Not bad at all, especially for your first cards! Just some helpful tips for future cards...
*The symbols you used for the Bodies are outdated -- try the
fake card resource thread to find the correct symbols.
*^ Same goes for the attack symbols you used for Snoken's Bahamut and Alien.
*The font used to the description of the bodies looks bold, but it should be the same font as the rest of the attack descriptions (Gill Sans Regular).
*Attack damage should be Gill Sans Regular at size 23.
*Minor wording/capitalization errors. Always capitalize Pokémon (and any words describing it -- IE Defending, Active, Evolved), Knocked Out, etc.
*Shining Ifrit is missing the '-30' by Resistance.
*Did you really draw those pictures? If you did, great job, but if you didn't, don't put your name.
There are other minor errors (text width, placement) that you can check by look at Fang's stickied guide, but they're things you'll learn as you keep faking and get better and better.
Nice work!