My Chaos!

[Konion Champ]

I just started "chaoing". Hope you all like them.

Meet Chaoterpie, Pikachao, and Chew!

Do you think my chaos are good enough to start a shop with?

 

[Frozendragon]

Wow there are really cute^.^The tail of mew is a bit to big.

 

[Konion Champ]

Yeah, i thought that too! I think i should fix it....

 

[Konion Champ]

Sorry for the DP, but i have a new one!

Chaolett

 

[Konion Champ]

Oh noes, i triple posted!

Chaovee

 

[Jasmine Lover]

Dont worry you can 2 post if you are uptating.
Yes i think your chao are good enough to open a shop w/ them.
On the last two you forgot to color the yellow spot.and the hand and feet.
A chao is not a chao w/out the little ball on its head.
And last but not least.
The plural for Chao is Chao.
Edit
Forgot to tell you that mew has ears on its head

 

[Konion Champ]

Eh, thanx for the crit. I didn't add the little ball because i thought that i could give them any head-ball if i keep it blank. I'm not sure about putting ears on chew...

 

[Eevee_Master]

OMG IT'S SO CUTE!!!! *hugs it* MINE *growls*

 

[☼Latias☼]

OMG IT'S SO CUTE!!!! *hugs it* MINE *growls*

you've been banned from shops when you did that...

 

[ø®ΑпGЗ ♠]

I think that's because she wasn't requesting.
I think Diglett would look cooler if It had a hole.

 

[Kimori]

Those are really cute! You did a great job with shading. The Caterpie one is my favorite! But I agree, the Chew one needs ears. I think you're almost ready to start your own chao shop! =D

 

[OmegaDragon]

wow, these are excellent for your first chao, and your one of the few people ive seen that can make a chao look good by using actual pokemon parts 0.0 Your almost ready to start a chao shop.

On crit, basically everyone said what I was going to say. Although something bugs me about the digglets nose. Meh, probably just me.

 

[Risk Alchemist]

10/10

They are excellent keep doing them. Or open a shop.

 

[~Flareon~]

I liked all your chaos, they're very cute. Good job!

 

[Konion Champ]

WOW, thanx everyone! I think that Chao's are the best sprites i've made during my time on Serebii! I'll open a shop very soon!

 

[-SI-]

They are really good!!

I second the mew's tail being too long though.

 

[Golden Rapidash]

You should try a harder chao, my suggestion is a rapidash

And by the way, the plural of chao is chao. Like the plural of pokemon isn't pokemons, it is pokemon.

 

[whiteabsol]

These chao are pretty good, especially for your firsts. The diglett choa seems a bit.... odd but since I've never really seen a person do a full bodied diglett before, it may just be me. ^^

~W.A~

 

[Dragonsong]

They are really good for a beginner! I think the Chew looks a little plain though...

 

[Aptenodytes]

Mew needs tiny ears, and Diglett shouldn't have a body... Otherwise, great job for you first chao. Just keep practicing .