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My First Egg

burrut13

<--- Bad-***** mofo
HERE IS MY FIRST EGG
egg.jpg

well bash away, jk but constructive critisizm would be nice, i personally think the tail needs to be lower, but that's what other peoples opinions are for
 
burrut13 said:
HERE IS MY FIRST EGG
egg.jpg

well bash away, jk but constructive critisizm would be nice, i personally think the tail needs to be lower, but that's what other peoples opinions are for
1. NEVER save as jpg. It ruins the qualitie, use png.
2. Where the tail joins the body looks akward. The tail is behind the egg no at the front of it.
3.The flame looks wrong. It's not from Char.

~The Arbiter
 
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NickTheDude

Guest
the end of the flame looks cut off and the pic is saved as bmp or jpg or somethin (I didnt chacke) save as png. and gif for animations
 
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NickTheDude

Guest
constructive critisism:

the legs look to well........Pudgey.Not to mention they are cut don towards the inner left and right.

One hand is in front of the egga and the other is in the back well it is hard to tell , as they are uneven.

the flame looks well ......odd 0_0.

the "horn" is to short

the outline is completely messed up......

you included to many parts for a charmeleon egg.

- Hope This Helps
 
But in my opinion you should of never made the arms and the legs on the egg it looks kind of weird.

;003;DARK VENUSAUR;003;
 
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NickTheDude

Guest
hoppip - fine i guess
fearow - erm the wings are distorted....
chikorita - fine i guess aswell
 

Eevee95

Eevee's for Ever
My favorite is the chikorita egg
NOTE: dont make eggs of eveloutoins.... i mean its kinda odd it would hatch out as the first one
 
burrut13 said:
here is another one
betterskittyegg.png


and a better charmeleon egg, i think..
meleonegg.png
That skitty is. Urgh. The outline of the egg is coulor, whereas the rest s black.
Fix it please
 

Starter530

Yes I use MS paint
you are getting better
but for the egg use black on the outline
on the pokemon parts use the original outline

and you can make eggs of eeveelutions or any other evolved pokemon. Its not like they're going to hatch anyway.

also try not to leave so much white space
 
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