Mutational Error 2

[pokeinuyasha]

Before saying this is theft from Sora, I asked permissoin to her before. Thanks, Sora! Anyway, this is my first comic, and the spelling may be bad because I'm brazilian. Well, let's start!

Chapter 1: The same comic and the different type

PS: Sora, I'm really ashamed of what I've made. Please, can we forgive it? I'm really sorry, it's not gonna happen again, sorry T_T

 

[Infinity]

Well hmm... This'll be interesting to say the least. I am personally against intros such as this one, though. Good luck.

 

[pokeinuyasha]

Hey guys, chapter 1 and 2 are up!

 

[Infinity]

Hmm the panels look a bit sloppy with the current format. I suggest sticking with the format that she uses if you want to grasp the full ME experience (complete with the Ebola heading).

 

[Dark Pheonix]

ye its alright. When will chapter 3 be out?

 

[Sora]

.... no comment.

 

[pokeinuyasha]

ye its alright. When will chapter 3 be out?

Ah, well, now.

And Sora, when you say "no comment", it's good or bad? I think it's bad...

 

[Sahaqiel]

While I don't approve,... Like at all about using the concepts (Mostly names) of other comics, I'm forced to say that this is an ok comic for a beginner. Seriously though, what bothered me a lot is the lack of Snagger's art style, and the fact you put your own username and numbers, facial expressions, etc. in the text. Woohoo, I am in my own comic. Not capitalized and all. This really doesn't have the style of the real version. (Kind of like what Telefan pulled with their games, "Pokemon" Jade and Diamond.) I was shocked to see this in the forum, and triply shocked when I found out it was done other than a person that we all have come to know as Snagger Outlaw. (Now named Sora, but eh.) Snagger's comics had a specific font for everything, normally had four panels. (Without borders of course.) And the lovable Emotigoomba! Also, EG was like, the only character who used facial expressions of text. (And said nothing else I might add.) Overall, please think up a comic of your own.
Just asking (Politely),
Sahaqiel

 

[pokeinuyasha]

Well, this is not a copy or a continuation, the only thing that is similar is the name. Nothinga bout it. And the pokeinuyasha Pikachu there isn't really me. Well, it's me, but it isn't me. It's not the author. Goddness, no comment, I'm only explaining ^^

 

[Alakazam]

What is the point of this comic?!?!?!
There is no plot, nothing going on, nothing!>

 

[Sahaqiel]

Yes, but the name will draw attention to the comic, since Mutational Error is a famous comic around here. Thus creating more attention than it should have had. (Like Telefan.)
Soo...yeah,
Sahaqiel

 

[Sora]

Well, this is not a copy or a continuation, the only thing that is similar is the name.

That's not what you told me.

Title: Continuation of your comic

OK, I will ask this... Can I make a comic based on your comic, Mutational Error? I'm good at spriting ^^ And maybe I will put a plot ^^ Of course, I can't start with it without your permission first. So, may I? And if I can't, can I make the sprites to your comic, please?

 

[pokeinuyasha]

That's not what you told me.

Dude, I'm dumb... Hmmm... I know what I will do... I will put my plan up some episodes after these ones... Wait...

EDIT: 1st part of Chapter 5 is up now.

 

[Blueray]

Ok... here is where ya went wrong...

Snagger Outlaw= Funny

U= Not funny, grammar errors, constant changing in panel size and such, mediocre sprites and effects, mooching off of popularity of another comic, and so on...

What made Snagger Outlaw’s comic good was the humor, and the fact that it was an original comic idea when she made it...

You've turned it into another worthless poke morph comic...

*Is saddened by this*

 

[pokeinuyasha]

Ok... here is where ya went wrong...

Snagger Outlaw= Funny

U= Not funny, grammar errors, constant changing in panel size and such, mediocre sprites and effects, mooching off of popularity of another comic, and so on...

What made Snagger Outlaw’s comic good was the humor, and the fact that it was an original comic idea when she made it...

You've turned it into another worthless poke morph comic...

*Is saddened by this*

OK. I will try some more things. Mods, if you wabt, close this... Do someone knows how to change the name of a thread? Anyway, I'm already making next chapter...

Oh, and the poor grammar? Well, I'm brazilian and I didn't finished yet my English classes, that's why. No comment on this phrase, please.

 

[Kazuki Yukimura]

Ok, I saw your comic pokeinny (do you mind if I call you this?), I know I´m your friend, and I´m supposed to say something good about it, but, sorry, I agree with Blueray

 

[pokeinuyasha]

Ok, I saw your comic pokeinny (do you mind if I call you this?), I know I´m your friend, and I´m supposed to say something good about it, but, sorry, I agree with Blueray

That's OK! I don't mind! And yes, you can call me that ^^

Oh, and a last episode before I request a lock here! Please, no comments... I know it isn't good. I think I will make another comic, not based on another one. Sorry Sora ^^; Anyway... *requests lock*

Buh- bye!

 

[Dawg 2005]

Just because you think you're dumb it doesn't mean you can totally change up the comic.

This is a cheap rip off of probably the best sprite comic ever.

The "plot" is terrible (if there even is one), Mutational Error shouldn't be like that at all. If you really wanted to do a continuation, you should've had some of her sprites (with permission) and had something good.

You, ma'am, have failed.

 

[pokeinuyasha]

Just because you think you're dumb it doesn't mean you can totally change up the comic.

This is a cheap rip off of probably the best sprite comic ever.

The "plot" is terrible (if there even is one), Mutational Error shouldn't be like that at all. If you really wanted to do a continuation, you should've had some of her sprites (with permission) and had something good.

You, ma'am, have failed.

Didn't I said no comments? I know I've failed! I know it's horrible! I know it's the worst comic of the world, and I know I'm cheap!! I think I will request another lock...

 

[Infinity]

Running away from things is not the answer to life's issues...