My First Fan Fic!! THE FINAL SHOWDOWN

[The Red Butterfly]

Hey! I'm new here and this is my first fan fic! I hope u all really like it!
THE FINAL SHOWDOWN
chapter1



Dear Mr. Ketchum,

It's my pleasure to inform you that you have been nominated to partake in the Elite Pokèmon League. This is one of the most prestigious leagues there are and the winner gets $10,000 and a sot in the Evergrande City Hall of Fame. In order to be eligible (which you are) you had to be nominated by at least 8 gym leaders or you had to have special recommendations from the league officials. The gym leaders that nominated you are:

1.)Erica-Celadon
2.)Flint-Pewter
3.)Norman-Petalburg
4.)Claire-Blackthorne
5.)Whitney-Goldenrod
6.)Koga-Fushia
7.)Lt.Surge-Vermillion
8.)Misty-Cerulean

If you would like to compete in this competition please call me and confirm that you got this letter. There will be 8 competitors including you. The competition will take place in Evergande City in 2 weeks. So Congratulations and good luck!

Sincerely,
Steven Stone- League Coordinator

Ash pulled the letter back from his face in astonishment. "Wow! I can't believe this" he exclaimed.

"What did the letter say?" May asked as she came back from getting her Pokemon from Nurse Joy.

"It says I get to compete in the Elite Pokèmon League!" he yelled so happily that a few people stopped and stared.

"That's so cool, my Dad competed in that competition before when he was younger. He says that it's really hard to get into!" Max chimed in.

"I know it says here that there will be 8 competitors including me. I wonder if I'll know any of them" Ash said still staring happily at his letter.

"Hey, I know since there's a phone here at the Pokèmon center why don't you just call Steven and ask if he knows who's competing" Brock added. "That's a great idea Brock" May told him.

"I guess I should. I mean it says here I'm supposed to." Ash said rereading the letter to make sure he was right.

"WELL THEN WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR??!!" the group yelled at him.

Ash walked over to the phone and started dialing the number he was given. "Hello, this is Steven Stone how may I help you" he asked.

"Hi Steven it's Ash."

"And May"

"Max too"

"Don't forget about Brock" the group said to the screen.


"Oh, hi you guys! How've you been?" Steven asked.

"Great!" they said together.

"Steven I got your letter and I was wondering who all is going to be there besides me" Ash said into the phone.

"Well why don't you find out for yourself? I'm hosting a party tonight for the 16 trainers and their friends so they all can get to know each other."Steven told him.

"16!! You said there was only going to be 8 trainers including me!" Ash yelled in confusion.

"Yes I know I said that in the letter but 16 trainers start in the competition. There will be an elimination round that will result in the 8 trainers for the battling round. I'm terribly sorry that I forgot to add that" Steven said to him.

"It's okay, that makes sense now I guess" Ash replied.

"Well the party is tonight like I said so I'm glad you called. If you want to come it will be held at the roof of the Devon Corp. building at 7:30 sharp" He said.

"Great I'll come" Ash said excited.

"And your friends are also welcome to come if they wish" Steven added.

"Thanks" they all said and then Ash hung up.

"Well come on guys we need to go shopping for the party and we only have a couple of hours to find the perfect outfit SO COME ON!!!" May yelled while heading for the door.

"Should we just make her think that were following her but really start heading to the party ourselves?" Max asked dreading the fact the he might have to shop with his sister.

"C'mon guys we better hurry if we want to catch up with her." Brock sad glumly and they all slowly moped across to the doors.

They eventually caught up with May and walked around for a while until they found a dress/tux store that May dragged them into. Brock found his tux first. He tried it on then came out of the fitting room and looked in the mirror at himself. The tux was a dark shade of green and he wore a white under shirt that accented his brown hair. "Well don't you look very handsome in your tux" May said walking out of the dressing room wearing her dress.

"I look good? Look at you!" Brock said. May had her hair up in a ponytail and had a piece of dark blue ribbon tied in it. Her dress was a halter dress and it was navy blue so it brought out her eyes very nicely.

"Thank you" she said giggling and slightly blushing. Max was the next one out. He had on the traditional black tux and white undershirt.

"Max you look cute too" May said complimenting her brothers nice choice for such a young age. "Thanks" Max said smiling and admiring himself in the mirror. Ash was the last one out. He wore a deep maroon tux with thick black stripes running down the arms. He also had on a black undershirt and black pants. His usual hat hair was slicked back with two bangs left to hang down in front of his face.

"Wow" the group said in unison staring at Ash which made him uncomfortable so he said,

"Uuugh I knew tux's looked bad on me."

"No Ash you look....FANTASTIC" May said happily and very pleased with everyone’s fashion choices.

"Well I guess I don’t look that bad..." Ash said eyeing himself in the mirror.

