My first Revamp

[Gaadi]

«« Original

«« My revamped version.

It is my first on so how do you all think?

 

[Aqua_Charlie]

it's good! good outline shading, but there might be a bit to much black.

 

[Inalina]

it is good but i must say the same as Aqua Charlie

~~;154;Flower Power;154;~~

 

[Neopolis]

The shading on the leaf is too GSC-y. Goes for all 3 of the leaves, actually, but mainly the top one.

 

[Electabuzz]

make sure to redo the outlining and shading
for a first, however, it is quite good
just make sure to identify a light source, and then do all shading from there