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My First Fanfic!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Foxyvulpixie, Jul 11, 2006.

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  1. Foxyvulpixie

    Foxyvulpixie thug life

    ~This involves pokeshipping,some advance shipping,& contestshipping~*Part one starts now*
    It was a lovely day in Slateport City were Ash was riding his motercycle then stopped,he found some tables and chairs and a sign that said "Slateport City Outdoor Fastfood Place"
    Ash:*sits on one of the chairs*one Diet Coke please miss
    Girl:M'kay *walks away*
    Ash*waits then sees a girl in long red hair(like a mermaid) in jeans,slandels,a tank top,and sea green eyes*
    Ash:Hey Misty!
    Girl(Misty):*takes a seat in one of the chairs*
    Ash:Misty what happened to you,you look like some kind of city girl Brock would like!
    Misty:What about you you have a motercycle!
    Ash:It was for my 20th birthday!
    Misty:So your 20,I'm 21
    Ash:I dont care
    Misty:whatever why I came here is cause....what happened to your pikachu?
    Ash:He's at Prof.Oaks Lab we've been battiling fo the last nonstop for the past 5 years so I figured he should take a break and play with my my other pokemon
    Misty:what about Brock?
    Ash:he finally found a girl then got married
    Misty:what about May&Max?
    Ash:Don't know the whole gang split up as soon as turned 19
    Misty:do you like May?
    Ash:Are going to keep asking questions?
    Girl:here you go sir*hands diet coke to Ash*
    Ash:*takes a big gulp of his DietCoke*
    Misty:well do you like May or not?
    Ash:maybe....
    Misty:Oh really
    Ash:Yeah really
    Misty:*points to the other table*
    Ash:*turns around*OMG!
    ~End of part 1~
     
    Last edited: Jul 11, 2006
  2. nashie1

    nashie1 Well-Known Member

    i don't see anything. You need to actually have the story or this will be closed.
     
  3. Jonouchi

    Jonouchi Chibi-cario

    Yeah...unless you were planning to put the next chapter in your next post (which I don't think is allowed)

    Also, it needs to be done before you make the topic.

    Oh, and put it in the Shipping fics section next time
     
  4. Foxyvulpixie

    Foxyvulpixie thug life

    I do sorry i messed up.
     
  5. Jonouchi

    Jonouchi Chibi-cario

    0_0

    Not to mention script fanfics like that aren't allowed here
     
  6. foxkitty

    foxkitty Gilmore Girls lover

    This kind of scripting isn't allowed. Please read the rules.
     
  7. HarleyScarow

    HarleyScarow Emerald Shinigami

    Actually, scripting is allowed, but not this kind.

    Here are some guidelines:
    1. Please skip a line after each person talks.
    2. This needs to be much longer- at least a page.
    3. Don't use *action quotes* or shorthand, because that makes your story seem unprofessional- it's okay to make a humorous fic, but professionally!
     
  8. ~()~WOBBUFFET~()~

    ~()~WOBBUFFET~()~ I'm a little Seedot.

    I don't get this one bit, put it into like, chapters. AND not to mention it looks like alphabet soup in script mode! Re-write it like those big chapter, non-scriptical, HP or Narnia books.
     
  9. The Doctor

    The Doctor Absolute Beginner

    Remember dear, the "This is my first fanfic" excuse just doesn't work anymore. You can do script format, but try and do it like Yoru Ryu or FlamingRuby; now those girls pull it off fine. Read their fics to get inspiration. OK?
     
  10. ~()~WOBBUFFET~()~

    ~()~WOBBUFFET~()~ I'm a little Seedot.

    What Doc said! For surely!
     
  11. Foxyvulpixie

    Foxyvulpixie thug life

    So if make it more longer and skip lines will my fanfic be allowed?
     
  12. Deathborn_606

    Deathborn_606 Power of the mind

    Yeah and ask for this to be moved to the shipping fics section.
     
  13. Jonouchi

    Jonouchi Chibi-cario

    Most likely, no.

    If it's a humor fic and you do add description, then yes
     
  14. Dragonfree

    Dragonfree Just me

    If you write well-written script, as in something properly formatted with stage directions and such, go ahead. But like this, no.

    *closes*
     
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