"OF COURSE IT DOESN'T NOW COME ON WERE GOING TO BE LATE IF WE DON'T GET GOING NOW!!!" May yelled dragging everyone to the cash register. "Listen were in a hurry so can you just ring up the clothes on us?" May asked.

"Um, sure- I guess I could" the saleslady said looking at all the price tags. "Okay that will be $50.25" she said. The gang paid and left.

They got outside and started walking when they heard the roar of a car coming from behind them. "WATCH OUT GET OUT OF THE ROAD!" the man inside the car yelled. The group quickly got onto the sidewalk. The driver zoomed past them and then took a really sharp turn and crashed in front of them. The guy got of the car and brushed himself off. "Hi Professor Birch" the group said. "Hey guys, long time no see. Sorry I almost hit ya there" he said laughing. The group laughed nervously along with him. "So what are you guys up to?" he asked them.

"We were invited to a party in Rustburo Professor" Ash answered.

"You're not talking about the Elite Pokèmon League party held by Steven Stone are you?" Birch asked.

"Yup, that's the one" Ash said happily.

"Well, I'm on way over there now so why don't I just take you there?" Birch said. The group looked at each other nervously. "Come on now hope on in we have 10 minutes to get there and 20 miles to cover so lets go!" Professor Birch said to them. The group hoped in. "Ok guys hang onto your seatbelts!" Birch yelled and then he slammed the gas pedal and took off. They dodged (and almost hit) 10 cars. He zoomed into Rusburo and turned into the parking lot of the Devon Corp but didn't stop fast enough and crashed into the glass doors of the Devon Corp. Building. Everyone got out and brushed themselves off.

"Well look who crashed the party" Steven said smirking "I'm glad you all could show up" he said handing out name tags.

"So where is your father I needed to talk top him about something." Birch told Steven. "He's in his office. Feel free to go up there now if you'd like" Steven answered.

"Great!" Birch said heading up the stairs. "It was good seeing you all again" He said.

"Yeah, you too" the group said.

"Let's go upstairs to the party shall we?" Steven asked leading the group up the stairs to the roof. He opened the door and entered them to the party. There was a ton of people talking, dancing and eating. The pokemon were enjoying themselves too!

"Wow! you guys did a great job on the party!" May said in awe of the decorations. There was about 20 tables set up with black cloth draped over them. The centerpieces on the table were roses in a clear vase. Fine china was set up at every seat for the guests. Balloons covered the perimeter of the roof and there were lights on the corners that shined down on everything and that reflected on the guests.

"Hey May look at all the food over at that table lets go get some!" Max said pulling his sister to the table full of delicious foods

"Well I'm going to see if there are any pretty girls around here" Brock said. As he walked away Ash heard him say "Hey there cutie pie, did you get here because of your beauty skills because if you did you'd have no problem winning" Ash rolled his eyes.

“When will Brock ever learn" he muttered under his breath. Just then he heard a voice from behind him say,

"Well, well, well if it isn't Ashyboy!" Ash turned around and was shocked when he saw who was standing right behind him.


That is the end of my first chapter i hope u all like it I'm sorry if thers any spelling errors or anything!!!! Please tell me what you think of this so I know what I can improve on and what is already good! THANK YOU!!!!!!! and thanx to Perfect Darkness!!

 

[Perfect Darkness]

I was awed. Seriously. It has a small amount of potentiol possibly but was clouded horribly by the amount of mistakes you included in your fic here. You really do. Okay, I will PM you the vesion spell checked and grammer revised. But seriously, your writing needs a little touching up. More description and better grammer and spelling. Please. Edit it up a bit and I will look a bit more into it. Also, to the the è when you write Pokèmon, just copy the one I have and place it in your own fic.

~;353;

 

[Luxuria]

Its alright but i think that people get annoyed by seeing the names ASH, MAY, BROCK in a lot of fics. Try making up different character names and everything keeps mixing in if you know what I mean. It's kinda hard to follow.

 

[The Red Butterfly]

Chapter 2

"Gary? What are you doing here?" Ash asked confused by the sudden appearance of his old rival.

"What? You don't think I'm good enough trainer to be here?" Gary asked as joke but Ash didn't catch on. "No, No...It's not that...I meant..." Ash started to say all nervously but then Gary cut in.

"For the love of god take a breath, I was just kidding. Also I wanted to introduce you to my girlfriend who will also be competeing." Gary told him while motioning a girl over to him. She walked over to Gary holding some food. "This is Holly and she's one of the best trainers I know!"

Holly blushed and moved a strand of her deep magenta hair out of her face to get a better view of Ash. "I'm not that good of a trainer. I only started training my new pokèmon a little while ago." she said putting her plate down on the table behind them.

