My First Fusion!

[Munchlax-Man]

I've tried my best at making a fusion between Jigglypuff and Ditto
Here is my result:

it is called Jigtto

Please post comments.

(magic kid930 PMed me the emoticons)

 

[mew08]

was that relly your first try? great for a first try!

 

[Hikari Tenshi]

It needs shading and there is one unneccasary line at the (from where I am looking at it, not the Jigtto's view) right side sticking out. Color in the white spots, and it will look MUCH bettter!

 

[Munchlax-Man]

Thanx guys

I made another one (sprites courtesy of Magic kid930)

I call it Whisbat!

 

[KantoRandy]

Well your ideas are OK but I don't think I'm into the whole one-tone thing...

 

[Munchlax-Man]

ok i will try to shade my next ones

;233;

 

[Cheez Puf]

These are good, but don't use the default colors on paint. Other than that, keep it up. I give 7/10.

 

[Starter530]

1st: go here for the sprities
http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/
2nd: These are horrible
there is absolutely no shading
you used default colors
you didn't recolor it proporely
read a tutorial

 

[Guraena]

Pretty bad.
On both sprites, you took off the shading completely, (excluding the inside of the Golbat wings) which really lowers it quality-wise.
You need to keep the shading, or else it'll look flat. Also try to blend them better so they look more natural, not just copy and pasted on.

Your sprites sort of look like mine when I first started. But if you keep practicing you'll get better.

 

[castiboy]

nice tries, just listen to these guys:
NO paint colours.
NO shading removal.
NO copy-paste-ish, which means you have to make them blend in a way it looks natural.

keep working, and have a look a tutorials for some info, it's always good to have a look, just to know.

and people, stop saying "9/10", it's just not true, and it won't help him.
good luck kid!

 

[Munchlax-Man]

Well i have made quite alot more with shading but the thing i use to get the pictures up isn't working at the moment so the Jigtto and Whisbat pictures aren't up either right now.
What i have made includes a limbed egg , a recolour and some more fusions!

;239;

ps i am not using paints default colours and on my ones i have mentioned above i got the sprites from pokemonelite2000 (thats where magickid930 was getting them from aswell)

 

[Neopolis]

Umm... No. Shading is needed, and (I checked it myself) you used default paint colors for Jigtto. Also, it's not original, you just stuck a ditto bottom to a Jigglypuff top, and the angles of the sprites are all different.

 

[intergalactic platypus]

Without shading it looks dreadful. They look cardboard. Jiggitto looks like a Jigglypuff with squiggly legs, and Whisbats wings are far too large though it has potential. Only using one or two colors is a no no as well. If I were you I would pay close attention to all this criticism and change your future sprites; the best spriters are the ones who have improved and practiced. Dragonfree, poocheyena, and electabuzz all had to improve to become great, so you should improve too

 

[.Dan.S.2006.]

You have two threads! I suggest you delete one before a mod does and reprimands you. I don't think there is more I can say, all the suggestions for improvement have been made.

 

[miken park]

Never EVER use paints defualt colours. Also shade your sprites. Take the colours from whatever pokemon you're mixing with using the eyedropper tool. To shade, imagine where the light source would be. On all pokemon sprites it comes from the top left(Often when shading I draw a little sun to remember where it is). Now think, whoich bits are in shadow, which bits are exposed to the light?Shade it accordingly. Hope that helped.
~The Arbiter

 

[Final Flash]

A lot better than mine,but Ditto Is pretty hard to fuse with,so I give that is Okay.

 

[Starter530]

A lot better than mine,but Ditto Is pretty hard to fuse with,so I give that is Okay.

Apparently you are new to spriting
read the above posts
its not very good (i posted crit above)