My fakemon

[Malachite Treecko]

POST HERE IF YOU'VE SEEN THEM. I NEED C+C
I have a lot of ideas, and many evolutions of old Pokémon, but no scanner where I live so when I visit my father I have the opputunity to scan. Next visit is around Chirstmas.

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/7352/grassshaman2gr7.jpg
The Grass-type starters.


This is the info I have written this far. I don't know how to get it in a new window, if anyone know, give me the way. I can't find the answer at the FAQs or anything.

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No name

General Info
Type: Grass
Species: Leaf Mask
Ability: Overgrow
Height:
Weight:
Gender ratio: male 87.5%, female 12.5%
Evolution: l 19 >
Breeding group: Plant

Stats
HP: 45
Attack: 55
Defense: 65
Special Attack: 55
Special Defense: 65
Speed: 35
Total: 320

Effort Points given:
Catch rate:
Growth rate:
Steps to hatch egg:
Base happiness:

Moves
Level Up:
- Trample
- Leer
7 Absorb
12 Defense Curl
19 Faint Attack
24 Scary Face
31 Stomp
36 Mega Drain
43 Energy Ball
48 Extrasensory

Egg:

Tutors:

No name

General Info
Type: Grass
Species: Pot Plant
Ability: Overgrow
Height:
Weight:
Gender ratio: male 87.5%, female 12.5%
Evolution: l 39 >
Breeding group: Plant

Stats
HP: 60
Attack: 70
Defense: 80
Special Attack: 70
Special Defense: 80
Speed: 50
Total: 410

Effort Points given:
Catch rate:
Growth rate:
Steps to hatch egg:
Base happiness:

Moves
Level Up:
- Trample
- Leer
- Absorb
- Faint Attack
8 Absorb
14 Defense Curl
19 Magical leaf
20 Faint Attack
26 Scary Face
32 Stomp
38 Glare
44 Energy Ball
50 Extrasensory
56 Recover

Egg:

Tutors:

No name

General Info
Type: Grass/Ghost
Species: Forest Shaman
Ability: Overgrow
Height:
Weight:
Gender ratio: male 87.5%, female 12.5%
Evolution: none
Breeding group: Plant & HumanShape

Stats
HP: 95
Attack: 75
Defense: 75
Special Attack: 120
Special Defense: 75
Speed: 100
Total: 540

Effort Points given: 2 Sp. Atk, 1 Speed
Catch rate:
Growth rate:
Steps to hatch egg:
Base happiness:

Moves
Level Up:
- Teeter Dance
- Trample
- Leer
- Absorb
- Faint Attack
10 Absorb
16 Defense Curl
21 Magical Leaf
22 Faint Attack
28 Scary Face
34 Stomp
39 Rite Dance
40 Scheme
46 Energy Ball
52 Extrasensory
58 Shadow Ball
64 Forest Power
70 Mean Look

Egg:

Tutors:

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http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/7821/firebadger2es6.jpg
These are the Fire starters...

http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/26/watercloud2ss0.jpg
And these are the Water starters.

http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/7289/bugchestnut2rj1.jpg
I like these. They are the generic bugs of this generation. They also are a bit more powerful than the previous bugs, like Butterfree and Dustox.

http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/8240/groundgila2xz7.jpg
Finally, these are the powerful Ground-type lizards. The big one, Quakeon, is the best Pokémon of the fifth or sixth (I haven't decided yet) Gym Leader of Vangor, Terry of Terracotta City.

 

[Omega Pirate]

You made a CLOUD Pokemon and made it's type Water/FIGHTING!?

And, another unimaginative made up Grass starter shaped like a generic leaf. Snore.

 

[Malachite Treecko]

I made it Water/Fighting because Flying would make Grass ineffective to it, Ice would make it have a STAb-ed super-effectiveness against Grass. ut you may have noticed that the second types are SE against their non-benefit starter (Dark > Psychic, Psychic > Fighting, Fighting > Dark), this was meant to make it more fair. Unlike DP; the types isn't that messy. Also the dsappointment of Pochama's evolution not being part-fighting made me using that type for my own starter. First, i would make the trio Grass/Fighting, Fire/Dark, Water/Psychic, but that didn't fit the fire and grass lines as the grass line was inister and the fire line mystical and calm.

Also, I don't think other makes the leaf sinister and blood-thirsty, what I've seen is sprites of eaf with happy faces and puppy-eyes. And this far, Grass-starters have only been animals with plants on their bod rather than plants, and it would be too traditional to make another. And flowers, tree-buds etc aren't original either.

Thanks for your opinion.

 

[Omega Pirate]

I made it Water/Fighting because Flying would make Grass ineffective to it, Ice would make it have a STAb-ed super-effectiveness against Grass. ut you may have noticed that the second types are SE against their non-benefit starter (Dark > Psychic, Psychic > Fighting, Fighting > Dark), this was meant to make it more fair. Unlike DP; the types isn't that messy. Also the dsappointment of Pochama's evolution not being part-fighting made me using that type for my own starter. First, i would make the trio Grass/Fighting, Fire/Dark, Water/Psychic, but that didn't fit the fire and grass lines as the grass line was inister and the fire line mystical and calm.

Yes, but forgetting all that stuff, it's still a cloud. Make it Water/Fighting, just make it look like it could actually pull of a physical attack.