"Don't be so modest Holly you know you're good, She was named number two trainer for three weeks in a row in Top Trainers weekly. " Gary said beaming.

Ash's jaw dropped. "YOU WERE NAMED NUMBER TWO TRAINER!!!" he yelled shocked.

"Don't forget she was named it three weeks in a row too!" Gary added, feeling the need to show off his tough girlfriend.

Holly laughed. "Gary stop, it's not like I'm number one or anything. This girl keeps beating me and she hasn't moved from the number one spot in like two months." Holly explained.

"Wow two months as number one? Do you think she's competeing?" Ash asked. He suddenly felt the biggest urge to find this girl and challenge her to a match.

"Probably, I think I saw her a while ago but I'm not sure. Personally I don't think she should be aloud to compete because she's been a gym leader." Holly told Ash. Gary started to look pretty boerd.

"She used to be a gym leader? From what city?" Ash asked interested. Gary eyes started to glaze over.

"I don't know, I'm positive Cerulean and I remember she had bright orange hair." holly said giving Gary a sympathedic look after realizign he was fighting to stay awake.

"Orange hair? Are you sure?" Ash asked. "Yeah and she's over there" Holly said pointing at a girl not to far away from them talking to some guy. "Ok, well I'm going to go. It was nice meeting you Holly and good seeing you again Gary!" Ash said to them starting to inch towards the girl.

"Oh ya it was so much fun" Gary said sarcastically as Ash got farther away.

As Ash finaly got within arms length of the girl Holly pointed at he took a deep breath and said "Misty?" not fully 100% sure it was her. She turned around and gota huge smile on her face. "Hey Ash! I knew you'd be here"

"Really....I didn't know you would" he said akwardly trying not to sound mean.

"I know, a lot of people were surprised to see me here" she said flipping her hair behind her. "OH! I saw Ritchie here earlier but I don't know where he's at now." Misty said looking around.

"Ritchies here too?" "I'm seeing a lot of my old friends here then." he said "Did you come all the way from Kanto?" he asked, which he then regreted because it was kind of a dumb question.

"Yeah, my sisiters said I could come. I think they care more about me winning the money though. With me gone from the gym it's kind of lucky for the little kids because my sisters will probably be giving away free badges." Misty joked. Ash laughed a bit although he didn't fully get why that was so funny. There was an akward silence and they both looked down at their feet. Not the reunion they had hoped for.

"So..I read in my letter that you nominated me." Ash said finally breaking the ice.

"Yeah, I always thaought you wre a good trainer so i signed for you." she said blushing a bit.

"Oh.. Thanks" Ash said. he was going to say more but then the roof lights went out and it got pitch black like the night.

Some people let out a scream. Others were trying to feel out where their friends were. "Ash what's going on?" Misty asked loudly trying to get Ash's attention over the peoples screams. "I don't know....Maybe it was a fuse or something." He yelled back to her.

All of the sudden lights appeared on the back wall and three shadow figures shown. One was a girl with ong hair that flipped at the end, the other one as a guy with shorter hair that almost hit his shoulder. Then there was a cat in the middle of them. Ash then muttered under his breath "Oh no, don't tell me it's..."

"Ha ha ha ha ha, Prepare for trouble" "and make it double.."

"HEY WHAT'S GOING ON HERE?? WHO ARE YOU GUYS??!!" someone in the crowd demanded.

The shadow figures jumped of the side of the roof and on to the floor where they became visible to everyone. "IF YOU LET US FINISH OUR MOTTO YOU'D KNOW BY NOW!" The long haired one said.

"TEAM ROCKET WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?" Ash yelled to them.

"You think you'd know this by now twerp! Were here to steal everyone's pokèmon!" James said.

"You're not taking anyones pokèmon!" Steven shouted.

"Funny, I don't really think you have a say in that." Jessie remarked rudely. "Meowth turn on the newly improved pokèmon stealing device" James yelled. "You got it Jimmy!" meowth said. The balloon then came into sight and more people screamed. "Alright ready? Here we go!" Meowth said pushing the red button he was holding. Five giant vaccum like devices came out of the balloon and statred sucking up things at high speed.

Pokèmon wre flying up towards the balloon away from their trainers who were frantically chasing after them. The decorations, food and fine china plates were being tossed all over the place. "ASH WE NEED TO HELP THEM!" Misty yelled over all the noise once again while she and Ash held on tightly to the roofs' balcony bar. "You're right, let me get Gary to help!" Ash said

"GARY HELP MISTY AND I BATTTLE TEAM ROCKET!" Ash shouted trying to get Garys attetion.

"Ok!" Gary said running towards them while trying to dodge the flying objects with Holly close behind him.

"Alright Pikachu lets go!" ash said letting Pikachu off his shoulder.

"Nidoqueen I choose you" Gary said throwing his pokèball. "Jynx we need you!" Holly said realeasing her pokèmon after gary.

