to start.

May hesitated at first but then called, "Blaziken, Flamethrower!" Blaziken shot red hot flames out of its beak at sand dragon. Flygon beat its large wings swiftly and rose a few feet in the air and dodged the Flamethrower. "Flygon, Hyper Beam," Said Drew calmly, flicking a stand of his hair out of his face.

The fighting bird Pokemon took a direct hit and fell to the ground, the score board showed May's points drop dramatically. May was a little entranced by the boy. He was a kind of cool and did have an awesome Pokemon. "Flygon dodged Blaziken's flamethrower without its trainer's command!" Said May to herself.

Flygon released another Hyper Beam at Blaziken without warning. Blaziken tried its best to dodge, but it was too late and Blaziken fell once again. May snapped out of her trance and watched her Pokemon, worried. "Come on Blaziken! I know you can do it!" She screamed.

Blaziken tried as hard as it could to get back up, it was doing its best to please its trainer, but it eventually gave up and fainted. Once again, the judges put x's on their screens. "And the judges have called 'Battle off'!" Announced Vivian. "That battle went pretty quick, what happened out there, May and Blaziken?"

The scoreboard showed Drew and Flygon's picture with the words "WINNER" below. "Drew and Flygon have won the Aouska contest! Please come and accept your ribbons!" Exclaimed Vivian.

Drew walked up to Vivian and that's all May got to see. She queitly walked off stage with a frown. This was the first contest she had lost in a very long time!

Back on the stage, Drew placed a ribbon on Flygon and proudly showed his to the cheering crowd. Drew then walked off stage as well and noticed May sitting on a bench in the lobby.

"Nice battle!" He said with a friendly smile, but it couldn't help but look like a smirk.

"Shut up!" Snapped May without looking at him.

"What a sore loser, besides I've seen a Magikarp fight better than that!" Said Drew, surprised by the girl's reaction.

May didn't reply, but pouted instead. "You didn't do much better!" Growled May.

"Well at least I won this ribbon," Said Drew and walked out.

May knew she lost because she was thinking more about Drew's looks than his fighting skills, she let her Pokemon down, Blaziken must have hated her by now. "Even if that jerk is in the next contest, I know I'll beat him!" Yelled May bitterly.

She walked out into the fresh air, the contest had gotten her all fired up. May had parked her bike next to the contest hall and went to get it. She wanted to get to the next town, but first, she took a deep breath, remembering to stay calm. May got herself on her red bike and began to peddle down the road.

"I wonder if Drew really is in the next contest? I'd really like to see him again, I want to beat him good!" Said May to herself. "What am I thinking!! I just met him and now I want to see him again!?" Yelled May slapping herself with her gloved hands. May seemed to have forgotten that she couldn't ride her bike without using both hands and crashed into a large tree.

"Ow, that really hurt." May whimpered, she wasn't very tough outside of battle.

"You okay?" Asked a familar voice.

May looked up, it was Drew! He has a worried expression on his face for once, he had obviously seen May fall.

"Yeah, I'm fine now," Said May, embarrassed. Drew helped her up and got on his green bike and drove away.

"I never knew a guy could be so nice, especially him," Said May a little dumbstruck.

Before she got on her bike again, she looked at her map to see how to get to the next contest. She got back on her red bike and started riding towards the sunset. She couldn't stop thinking about Drew, he was a weird kid, but he seemed nice enough, maybe she shouldn't have snapped at him...

The sun was setting quickly as the sky changed from blue to orange, and now a dark navy, and May knew she would have to try and find a Pokemon Center and soon!

A green and purple tent lie just ahead, May thought she was dreaming! "Maybe the person in that tent knows where a Pokemon Center is!" Exclaimed May. May rode her bike up to the campsite. A fire still blazed in front of the tent. May parked her bike on a nearby tree, and walked up to the tent, not knowing what might lie ahead...


Preview Time~

Chapter 2: Meet Me There!
Who is in the mysterious tent? Will May meet up with Drew again? What new adventures lie ahead? Keep reading when the adventure continues!

