My First Fan-Comic What Do You Think?

[OwlFan42]

Tell Me Wat You think!!!!!!
Comic 1:

Comic 2: http://img374.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mycomicwithdetail0os.png
Comic 3: http://img398.imageshack.us/my.php?image=my2linecomic1yk.png

 

[Controller of Flames]

YAY a fellow owl lover!

Your pannels are crookecd, never you pokemon battle sprites their poses are not the best onesyou overworld sprites if you really want to make it pokemon. You need a background you can get a few on google. You also need to make your own edits. I can tell you can due to the one in your sig. Make test using the text opition in paint or Microsoft word. The fly swatter looks like it was made in five secounds.

Take some more pride in your work or we don't want to see it.

(YAY OWLS)

 

[JoshYEAH]

1. -No Background
2. -Nothing really interesting or funny about it
3. -Badly designed

1. Add a background in there, white is just the same as having a monotonne green background.

2. What is the point to it? A ditto getting killed by a swam of flies isn't really funny, nor interesting. This just seems like, and most likely is, something you threw up on a whim in a matter of minutes.

3. The action panels aren't in any form of equilibrium, and some aren't even edged correctly.

I'd say "Needs work" but what is there to work on? Go back, think of an idea, roll with the idea, design and practice with the idea, then try again, is what I need to say.

-Josh

 

[OwlFan42]

alright ill post some more ill make and a edit of that one

 

[shinz]

I like your style. it's funny but a bit blanc

 

[Omega X]

Yay! Another Ditto killer! Alright, the comic sucks by itself, but just because is a Ditto-killing comic, I'll give it a 10 out of 10.

 

[Pokefan26]

Backrounds have NOTHING on them.
It's not funny.
And it makes no sense.

The panels are cut off. And the graphics are bad, you can't even tell what the Ditto is doing.

 

[Bu†cH]

Backrounds have NOTHING on them.
It's not funny.
And it makes no sense.
The panels are cut off. And the graphics are bad.

I'd have to agree with her review.

You can't even tell what the Ditto is doing.

Well I can.
The Ditto just swatted a fly and a bunch of them came to kill him.

 

[OwlFan42]

Heres another one i made

 

[shinz]

I love the new comic

 

[Bu†cH]

Better, but "I'll work on the backgrounds later" is a lame excuse.
A good comic is never rushed. It takes much time and work to make it perfect.

I work my *** off with every issue of my comic.
The only comics I've ever rushed were bonuses that wasn't related to my primary comic's story.

 

[OwlFan42]

thanks for the advice

 

[blueguy]

Tell Me Wat You think!!!!!!

It needs some work. The first thing that strikes me is that the panels are very messy. Paint has an option which creates squares. Try to use this to make your panels even, and it'll be much nicer to look at... The graphics are a bit off, and I think you should have given different expressions for Ditto in each panel. It gives it more variety and makes each panel more interesting.

 

[OwlFan42]

I wonder can you have more then 1 fan-comic theread open cause i cheacked the rules and i didnt see any therad rules

 

[Latias Fanatic]

kool
DASH THE UNICORN RULEZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!