Misty kissed her pokèball and yelled "Gyarados come on out"

"Uugh, those twerps think they have us beat! But they can't attck us while were up here!" Jessie taunted.

"We have to stop those fans from working" Gary said eyeing the balloon. "I have an idea" Misty said. "Ummm, what's your name again?" she asked Holly. "My name is Holly" she answered. "Ok Holly, have your Jynx get on my Gyradoses back and then I'll have it fling Jynx up to the balloon and then Jynx can ice-punch the machines! "Ok! good idea!" Holly said. "Jynx get on Gyaradoses back!" she commanded. Jynx hopde on. "Ok, now Gyarados
fling Jynx up towards the balloon!" Misty told her pokèmon. Gyarados flung Jynx up to the balloon. "JYNX USE ICE PUNCH ON THE MACHINES!" she yelled to her pokèmon. Unfortunatey Jynx got sucked up by one of the machines.

"OH NO JYNX!" Holly cried. "It's all right Holly, we'll get Jynx back for you!" Gary reassured her. "Ok Ash, Misty were going to all use our toughest attacks on the balloon ok!" Gary told them. "Ok!" they said together. "Nidoqueen Hyperbeam!" "Gyaradose Dragon Rage!" "Pikachu Thunder!" they all said to their own pokèmon. The pokèmon all launched their attacks and hit the ballon which caused a huge explosion. All the pokèmon that got sucked in luckily landed safely in their trainers arms.

"Jynx!" Holly yelled happily when she saw her pokèmon float down towards her. "It's so good to se you again!" She said cradling it before returing it back into it's pokèball.

"Great job guys!" Steven said to the group. "Thanks" they all said. May, Brock and Max gave Ash the thumbs up on his work. "Stay here I have to make an announcement to the group." Steven told them.

Steven walked up onto the edge of the roof so everybody could see him. "Trainers I have something to say. I had something very important planned for you guys but it has to be postponed until tommorow due to Team Rocket's mess. You see as trainers you all need to be prepared for a battle at anytime. Even when you weren't planning to battle anyone that day. That show's a sign of a real Alete trainer. So please stay at the rooms here in the building and tommorow morning be ready because were having the first round of eliminations for the Alete Pokèmon League."


Well that's all of chapter two. I hoped you all liked it because I worked really hard on it. PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THOUGHT ABOUT MY STORY SO FAR!!! I'D REALLY LIKE TO KNOW WHAT YOU ALL THINK!!!! THANKS!!!!!!!

 

[Luxuria]

Ritchies here too

Ritchie's

wre

were

ong

long

The red headed one said.

I thought there was only a long haired one and short haired one.

wre

another were

Gyaradose

take out the "E"

Pickachu

take out the "C"

Pretty good but i think these were your only flaws.
i don't think you re-read it due to all the mistakes. You might have but wern't bothered to
change it.

 

[The Red Butterfly]

Chapter 3

The next morning after breakfast all the trainers met up again on the roof to hear about the elimination rounds.

"So Pikachu are you ready for today buddy?" Ash asked to the pokemon on his shoulder. "Pika!" It replied happily. "What about you guys?" Ash asked his other friends next to him.

"I can't wait, this is going to be so exciting!" Misty cheered while cleaning her pokeballs so they looked nice.

"I'm ready for it" Holly said putting up her hair. "How 'bout you Gar?" she asked Gary, who was sitting next to her with his head down.

"I'll tell you when I'm up" he mumbled under his breath. "Oh, you're SO CUTE!" Holly shrieked. Then she threw a huge hug on him that jolted him up. "Ok! I'm up!" he said while trying to pry Holly off him.

"So Ash where is May, Max and Brock?" Misty asked. "Oh, well since they're ot competetors their just going to head up to Evergrande and meet me up there." he explained. "Ok that sounds cool she said.

A girl with long brown hair and and a guy with light brown hair started heading toward the group. The girl was wearing a long black dress and they guy had on blue jeand and a green shirt with a black leather jacket over him. He was pretty tall.

"Hey Ash! How've you been?" The guy asked as he neared them.

"Um....good. Who are you?" he asked confused. "It's me Harrison, from the johto league." he answered.

"Oh Harrison hey! Sorry I didn't recognise you!" Ash said to his old friend. Harrison laughed. "I get that a lot." he remarked. "Oh ya, Ash this is my sister Samantha." he said introducing the girl who was next to him.

"Hi samantha." Ash said to the girl. She nodded. "Who are the rest of you guys?" She asked the group. "I'm Misty" Misty said introducing herself. "Oh I remember you." Harrison said. "I'm Holly and this is my boyfriend Gary." Holly said. "Gary Oak? As in Professor Oaks grandson?" Samantha asked. "Ya that's right." Gary answered.

