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My first organised battle team. Criticism welcomed.

Caligko

New Member
I thank in advance to anybody reading this.

Jolteon Timid @ BrightPowder
Ability: Volt Absorb
EVs: 252 SPeeD, 252 HP, 4 SA.
-Thunder Wave
-Attract
-Thunder Bolt
-Swagger

-I'm not sure about the use of this myself, it was just something I wanted to try. I can understand that Attract is partial to the situation, making is somewhat unreliable. I'd appreciate if anybody had tried this before give me some feedback? Thank you.

Espeon Modest @ {Not sure, advice needed.}
Ability: Synchronize
EVs: 252 SA, 252 SpeeD
-Morning Sun
-Psychic
-Grass Knot
-Shadow Ball

-Aesthetically, I don't like the idea of two Eevee originated Pokémon, any other Special Sweepers advisable (Preferably not legendaries) would be much of a help.

Ludicolo Jolly @ Leftovers
Ability: Rain Dish
EVs: 252 SpeeD, 252 HP, 4 Special Defense
-Rain Dance (Conflicting with Espeon's Morning Sun, I've realised whilst writing this.)
-Leech Seed
-Giga/Mega Drain.
-Double Team/Rest (Up for discussion. I'm not at all sure.)

Heracross Adamant @ (Focus Band)
Ability: Guts
EVs: 252 Attack, 252 SpeeD
-Megahorn
-Earthquake
-Aerial Ace
-Brick Break

Blissey Bold @ (Leftovers)
Ability: Natural Cute
EVs: 252 HP, 252 D, 4 SD
-Softboiled
-Toxic
-Aromatherapy
-Thunder Wave/Ice Beam.

Ninjask
Ability: Speed Boost
EVs: 252 SpeeD, 252 HP. (Not sure.)
-Agility
-Swords Dance
-Baton Pass
-X-scissor


I've also thought up of another, in replacement for any that I find do not meet the cut.

Ursaring @ Flame Orb
Ability: Guts (As it will be burned from the Flame Orb)
EVs: 252 SpeeD, 252 Attack.
-Facade (As it will be burned from the Flame Orb
-Stone Edge
-Dig
-Bulk Up.

With the Flame Orb, automatically burning Ursaring. I thought the Guts (+50%) and Facade getting 140 AP when there is a status effect in play. Not to mention the STAB. This would make a good Sweeper.

Thank you very much to anybody that rates/helps me improve my team, this is the first team I've made and I would gladly take constructive critisism. As long as it does not end up in insultive.
 

Edge Master

I'm back!
ok ill rate
jolteon-evs, i would make spa 252 and hp4 but its your preferance i would reccomend shadowball over attract for more type coverage.
espeon-if you dont like it i like mismagius' with modest same evs and shadow ball confuse ray psychic and magical leaf/destiny bond
ludicolo-if you go with rest i reccomend adding sleep talk instead of rain dance and if you dont go with rest i like zen headbut
heracross-nothing wrong here
blissey-good evs and everything either thundr wave or ice beam would be fine
ninjask- not a big boton pass fan so i would put false swipe in instead
overall a solid team hope i helped :)
 

TubaPlaya

Porygon Enthusiast
Im not sure if False Swipe is good for an organised battle team.
 
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