My first crack at an AMV-what to revise?

[FlamingRuby]

I recently experimented with making AMV's last night, and came up with the first draft of a Beautifly AMV, which I call "My Little Beautifly"

Video used: Pokemon-Come What May!
Audio used: DDR-Butterfly (transposed down to A minor)
Program used: Windows Movie Maker

Here's the "first draft" of my masterpiece:

"My Little Beautifly", take 1

Comments of what to cut would be helpful.

 

[Brian Random]

I think you done a pretty good job.

You have the song called Butterfly, and you showed Beautifly doing all these great stunts. I take it that this a tribute to May’s Beautifly, yes?

I don’t know how to make them but I can suggest a few things. Suppose you add some effects when you change scenes, for example, make one screen fade and make another one appear. Check out the Booncy’s and Satoshi’s Lover’s music videos for examples.

If you want I can send you some song suggestions.

Overall score: 4/5

 

[FlamingRuby]

That would be appriciated...I think it came out rather well for a first try...