"OH MY GOD I'M LIKE YOUR HUGEST FAN! I READ ALL OF YOUR RESEARCH BOOKS! THEY ARE LIKE SO AWESOME!" Samantha squeeled. "Thanks" Gary said while blushing but quickly stopped after he saw Holly glaring at him. "Well there's six of us here so that means ten other people still have to come out before we can do anything." Harrison said looking around.

"I don't get it Steven said the league was going to take place in Evergrande City so are we still going over there?" Misty asked confused. "I don't know. I mean Steven said be prepared for anything so we might go or we might not go." Samantha answred.

After some time past and the group had gotten breakfast all the trainers were on the roof and Steven came out.

"Good Morning everyone, I hope you slept well because you are going to need a ton of energy today. As I said in the letter this competion will still be held in Evergrande city the only twist is you're going to have to get there on your own and you have only five days to do that. You cannot use any means of transportation except for your pokemon. If you wish to travel with one other person you may. You can leave anytime you want today and I have a map of where Evergrande City is if you do not already know. Good luck and I'll see you in five days." Steven told everyone and then turned around and right before he went to leave he looked back at the roup and said, "Anyone who fails to get to Evergrande within the five day limit will be immediatley disqualified with no exeptions." after he said that he walked through the door to go downstairs.

"So we only have five days to get to Evergrande? That's not fair!" Holly complained.

"Who's going with who?" Gary asked looking around at the group but then Holly got ahold of his face and directed it towards hers. "You're going with me silly!" she said.

"Ok, I don't want to be stuck with my brother the whole time so I'm going with you Ash." Samantha said. Misty's expression sank when she heard this.I wanted to go with Ash though... she thought to herself.

"Well Misty looks like you're going with me." Harrison said "Guess so" she said while forcing a fake smile.

"Ok now that we know who were with lets get a map and get going" Ash said heading towards the maps with Samantha following.

After everyone got their maps they all wished eachother good luck and headed seperate ways.

"So Ash were are you from?" Samantha asked.

"Pallet Town, you're from Cherrygrove right?" He said remembering that Harrison had told him that Cherrygrove was his hometown. "That's right she said smiling. "That's such a cute pikachu when did you catch it?" she asked petting the pokemon on Ash's shoulder. "Oh I didn't catch Pikachu I got it from Professor Oak as my first Pokemon because baulbasaur, charmander and squirtle were already taken. I was pretty bummed out at first but now I'm glad I got pikachu because it's my beat friend right pikachu?" ash asked. "Chu chu!" the pokemon replied happily.

"That's so cute." she said. "So what way do you want to go?" Samantha asked looking around. "Well I thought we could ride our pokemon over the water and then keep going until we hit a City that's within walking distance of Evergrande." Ash suggested.

"I knew I picked the right person" Samantha said nugging him on the shoulder which made Ash blush. "What water pokemon do you have?" Ash asked. "I have a Lapras that we can both ride." Samantha said releasing the pokemon into the water. Both her and Ash got on.

They were riding for a while and talking about their past league battles.

"You competed in the Kanto League to that year?" Ash asked. "I don't remember you from it."

"Well what place did you come in?" Samantha asked.

"In the top 16" he boasted but then dropped his happy expression when Samantha burst out in laughter. "Oh my god you came in the top 16? That's horrible!" she said trying to contain herself.

"IT IS NOT! AND IF MY PLACE IS SO BAD WHAT PLACE DID YOU COME IN?" Ash yelled playfully.

"Top four" she said. ash's expression dropped again.

"That's just as bad!" He said jokingly.

"It is not!" she laughed. They both laughed a while then stopped once they noticed the wind had picked up pretty quickly.

"Boy it's getting cold" Samantha complained asshe moved close to Ash. He thought about Misty and almost moved back but he didn't want to seem rude and he was cold too.

The clouds started forming together and went from a light gray to a charcoal color. The wind got even faster and statred whipping the waves all over the place. Ash and samantha huddled close and held on as tight as they could to Lapras's spikes. Lapras was having a hard time riding due to the darkness and waves moving it back. Also with all the wind everywhere it had a hard time keeping it's eyes open. "LAPRAS!" It whined.

"Oh, it's ok Lapras we'll be alright" Samantha reasurred her pokemon.

With rain starting to pour, thunder rolling, lightning flashing across the sky and no island in sight the trainers rode deeper into the storm.

Well that's the end of chapter 3. I really hope I did ok on this one and there weren't to many spelling and grammer errors. So if there are I'm sorry. Please tell me what you thought of this chapter I need some reviews!!! Thanks!

 

[The Red Butterfly]

Chapter 3

The next morning after breakfast all the trainers met up again on the roof to hear about the elimination rounds.