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hmmmm...iys kinda short...but i dont care about length so its good^^

 

[Torchic23]

Yeah, my mom wants me to go to bed, but I wanted to make it longer. I tried to add as much detail as possible and stay on past tense. Those were problems I had in the past

 

[Brute Root]

Back on May's stage, Mat hugged her Blaziken tightly. She was proud of her Blaziken for doing so well.

Lol, little typing error, I know the story is about May and not Mat, but little things like that bug me sometimes.

Really great story so far, I can't wait til the next chapter to see what will happen at the next contest.

 

[Torchic23]

Thanks for pointing that out, I fixed it. You know how t and y are so close to each other.

I know this sounds terrrible but I had to write this all here. I don't have Microsoft Word on my computer yet ^^;

 

[Brioche]

Gah! An entire load of Contestshippy stories have literally crushed me! *reads Chapter One*

As for spelling errors and typos... >_> After correcting Brian Powell's story, I'm going to explode.

I might point out a few (hopefully not all) mistakes I find if you want me to--another day, that is.

My only suggestion is to add more detail, and maybe not rush into chapters, even though you have a "time-limit". Maybe you could write the next chapter in a notebook or something and refer to it later. ^_^;;

I'll read on (If I'm not tired..) when you post more chapters. For now.. *starts reading other Contestshipping stories* -_-zzzZZZZ

 

[Brute Root]

The ground was brown,

Could use a bit more of a discription I guess, was the floor dirt, tile, composite or carpet?

"We'll put 5:00 on the clock as always, now start the match between May and Drew!" Called Vivian.

5:00 minutes right? sorry to be picky on that, but someone may not know what 5:00 you're talking about. Just a thought.

Drew looked calm as he sent out a poke ball. Out popped his Flygon, a mighty dragon pokemon. It's red and green scales shone in the bright lights.

In my opinion this sounds better, "A calm look came over Drew's face as he released his pokemon onto the stage. The creature that appeared was a mighty dragon type [pokemon] who was embodied in red and green scales that shimmered in the bright lights."

May got a little nervous but sent out her Blaziken with a little twirl.

Blaziken roared and shot flames out of its wrists. The crowd was impressed by the two strong looking pokemon.

Maybe you could combine these two sentences.

May hesitated at first but then called, "Blaziken, Flamethrower!" Blaziken blasted red hot flames from its beak at Flygon, signaling the battle's start.

I made a change or two, you can make the change or keep what you wrote,
I'm just trying to add more structure to the sentence. You could also make your own changes.

Flygon beated its large wings hard and dodged the Flamethrower. "Flygon, Hyper Beam!" Said Drew calmly.

This may be changing the battle scene a bit but what about: *Flygon beat it's wings at high speeds,which made them sing as he returned the intense flames to their sender. Drew kept calm and gave the *Desert Spirit a command, "Flygon, Hyper Beam.".

*FLYGON whips up a sandstorm by flapping its wings. The wings create a series of notes that sound like singing. Because the "singing" is the only thing that can be heard in a sandstorm, this POKéMON is said to be the desert spirit.

Don't put the (*) in the story, that was for the purpose of the footnote.

The fighting fowl pokemon took a direct hit and fell to the ground. The score board showed May's points drop dramatically.

Does that sound any better? Idk, maybe not, but it was worth a try.

Blaziken tried to continue the battle, but despite its struggle, it fell to the ground in defeat. Once again, the judges put x's on their screens.

In my opinion, I think that sounds a little better.

Drew walked up to Vivian and that's all May got to see. She queitly walked off stage.

Something could be done here...but I'm not really sure what, it's also fine as is though.

"I wonder if Drew really is in the next contest? I'd really like to see him again." Said May to herself. "What am I thinking!! I just met him and now I want to see him again!?" Yelled May slapping herself with her gloved hands.

Excellent. I'm really feelling it.

"Ow, that really hurt." May whimpered.

Nice choice of words, especially that "whimpered" part, it really portrays that she is in some pain, but is trying to avoid crying. I like it.