 

[Malachite Treecko]

it can pull off a physical attack. With tail, neck and head, feet, the fist-ish cloud arms. Attack: 100, Sp. Atk: 100.

 

[blazikenBAM]

they're pretty good

i like the cloud pokemon, just maybe....part ice or electric (thunder cloud O_O) or flying. i understand that you're trying to make it the other triangle type groups, but the cloud doesn't scream "phear me, for i can punch you with my condensed water vapors!!" i love the cloud pokemon though!

about the leaf one....it's a leaf....
the evolutions are more interesting....but an animated leaf...kinda generic and that's what everyone comes up with as a grass starter (my first water starter was a raindrop with legs and arms xD)

great job, though
my only crit for them all as a whole: make their evolutions a bit different than the previous evos. they seem a bit too similar, but hey, they are your fakemon...

nice work =D

 

[Paperninja8]

They were awesome ideas, but of corse a leaf, everyone comes up with it as said by blazikenBAM. When I drew a grass starter it was a deer.
With the Cloud pokemon it souldn't be fighting. It just dosn't seem fighting type though it looks good. Consider Flying or Electric.

 

[Elementman-Novapoke]

For the cloud pokemon and people saying it can't throw a punch try putting some cloud fists around it...

 

[Malachite Treecko]

Thanks for your opinions, I'm working on a remake of the Cloud pokémon that actually looks fighting. Though I may consider make it electric. I'm also making the legendaries now.

Also, the Leaf as a starter is very unoriginal, but I didn't feel like making a shaman dressed in leaves.

 

[Dinaria]

Allo.

I too think it's a little strange that the cloud pokémon is part fighting, but I see it as just strange rather than wrong. I can see it work. I think it's sort of similar to Altaria and Swablu though.

The Fire starters are cute. :3 The middle stage is my fav of the three, and the Fire/Psychic combo it's interesting. I made a Fire/Psychic once... ^^ I like it, though I prefer Fire/Dark, but Houndoom already exists, soo. Good work on the Fire line, anyways.

As for the Grass starters, I like the way the Darktype in them is clearly visible. (; Their teeth and eyes practically scream "eviil", so that's thumbs up for you. I like them. But I wonder why the other starters got their second type in their middle stage, while the grass one gets it in it's final?

The bug Chestle makes me think of a pre-evo to Heracross or something. But it reminds me more of that cute ... skalbagge ... in A Bugs Life. ^^ It's cute. The Blosskeet is nice too, and that female Grupillar that looks like a berry. The male Grupillar however is way too reminding of Caterpie, Weedle and Wurmple... I'm pretty tired of caterpillars.

I hope I helped. :3

 

[Malachite Treecko]

The middle stage of the Grass-types is Grass/Dark, but I wrote it too light so the scanner didn't notice. Skalbagge = beetle. I'm thinking of changing the grass line to another. The Grass starter is too unoriginal. But I'll keep the middle stage and the last stage as other, wild Pokémon. I decided that the legendary trio will be horses, not so original however. The pegasus will be PURE flying, the unicorn (new type) light-type and the Sleipner grass-type. I'm bugged of Game Freak for making two grass legendaries that have 100 stats.

 

[Dinaria]

Ooh! Horses! Maybe that's not original but it's still great, and it fits okay with the other trios there is.
Funny you brought in Sleipner. ^^ It will be annoying to draw him if you include all legs though. (; But why is he grass? It's your fakes so you can do whatever you want, of course, but I don't really see it fit with him. He's fighting for me, you know, he's super powerful and all that, so he could just stomp all his foes to death. *grins*
The new grassline is scary <_< I can totally see a ghost in there. It's a good idea. :3

 

[Malachite Treecko]

OK I'll make the Sleipner Fighting instead. Thanks, Dinaria. I took grass for no other reason than I wanted a REAL grass-legendary (Celebi, I like Celebi but it hasn't 'edgy' stats all are att hundred, and the same thing with that DAMN Shiemi.) I will include all legs ^^. Howver I will make another grass legendry then. And the legandary duo (like Latias and Latios, not like Groudon & Kyogre) will be a comet and a twister. I'm about to scan the water line now but the scanner wants to frustrate me and refuses to co operate. Maybe some torture will do... *evil grin*

 

[Chimungus]

that's good!

 

[Malachite Treecko]

i got loads of Fakemon made when the scanner was my enemy. Remember that hey all are in the first post.

 

[shooting star]

They could be better, but they are good.

 

[blazikenBAM]

i'm liking the new update.
the grass starters are MUCH better, a little creepy O_O, but better.
the fire looks good with the color now
and the water is much better as a part electric type, imo
the generic mammal, to me, is a little TOO generic...and it looks too similar when it evolves.

my only complaint: the evo's in some are too similar to the pre-evos (except the giant one with drills. that's a good evolution line)

 

[Malachite Treecko]

I see that too, especially with the woodpeckers. I willmake new today, of the generic mammals (both of them, the plushies too), the light dinosaurs, the woodpeckers and none
Edit: I may make some more tomorrow.
But at monday this thread wont get updated with new pokémon until Christmas time when I visit my father (who has a scanner unlike my mother) again. Then the thread will already be closed, so meh.

But no one cares anyway.

 

[BlazeShadow]

I like em!

 

[Malachite Treecko]

Thanks... but there won't be more for long anyway. ): scanner is needed in Skåne.