"So Pikachu are you ready for today buddy?" Ash asked to the pokemon on his shoulder. "Pika!" It replied happily. "What about you guys?" Ash asked his other friends next to him.

"I can't wait, this is going to be so exciting!" Misty cheered while cleaning her pokeballs so they looked nice.

"I'm ready for it" Holly said putting up her hair. "How 'bout you Gar?" she asked Gary, who was sitting next to her with his head down.

"I'll tell you when I'm up" he mumbled under his breath. "Oh, you're SO CUTE!" Holly shrieked. Then she threw a huge hug on him that jolted him up. "Ok! I'm up!" he said while trying to pry Holly off him.

"So Ash where is May, Max and Brock?" Misty asked. "Oh, well since they're ot competetors their just going to head up to Evergrande and meet me up there." he explained. "Ok that sounds cool she said.

A girl with long brown hair and and a guy with light brown hair started heading toward the group. The girl was wearing a long black dress and they guy had on blue jeand and a green shirt with a black leather jacket over him. He was pretty tall.

"Hey Ash! How've you been?" The guy asked as he neared them.

"Um....good. Who are you?" he asked confused. "It's me Harrison, from the johto league." he answered.

"Oh Harrison hey! Sorry I didn't recognise you!" Ash said to his old friend. Harrison laughed. "I get that a lot." he remarked. "Oh ya, Ash this is my sister Samantha." he said introducing the girl who was next to him.

"Hi samantha." Ash said to the girl. She nodded. "Who are the rest of you guys?" She asked the group. "I'm Misty" Misty said introducing herself. "Oh I remember you." Harrison said. "I'm Holly and this is my boyfriend Gary." Holly said. "Gary Oak? As in Professor Oaks grandson?" Samantha asked. "Ya that's right." Gary answered.

"OH MY GOD I'M LIKE YOUR HUGEST FAN! I READ ALL OF YOUR RESEARCH BOOKS! THEY ARE LIKE SO AWESOME!" Samantha squeeled. "Thanks" Gary said while blushing but quickly stopped after he saw Holly glaring at him. "Well there's six of us here so that means ten other people still have to come out before we can do anything." Harrison said looking around.

"I don't get it Steven said the league was going to take place in Evergrande City so are we still going over there?" Misty asked confused. "I don't know. I mean Steven said be prepared for anything so we might go or we might not go." Samantha answred.

After some time past and the group had gotten breakfast all the trainers were on the roof and Steven came out.

"Good Morning everyone, I hope you slept well because you are going to need a ton of energy today. As I said in the letter this competion will still be held in Evergrande city the only twist is you're going to have to get there on your own and you have only five days to do that. You cannot use any means of transportation except for your pokemon. If you wish to travel with one other person you may. You can leave anytime you want today and I have a map of where Evergrande City is if you do not already know. Good luck and I'll see you in five days." Steven told everyone and then turned around and right before he went to leave he looked back at the roup and said, "Anyone who fails to get to Evergrande within the five day limit will be immediatley disqualified with no exeptions." after he said that he walked through the door to go downstairs.

"So we only have five days to get to Evergrande? That's not fair!" Holly complained.

"Who's going with who?" Gary asked looking around at the group but then Holly got ahold of his face and directed it towards hers. "You're going with me silly!" she said.

"Ok, I don't want to be stuck with my brother the whole time so I'm going with you Ash." Samantha said. Misty's expression sank when she heard this.I wanted to go with Ash though... she thought to herself.

"Well Misty looks like you're going with me." Harrison said "Guess so" she said while forcing a fake smile.

"Ok now that we know who were with lets get a map and get going" Ash said heading towards the maps with Samantha following.

After everyone got their maps they all wished eachother good luck and headed seperate ways.

"So Ash were are you from?" Samantha asked.

"Pallet Town, you're from Cherrygrove right?" He said remembering that Harrison had told him that Cherrygrove was his hometown. "That's right she said smiling. "That's such a cute pikachu when did you catch it?" she asked petting the pokemon on Ash's shoulder. "Oh I didn't catch Pikachu I got it from Professor Oak as my first Pokemon because baulbasaur, charmander and squirtle were already taken. I was pretty bummed out at first but now I'm glad I got pikachu because it's my beat friend right pikachu?" ash asked. "Chu chu!" the pokemon replied happily.

"That's so cute." she said. "So what way do you want to go?" Samantha asked looking around. "Well I thought we could ride our pokemon over the water and then keep going until we hit a City that's within walking distance of Evergrande." Ash suggested.

"I knew I picked the right person" Samantha said nugging him on the shoulder which made Ash blush. "What water pokemon do you have?" Ash asked. "I have a Lapras that we can both ride." Samantha said releasing the pokemon into the water. Both her and Ash got on.

They were riding for a while and talking about their past league battles.