"You ok?" Said a familer voice.

May looked up. It was Drew. He has a worried expression on his face, he had obviously seen May fall.

Dun, dun, dun! Drama!

She got back on her red bike and started riding towards the sunset. She couldn't stop thinking about Drew;for now, however, her first priority was to find shelter. On the horizon, a tent caught her eye,"Maybe the person in that tent knows where a Pokemon Center is!" May exclaimed as she peddled towards the campsite

I made some more changes...I hope I didn't go overboard editing.

 

[Torchic23]

Thank you Brute Root, I read your suggestions and changed my story a little bit. Thanks for your help, it sounds so much better now!

 

[Brute Root]

Aww...shucks..*blush* That makes me feel really cool, not just cool, icy chill.

 

[Torchic23]

Glad I made you feel good BR, I've got the next chapter now!

Rating: PG[swear words are like this D***]


Chapter 2
Meet Me There!

"La, La, La, Da, La, La," Hummed a cheerful man. He was preparing to eat his dinner which he had slowley cooked over a fire for the last hour.

He had long purple hair and dressed himself to look like a Cacturne. His pointed, dark green hat resembled a Cacturne's head, and the patterns on his clothes resembled its body.

Even though Cacturne was his favorite, he loved dark and poison type Pokemon overall. A little bell rang by his bag. "Dinner's done, Cacturne!" Shouted the man.

A creepy cactus Pokemon ran into the tent, running up to its trainer. He grabbed the bowl of ramen from beside him, but accidentally threw it upwards, because it was scolding hot. The ramen landed on him, while the bowl landed on Cacturne's head.

"Ow! Stupid piece of $#@*!" Screamed the man, throwing the noodles off of his head..

Outside the purple and green tent, May walked up to the tent flaps, cautiously asking, "Hello? Anyone here?"

The Cacturne trainer emerged from the tent. "What the h*** do you want!" Yelled the enraged man holding his burnt hand.

"I was hoping you knew where the nearest Pokemon Center was, I'm a coodinator." Said May nervously.

"Coodinator? You should have said so sooner!" Said the man in a now cheerful tone.

"The name's Harley, come in for a minute!" Said Harley. May followed Harley inside the large tent. "So what's your name little missy?" Said Harley.

"Oh, I'm May." Said May quietly.

"No need to be shy! Sorry about before, had a little cooking accident." Said Harley.

May noticed a ticked off Cacturne by a small sink. It had a steaming bowl on its head, the cactus pokemon looked pretty ticked off.

"So anyways, you said you wanted to find a Pokemon Center?" Asked Harley, drawing her attention away from the Pokemon.

"Yeah," Replied May.

"Well you're in luck, there happens to be one a few steps ahead of here!" Said Harley.

"The sun's just about down, so I better get going now!" Said May, a little scared of Cacturne, Harley looked a little surprised.

"Hold it! You're a coodinator right?" Questioned Harley.

"Uh, yeah. Why?" Asked May.

"Well then I guess I see you at the next contest, 'cause I'm a coodinator too!" Exclaimed Harley. He did an odd little pose that was somewhat girlish.

"Oh, that's nice." Said May nervously, just wanting to leave. She quickly ran outside, only to find her bike missing! "That's just great!" Pouted May. She paused for a moment to think.

"That guy was kinda weird too, and I'm not going back, so what do I do?" May asked herself. She sank down against the tree that she had parked her bike against, watching the sun go down. The sun may have gone down, but Harley's campfire still burned brightly as ever.

"Well, I have to find my bike, I mean where could it have possibly gone?" May said confidently, standing up and preparing to search. May searched everywhere but could not find her bike. Tears welled up in her eyes. "I left all my Pokemon with my bike!" She cried.

Suddenly, she heard a rustle from a nearby bush. She walked up to the bush and saw a pack of purple monkey Pokemon, Aipom, playing with her bike.

