my comic

[nattydbzmaster]

new

theks

kanto

johto

hoenn

theks

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kanto

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johto

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hoenn

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trainer cards
looking at trainer cards may contain spoilers
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bios:http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g277/nattydbzmaster/comic/wat.png
credit:www.pokeshow.com for sprites for the trainer cards
updates every 2 days (but not on saturday
wat i update is up 2 the poll

 

[Narutopie]

you spelled "Heard" wrong

 

[Kinginsoar]

It's pretty good, but there's only 1 box, a spelling error, and it isn't funny.

 

[zeppelin]

you should try to make them about 3-6 blocks long this is like a strip an try to make it funny.

 

[nattydbzmaster]

you should try to make them about 3-6 blocks long this is like a strip an try to make it funny.

if i put it in the code box and i put another box it will look like its one piece get it
look

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o ya and if u havnt noticed it says
please dont critisize

 

[Soquid Fpoon]

Weird why would a baby Pokemon Breeder person be hanging around with noobs. Anyways love the Sasake Sprite.
Also in the bios you spelled funny wrong.

 

[nattydbzmaster]

nattys her big brother

 

[Dafearo(svensk)]

o ya and if u havnt noticed it says
please dont critisize

Then why are you posting here?

 

[Matt Silver]

Oh my god. This dribble is exatcly the same as the last comic you made, only you finally buckled down and made your own next panel/comic. *checks* oh wait ya didnt. This is still the same as before and if you dont want critisim, do not post here, cause with this comic you're gonna get tons of it- good and bad, mostly.

 

[Bu†cH]

Not everybody is gonna like your comic. If you refuse you listen to what may save your comic, then do you not study for your test when people tell you to? Criticism saved people's reputations and mine. I also know a friend of mine who turned over a new leaf on her spriting skills.

If you want people to tell ya a great job, you have to improve on all of your comic-making skills dramatically. Start with the story (You've to be more original and out-of-the-box), then the sprites (Don't use default Paint colors. Make your own), and finally the length (You might've heard this before, but I suggest over 4 panels per update. And don't rush the story).

 

[nattydbzmaster]

i didnt rush the story

 

[blueguy]

o ya and if u havnt noticed it says
please dont critisize

Are you ****ing kidding me? Don't ****ing post a comic unless you want criticism. I'm not even going to bother reviewing your comic, but let's just say that it doesn't register a 1.

 

[NEO GOHAN]

hell, anyone who rated this more than one is out of their mind. and so is the writer. I can't even understand what's going on! there's no visible plot, other than a journey, and a HORRIBLE one at that. this comic doesn't even make the slightest sense. please, FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, STOP.

LAWL I SIGGIED.

 

[Blaze Dragon]

All said it, the journey plot is overused, the comics are too short and you don´t want critics, that helps the comic if you actually read them. I give this 1 star, for both: the comic and the person who mades it

 

[nattydbzmaster]

i made thi new 1

 

[mau]

they standed there for an hour?
just one panel, bad story, bad speech bubbles, no critics, i don't think you should keep on doing these.

 

[Socrates With A Lobotomy]

This makes my past comics look like comedy genius.

 

[nattydbzmaster]

just look at this one and ul understand

 

[NEO GOHAN]

uh, NO I DON'T. PLEASE STOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[Pikachu & Bonsly master]

Okay,why are the trainers in the first pictures in kanto?