my 1st revamp ever!!!

[DragonknightGt]

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[Carpetted!]

Good but outlining could use some work.

 

[umbreot]

Good but outlining could use some work.

Yeah, 'ya gotta improve in outlines, and work a lillte bit harder on the shading. It seem's a bit odd.

 

[ø®ΑпGЗ ♠]

Mabye a bit more light on the tail...

 

[Dark Venusaur]

Or you could make the tail a little bit darker kind of.

;003;Dark Venusaur;003;

 

[Mimori Kiryu]

From what I know from spriting (which isn't alot, mind you ) I think the tail should possibly a little lighter and work on the outlining of the sprite. Other than that, it's pretty good.

 

[DragonknightGt]

yea about the outlining your saying it needs a different color but it is the same color as the firered version kingdra so what pokemon should i use to redo the outline?

 

[ø®ΑпGЗ ♠]

No, the outline needs to be darker.