"Give it back, bananna brains!" Yelled May. The Aipom giggled and waved their hand-like tails at May, and kept on playing. May grabbed a small stone off the dusty ground and threw it at one of the Aipom, not appreciating their attitude, plus, this was the only way she could fight them with no Pokemon.

The rock hit on of the Aipom directly in the head. The little monkey turned around and glared at May. "Aipom!" Yelled the one May hit. The rest of the Aipom began to throw clumps of sand at May. She covered her face, the Aipom just wouldn't quit!

"Petal Dance!" Commanded a voice.

A small green pokemon with red and blue roses attached to the ends of each of its skinny wrists, jumped out of a nearby tree and shot swirling pink petals at the Aipom.

This was enough, the monkeys were scared off by the attack. Forgetting May's bike, they quickly ran up a large tree nearby. "You know, there are better ways to fight without pokemon," Said the voice again.

May turned to see Drew leaning against a tree. He slowly flicked his green hair with his hand like before.

"Oh yeah! You got any better ideas?" Snapped May. May ran to her bike and got her yellow fanny pack. She strapped it around her waist as if she was prepared for another Aipom attack.

"You're lucky I was there to save you." Said Drew.

"You're lucky that I don't hurt you!" Said an enraged May.

"Well, I need to get back to my training, come on, Roselia." Said Drew. Drew began to walk down the path that led to the Pokemon Center.

"What a jerk..." Muttered May, getting back on her bike.

She knew that Drew had saved her, why was she mad? No, it wasn't his witty comments that got her mad, in fact, she wasn't really mad at Drew at all, just at herself for blowing another chance to get to know him.

Harley seemed to be right anyways, the ride to the Pokemon Center was short! Once she got there, she rented a room for the night. Then May went to the Pokemon hall, a place to let your Pokemon out for play, while the trainers did other things. There were a few other pokemon in the room already. Flygon, Masquerain, Charizard, and Gardevoir.

May threw out all of her pokeballs at the same time. First one to come out was her Blaziken. Then Venusaur, Blastoise, Delcatty, Beautifly, and Snorlax. All of her Pokemon looked happy to be out of their pokeballs, as and ran to the other Pokemon in the room to play.

May walked back out to the main room. A worried Drew threw the doors to the Pokemon Center open. He carried a very exhausted Roselia in his arms. He put it on the desk in front of Nurse Joy.

"Please! You've got to help it!" Cried Drew. Nurse Joy took a good look at the thorn pokemon.

"Our Chansey will heal its wounds and it should be fine!" Said Joy. She called her Chansey. The pink egg pokemon ran up and put Roselia on a white hospital cart and carried it to the E.R.

May hid a little, if Drew knew she had seen that, she would have never heard the last of it. May had never seen Drew act that way before. He always seemed so calm. May decided to try and forget what just happened as she walked back to her room, but May couldn't help from feeling sorry for Drew and Roselia.

May walked back to the Pokemon Hall to check on her Pokemon. Just as she opened the door she saw Drew, She closed it to a little peak and watched him. "How's your wing feeling Flygon?" Said Drew petting the dragon pokemon. "Sorry, I know that training was a little tough"

"That means that some of those other Pokemon belong to Drew..." Said May quietly.

"These other Pokemon look pretty tough, I wonder who they belong to." Said Drew commenting on May's Pokemon, who were busy playing with Masquerain. May leaned on the door a little too hard and it flung open, she almost fell over.

"May?" Said Drew surprised.

"Oh, uh, hi," Said May nervously. She had landed in a weird pose, but she giggled and pulled herself up.

"So, do these Pokemon belong to you?" Asked Drew.

"Yes they do!" Said May proudly remembering Drew's earlier comment.

"They look pretty weak to me." Said Drew, smirking.

May's jaw dropped. What other things were Drew hiding if he hid the fact that he said May's Pokemon looked 'tough'?

"Uh...how's Roselia?" Asked May.

"Why would you care?" Said Drew bitterly, was this a touchy subject?

"If that's how you want to be then fine!" Shouted May and stomped off to her room. This time May knew she was poilte to him but he was mean to her!

