My first egg!

[Total Shadow]

Thanks Chaos Emerald for the Egg Tutorial! ^_^
This is my first egg ever, so I want you guys to rate it.
Here it is...
~*Total Shadow*~

 

[Kauser79]

Uhh... The link doesn't work.

 

[king krab kingler]

Yeah,I tried to view it and it won't display the page,to show the image right away host here www.*******.com and copy the IMG code to the message

 

[Total Shadow]

Okay then... Come here...

 

[Kauser79]

Okay...

It's pretty good, but the tail should NOT be attached to the front of the egg.
Also, you forgot to recolor the outlines from grey to brown...

And, shrink down the black space around it, and why is it even black? It would look better white.