My First Photoshop Art (Hoennshipping)

[LuckyBeginner]

My First Photoshop Art (Advanceshipping)

The first half was hand drawn and the rest was done in photoshop. I'm just about 14 so lay off the bad comments please?? Oh and in this pic Ash is only dreaming, hence the purplish background...

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f57/Kgmck117/AshandMaycopy.png

 

[Hikari Tenshi]

I'm just about 14 so lay off the bad comments please??

Heh, I'm only 10... Anyway, I like the sun effect, but there's no shading to support the rays. If you added some shading, it would look much better. Keep up the nice work, though...

 

[Clockworkz]

I'm going to judge the CG, not the drawing itself.
The lens flair looks relly out of place, and the grey background is boring and unexciting. Also, like Mudkip_luv said, you need shading. Also, zoom in and Painbrush over the little nasty white pixels here and there. Afterwards, it should be fine.
EDIT: @Mudkip_luv: so i herd you liek mudkips (couldn't resist XD)

 

[Mimori Kiryu]

Well, I agree with Clockworkz and their critic. It's pretty good, IMO. Though...isn't this Advanceshipping? Hoennshipping is Brendan x May. :/

 

[Shatoshi]

yeah this isnt Hoenshipping its Advanceshipping (which is why it even better^^) id give it a 7/10 but Ill ad a half point cuz im an advanceshipper so.....7.5/10

 

[Ember]

Um that's Advanceshipping, not Hoenshipping. And, I basicly agree with what Clockworkz said about. It's ok for your first try though, practice make perfect. Keep up the good work. ^^

 

[LuckyBeginner]

Don't worry I'm gonna redo it an make it look better. Thanks for the support though ^^

 

[Lady Renegade]

aww it reminds me of Latias kissing Ash at the end of Pokemon Heros....it's super cute.
i'd say you've done well for your first photoshop piece. man you should have seen mine *has hidden it form public view*...keep up the good work sweetie!!