But still an odd feeling overwhelmed her, why was she mad at herself for yelling at Drew? He was a total jerk to her! But still, even though she had just met him, she had already learned enough to decide how she felt about him. He hid his feelings, so how could she be mad at him? In fact, she almost felt bad for Drew...

Arguing with herself, May said, "No! NO! I do not LIKE him, even as a friend!"

Preview Time~

Chapter 3
Hurry May! Save Roselia!

May finds Drew's injured Roselia, MISSING? Rushing to go tell Drew, she finds him gone too! Where did they go?

 

[Brute Root]

That's really good Fireball! Awesome chapter. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the results of the "Roselia Affair"!

 

[Brioche]

Great chapter, Torchic23! There were few errors and I'm anxious to see what happens next!

Harley was funny. I can just imagine that "scolding water" scene.

Wow, you made all of May's Pokemon their final evolution-stages? They must be impressive. Heh, Drew's such a liar...

Hm... Maybe you could make your chapters longer. Though I do believe quality's more important than quantity. Ah well, continue! ^_^

 

[Torchic23]

Great chapter, Torchic23! There were few errors and I'm anxious to see what happens next!

Harley was funny. I can just imagine that "scolding water" scene.

Wow, you made all of May's Pokemon their final evolution-stages? They must be impressive. Heh, Drew's such a liar...

Hm... Maybe you could make your chapters longer. Though I do believe quality's more important than quantity. Ah well, continue! ^_^

Well, thanks! I tried to make it longer, and it is a little longer than the first chapter.............hey, maybe this means the chapters will get longer and longer!

That's really good Fireball! Awesome chapter. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the results of the "Roselia Affair"!

Yup, I'm gonna try to make it as dramatic as possible, maybe longer [I'm trying!]

Next chapter should be up by tonight!

 

[Torchic23]

Ok next chapter! I warning you, this chapter is SHORT!!!!!! But the good news is, there's lots of detail so I hope you enjoy!

Rating: PG

Chapter 3
Hurry May! Save Roselia!

May sat on a bed in the room she had rented for the night. She had put on her night outfit, a yellow shirt and a fleece pair of blue pants. She took her bandanna out and combed her hair straight. Her gloves lie on a nightstand next to her bed.

"Why would he be so mean? I was worried about his stupid Pokemon!" Yelled May. "And he said my pokemon were weak! What nerve!" Said May, looking for excuses to cover her feelings.

She then decided to get a glass of water for bed to help calm herself down. She walked through the main hallway and past the E.R. rooms. In one room was Drew's exhausted Roselia. It looked like it was having much trouble breathing as a Chansey watched over it. "I hope it's okay, come to think of it, Drew never did tell me what happened," Said May, then she remembered his earlier rudeness. "Oh yeah, he's too stuck-up to tell me!"

She continued walking down the hall to get her glass of water. When she returned, she walked past Roselia's room again, feeling curious. A bright red light was flashing in the room as a flushed looking Chansey rushed out the door.

May looked a little closer at the little table where Roselia had been, and found it gone! "Oh no, what happened to Roselia?" Panicked May, she then paused for a minute, thinking to herself. "The only reason I'm worried is because it's a Pokemon, not stupid Drew!"

She ran to Drew's room to tell him what happened. She flung open the door and started shouting, "DREW! ROSELIA IS MISSING!" Then she realized that Drew was not in his room. Though the sheets on his bed were ruffled as if he had been there not too long ago.

May rushed all through the Pokemon Center looking for Drew, but he was nowhere to be found. "Maybe Roselia went outside and Drew followed," May convinced herself. Her brown hair was messy again and her deep sapphire eyes glowed with fear.

May ran up to the main desk. "Nurse Joy, where are Drew and Roselia?" Demanded May.

"My Chansey has informed me that Roselia has disappeared and will probably turn up soon, as for the boy, he should be in his room," Assured Joy.

"He's not! And I don't think he knows about Roselia!" May yelled.

"Now calm down, go back to your bed, I'm sure they'll both turn up in the morning." Scolded Joy. She lead May back to her room and locked the door. May sat on her bed, thinking of what to do.

