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my fakes

splat

Well-Known Member
here i will be posting my fakes.
these are the first ones I will show you:
old version
106107en5.png

It's a fighting line, unnamed yet, but have number 106 and 107 in my dex. The first one is a rookie pokémon, the second a dojo pokémon.

This is a water-ice type. it evolves two times. It is classified as a shell pokémon.
129ug9.png



C+C much appreciated.
I can't think of names aswell, so when you can think of one, please tell :)
 
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nashie1

Well-Known Member
Nice idea but I see what you mean. First off are they based on anything? also it might be a good idea to change the evos pallete but only subtly. Make it slightly darker or something. Maybe add another area of brown.
 

splat

Well-Known Member
yeah, i based it off a kid and his dad i saw at a gym last week:p
yeah, the evo should be a little darker, but what other part should be brown?
 

blazikenBAM

alittlestitious
i like the first stage, but the second stage is a bit too similar to the first one.
possibly make it taller or add some extra features to differenciate the two even more. and i agree with an above post, it might help to make the second stage a bit darker.

good job.
 

Torkoal

What? Exactly
I agree with BlazikenBAM, they're too simple. You need to add some extra features, or just try again completely if you feel they're just not working, you're the artist, so I'll leave desicions like that up to you.
 

nashie1

Well-Known Member
Make like a patch on his stomach brown if you know what i mean. Also maybe it would add a little more flair if the hair on the second one was spikier or omething. did this quickly in paint to show you what i mean.
Editedfakemon.png
sorry for butchering your work but it was quick. I hope this helps you a bit and I would love to see some more fakemon from you.
 

splat

Well-Known Member
actually, i want to thank you, you gave me some ideas on how to change him =D. here is the improved version:
106107en5.png


and here is a new one, a water-ice type. it evolves two times.
129ug9.png


oh, and i can't think of good names. if you know one that seems to fit them, please tell =)
 

splat

Well-Known Member
allright, the fighting ypes are classified as a rookie pokémon, then a dojo pokémon. The dojo pokémon often tutors the rookies.
The water-ice type is classified as a shell pokémon, but has a enormous appetite, and loves to play.
 

blazikenBAM

alittlestitious
checking up on your changes..
i love the improvement to the fighting line. now they look like a very good evolution line!

and the shell pokemon is quite cute xD!
good work!
 

-SI-

I'm baaaaaack
I like them a lot, but they seem to be a little bit too plain.

7/10
 
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