"You competed in the Kanto League to that year?" Ash asked. "I don't remember you from it."

"Well what place did you come in?" Samantha asked.

"In the top 16" he boasted but then dropped his happy expression when Samantha burst out in laughter. "Oh my god you came in the top 16? That's horrible!" she said trying to contain herself.

"IT IS NOT! AND IF MY PLACE IS SO BAD WHAT PLACE DID YOU COME IN?" Ash yelled playfully.

"Top four" she said. ash's expression dropped again.

"That's just as bad!" He said jokingly.

"It is not!" she laughed. They both laughed a while then stopped once they noticed the wind had picked up pretty quickly.

"Boy it's getting cold" Samantha complained asshe moved close to Ash. He thought about Misty and almost moved back but he didn't want to seem rude and he was cold too.

The clouds started forming together and went from a light gray to a charcoal color. The wind got even faster and statred whipping the waves all over the place. Ash and samantha huddled close and held on as tight as they could to Lapras's spikes. Lapras was having a hard time riding due to the darkness and waves moving it back. Also with all the wind everywhere it had a hard time keeping it's eyes open. "LAPRAS!" It whined.

"Oh, it's ok Lapras we'll be alright" Samantha reasurred her pokemon.

With rain starting to pour, thunder rolling, lightning flashing across the sky and no island in sight the trainers rode deeper into the storm.

Well that's the end of chapter 3. I really hope I did ok on this one and there weren't to many spelling and grammer errors. So if there are I'm sorry. Please tell me what you thought of this chapter I need some reviews!!! Thanks!

 

[The Red Butterfly]

sorry my computer copied my chapter 3 twice!

 

[The Red Butterfly]

Chapter 4

The storm raged on and Samantha and Ash prayed and held on for dear life.
“Ash what are we going to do?” Samantha asked tightly gripping Ash’s arm. Ash was holding pikachu as close to him as possible.

“I don’t know there aren’t any Islands around here.” He replied.
“Oh…. Lapras how are you holding up?” she asked her pokemon hoping it was alright. “LAPRAS!” It cried terrified of the blinding storm.

The waves got higher and more powerful while the wind blew harder. It ended up blowing Ash’s hat right off his had and straight up into the sky.

“MY HAT!” Ash yelled. He went to attempt to grab it but by time he got his arm up to retrieve it, the hat was already out of sight. “Please let us get out of here alive.” Ash muttered under his breath.

Meanwhile…..
“Harrison the storm is getting worse” Misty said. She and Harrison were flying on Harrison’s Flygon so they were pretty much in front row seats for the storm.

“I know…..but there’s nothing we can do but keep going.” He told her while concentrating below them to see if he could spot shelter of some sort.

“Can you see anything?” misty asked scared. “Not yet we’ve only been traveling for about seven miles so there won’t be land anytime soon I think.” Harrison said getting aggravated with Misty’s non-stop questions. Misty sighed and shielded her eyes from the pounding rain. In the distance she could see a reddish object coming towards them.

‘Hey what’s that?” she asked, pointing out the object to Harrison. “I don’t know but duck down out of the way so it doesn’t hit you!” Harrison said lowering down a bit trying to avoid being hit by an unidentified object. Misty However didn’t listen; she extended her hand out as far as she could and just barely caught the flying object. She looked down at what she caught and gasped.

“UH! IT’S ASH’S HAT! I hope he’s ok!” Misty said starting to panic. “I’m sure he and Samantha are just fine. Anyway it’s really windy out here so he was bound to lose it.” Harrison reassured her. I just hope he’s alright. If anything happened to him…….I don’t know what I’d do. Misty thought while looking down at the water.

“ASH? ASH? PIKACHU?” Samantha screamed as loud as she could. Pikachu had slipped out of Ash’s arms and into the water so Ash dove in to find him and hasn’t come back. Samantha looked around and then spotted one of his gloves floating in the water.

I have to go find him! Samantha thought. She got out a hair tie and pulled her long hair back so it wouldn’t get in her face. “Lapras stay here while I go find ash and Pikachu” she told her pokemon.

She then dove into the freezing water. It felt as if a ton of icicles were stabbing her suddenly numb body. She took a deep breath and went under water. It was very blurry, there were only two colors dark blue and black. She felt the pressure from the rain and waves on her back. Then she realized she needed air now! She swam to the surface and found her way out. She gaped for the air but was cut short by a huge wave. When she got back up again she horrified to realize her Lapras was no where in sight. So Ash was out there somewhere and probably not conscious along with Pikachu. Her only hope of survival was gone too! There was only one thing she could think of to do. “HELP! PLEASE SOMEONE HELP ME!” she screamed frantically and as loud as she could.

“Harrison did you hear that?” Misty asked. “Obviously not.” He answered aggravated.