May then got an idea and looked towards the window. "That's it! I'm coming, Drew!" Exclaimed May. She put back on her normal clothes and ran towards the window. With much strength, May opened the window and climbed out.

She ran back towards the dark forest. "Drew! Roselia! Where are you guys!" Called May.

"I can't believe I'm worried about that jerk! But this isn't about him, it's for Roselia!" May thought to herself.

Just then May saw a trail of blood shining in the moonlight. "Oh no, I've got a bad feeling about this." May gulped. She began to follow the trail nervously. "This is creepy, but I really hope Drew and Roselia are ok..." Whimpered May nervously.

All of a sudden, she saw a thorny figure in the moonlight. May cautiously creeped up to it. It was a Cacturne and something seemed familar about it. May noticed an evil grin on its face. It's scary yellow eyes glowed brightly, reflecting off the moon light.

A few feet away lie Roselia, with cuts and bruises all over. But it wasn't bleeding, so what made the trail? "Is Cacturne able to make fake blood?" May asked herself stupidly.

The Cacturne started shooting poison spikes at May. She just barely dodged by dive jumping. She fell right next to the injured rose Pokemon. "Roselia..." May cried.

Just then, Cacturne ran towards a dark tree at the edge of the forest. May gently scooped up Roselia and ran after the Cacturne. On the other side of the tree trunk was Drew. He was unconcious and tied to the tree. He had many cuts and was losing blood rapidly.

"Drew!" Screamed May horrified. Then she noticed a dark figure leaning in the shadows. "Finish him now Cacturne!" Said a voice, but there was something all too familar about the voice.

The Cacturne prepared a Pin Missle and aimed at Drew. The spikes shot out of its pointy arms rapidly. May jumped in front of Drew and got hit by the attack instead. May knew that if Drew took one more attack he really would be finished.

May just lie on the ground, almost to weak to move.

"Crap, I left my pokemon back at the Pokemon Center," She cried.

May looked back up at Drew. She wondered how all this had happened but especially how a Cacturne tied Drew to the tree, or did someone else?

Then the Cacturne began another Pin Missle, this time at Roselia. The flower was just barely breathing. One more attack, like Drew, would kill it.

May got up and rammed into the Cacturne as hard as possible. The spikes hurt her but she didn't care. The only thing on her mind was saving Drew.

May fell to the ground, now unconcious. The Cacturne fell too, but It jumped back up and stared at the fallen girl.

Almost preparing for another attack, Cacturne turned towards the horizen. The sun was now slowley coming up. It shrieked in fear and ran back into the shadows of the trees.

But still, May, Drew, and Roselia were still unconcious...

Officer Jenny pulled up in her motocycle. "Darn, he got away again, but we found some kids!" Called Jenny into her radio.

She untied Drew from the tree, and with some help from her Growlithe team, put the injured kids on the motocycle and sped away, towards the Pokemon Center.


Preview Time~

Chapter 4
When Shadow turns to sun! Pokemon and Human revival!
As May begins to learn more about Drew, Drew starts to become a different kind of person, and the relationship gets a little deeper!

 

[Brute Root]

She then decided to get a glass of water for bed. She walked through the main hallway and past the E.R. rooms.

Ya used the wrong "threw", I replaced it. Otherwise, awesome chapter!

 

[Torchic23]

Thanks! I fixed the through thing, we all make mistakes sometimes

 

[Shatoshi]

you need to work on length but it is good.......... you should get Max, Ash, Misty and Brock in here^^

 

[Torchic23]

you should get Max, Ash, Misty and Brock in here^^

Nah, I wanted it to be a little more orginal and besides, it's too late now! As was thinking of getting Max in there somewhere and making it so he was traveling with Ash and the rest of 'em. Yes, length is a problem for me and I don't know why

 

[Shatoshi]

at least it isnt as bad as me^^

 

[Torchic23]

Tonight, I should have a reeeeeally long chapter as I will have more time. I hope it turns out good!!