My egg and pokemon

[Arbiter]

here they are

 

[Mikau]

I like the Onix,but the egg is really bad. I suggest you find an egg sprite.

 

[Trick-or-Treater]

I like the Onix,but the egg is really bad. I suggest you find an egg sprite.

How can you like the Onix!?
It needs waaaaaaay more work, It's a cut and paste done badly.
Maybe you should read a tutorial Poocool, it'll help.

Please people, don't encourage people when their sprites aren't that good.

 

[Mikau]

How can you like the Onix!?
It needs waaaaaaay more work, It's a cut and paste done badly.
Maybe you should read a tutorial Poocool, it'll help.

Please people, don't encourage people when their sprites aren't that good.

He's my little brother. So I have to be nice.

 

[Capt.Miko]

The egg needs shading and should be wider at the bottom than the top, and the wings on the Onix are not placed evenly and the fireball sprite shouldn't have the black outlines.

 

[Dark Venusaur]

The tentacool egg needs alot more work for example the blue part of the egg. The wings dont look right on that Onix you could of made the wings a little bit bigger in width and they dont look attached.

;003;Dark Venusaur;003;

 

[Arbiter]

Here is my new pokemon. It is a little better

 

[FoxBoi]

Not too bad, if they are your first sprites. I must admit they need more work, but keep your hopes up. Spriting tutorials always help. Keep on practising. Practise makes perfect.

 

[SilverPhantom]

Egg-4
Pkmn-6

Total Rating-5

 

[Arbiter]

I made a new one.

 

[ø®ΑпGЗ ♠]

It's a cut-'n-paste job. Don't do # ratings everybody else.

 

[Starter530]

Please FOR THE LOVE OF GOD
READ A TUTORIAL