My first ever sprite

[kinglax]

Please don't make fun of it. I tried hard, but here it is, Charizardtwo

http://www.serebiiforums.com/images/icons/icon14.gif
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;munchlax; + http://www.serebiiforums.com/images/smilies2/355.gif
;355; = AWSOME!

 

[kinglax]

SORRY. Here it is

 

[aqua air lady]

I don't want to be harsh, but this isn't good
no outlines, (almost) no shading,bad resized and terrible colored
(sorry if that sounded rude)

 

[Elementy]

Dude, they're new, cut them some slack.

New or not, everyone needs advice. Also, your not going to get better by, "YOU ROX" Or "Its okay."

Daniel Zamora of MIA, I'd suggest reading the sprite tutorial thread. It helps a lot.
http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=59110
For mixes: http://www.serebiiforums.com/showpost.php?p=1292632&postcount=2

Those tutorials will help you a lot.

The sprite itself is terrible. There is no shading, and you jsut copy pasted a lot of things. You erased all the original shading in the sprites, and deleted most of the outlining. Try not to make the sprite so sloppy next time :/

 

[Phyco_espeon]

8shakes head and wags finger* i'm "new" too. you dont see me smamming up the threads with really horrible sprites eh,.

 

[MysticFlames]

8shakes head and wags finger* i'm "new" too. you dont see me smamming up the threads with really horrible sprites eh,.

Now that was harsh. It's not his fault. He's looking for advice, which is the point of posting sprites.

Anyways, all needed to be said was said.

 

[Karoshi]

Yea I know it will sound harsh ....

But you should think of trying.

like try giveing some out lines ..