“It sounded like someone was screaming for help.” She said not giving up on convincing Harrison that she did really hear something.

“You’re just hearing things” he said. “No really I heard someone; it could have been Samantha Harrison. She and Ash could be in trouble!” she yelled at him. Harrison gave up and sighed.

“Flygon fly down a bit” he told his pokemon, which obeyed immediately.

They looked around a bit but couldn’t see anything. “Misty no one’s down here.” Harrison said annoyed. “Flygon go back u-““WAIT!” Misty interrupted. “Look over there it’s Samantha!” she said pointing towards her. “Flygon go to Samantha now!” Harrison ordered. Flygon immediately recognized Samantha and headed towards her. As soon as Samantha saw her bother she started to cry of happiness. “Harrison you’re here!” She screamed. “Here get on” he said putting his hand out for her to grab. Samantha held on extra tight due to the rain, so their hands were slippery. Harrison then pulled her on his Flygon between him and Misty. Samantha panted due to lack of oxygen and from being worn out from swimming.

“What’s wrong are you ok?” Harrison asked. “And where’s Ash?” misty demanded to know.

“He’s….he’s….not with me. Pikachu fell off my Lapras and fell into the water so ash dove in after it and I haven’t seen him since. My Lapras disappeared also.” She managed to get out. “How long ago did he go out?” Harrison asked worried for his friends’ sake.

“I don’t know maybe ten to fifteen minutes.” Samantha guessed. “OH NO! Ash could be unconscious or hurt out there somewhere. I have to go find him!” Misty said worried. “MISTY! NO DON’T-“Harrison started to say but it was to late. Misty jumped off of Flygon to find Ash, which in a storm like this could be impossible.

 

[Perfect Darkness]

Chapter 3

"I'll tell you when I'm up" he mumbled under his breath. "Oh, you're SO CUTE!" Holly shrieked. Then she threw a huge hug on him that jolted him up. "Ok! I'm up!" he said while trying to pry Holly off him.

"I'll tell you when I'm up" he mumbled under his breath.

"Oh, you're SO CUTE!" Holly shrieked. Then she threw a huge hug on him that jolted him up.

"Ok! I'm up!" he said while trying to pry Holly off him.

"So Ash where is May, Max and Brock?" Misty asked. "Oh, well since they're ot competetors their just going to head up to Evergrande and meet me up there." he explained. "Ok that sounds cool she said.

"So Ash where is May, Max and Brock?" Misty asked.

"Oh, well since they're not competitors their just going to head up to Evergrande and meet me up there." he explained.

"Ok that sounds cool," she said.

Chapter 4

“MISTY! NO DON’T-“Harrison started

“MISTY! NO DON’T-”

They looked around a bit but couldn’t see anything. “Misty no one’s down here.” Harrison said annoyed. “Flygon go back u-““WAIT!” Misty interrupted. “Look over there it’s Samantha!” she said pointing towards her. “Flygon go to Samantha now!” Harrison ordered. Flygon immediately recognized Samantha and headed towards her. As soon as Samantha saw her bother she started to cry of happiness. “Harrison you’re here!” She screamed. “Here get on” he said putting his hand out for her to grab. Samantha held on extra tight due to the rain, so their hands were slippery. Harrison then pulled her on his Flygon between him and Misty. Samantha panted due to lack of oxygen and from being worn out from swimming.

They looked around a bit but couldn’t see anything. “Misty no one’s down here.” Harrison said, annoyed.

“Flygon go back u-““WAIT!” Misty interrupted. “Look over there, it’s Samantha!” she said pointing towards her.

“Flygon go to Samantha now!” Harrison ordered. Flygon immediately recognized Samantha and headed towards her. As soon as Samantha saw her brother she started to cry of happiness.

“Harrison you’re here!” She screamed. “Here get on” he said putting his hand out for her to grab. Samantha held on extra tight due to the rain, so their hands were slippery. Harrison then pulled her on his Flygon between him and Misty. Samantha panted due to lack of oxygen and from being worn out from swimming.

“He’s….he’s….not with me. Pikachu fell off my Lapras and fell into the water so ash dove in after it and I haven’t seen him since. My Lapras disappeared also.” She managed to get out. “How long ago did he go out?” Harrison asked worried for his friends’ sake.

“He’s….he’s….not with me. Pikachu fell off my Lapras and fell into the water, so Ash dove in after it and I haven’t seen him since. My Lapras disappeared also.” She managed to get out.

“How long ago did he go out?” Harrison asked, worried for his friends’ sake.

Just some grammer and spelling errors, but good so far. ^.^

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[The Red Butterfly]

Hey!!!! 4 those of u who r reading this i'm sorry i havn't posted anything in a while. I want 2 write ahead an get more done on this story!!! I promise I'll have up some more soon though!!!!^_^