My first scratch sprite

[~Milotic~]

Milotic

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[Clockworkz]

First off, that's too big to be a sprite. I'd categorize it as pixel art.


I'm not sure where this belongs now >_>

 

[~Milotic~]

umm ... i dont care about size, i want to know about how it looks

 

[Clockworkz]

Well, ok, then.
The lines are jagged and uneven, and it looks amazingly flat. The shading tries to fix that, but since it doesn't conform to the shape of the creature and is far too contrasting, with almost no transition between the shades. I also didn't know Milotic had a mouth. >_>
Good pose, though.

 

[Mudkip]

It's very wobbly, kinda like you used the pencil on it in paint. The shading isn't very good either, more like it's changing colours. Yet for some reason I really like it.

 

[Chinese Teletubbie]

Well that is pretty awful and if its supposed to be a scratch sprite its to bumpy and if its art the outline is again too bumpy

 

[Char1016]

Milotic looks like it is about to use Transform.

 

[Tiffany]

I agree with everyone else here CC wise. The lines are wobbly and uneven (like from one side of Milotic's tail to the other). The shading is a little off too. I know it is really hard to draw stuff by mouse, but keep on trying!

 

[~Milotic~]

this is my first time you know

and fidani, what you said wasnt very nice, you didnt even give a reason for why it looked bad

 

[Act]

this is my first time you know

We know, we just don't think it's a suitable excuse for a sub-par work.

and fidani, what you said wasnt very nice, you didnt even give a reason for why it looked bad

Well, it shouldn't look like it's about to use transform, now, should it?


Anyway, what everyone else said is true: the shading is painful, and the lineart is worse. The first thing I noticed, though, is that the outline is all a uniform color, some dark beige. First of all, the line should be lighter where most light hits it (although you don't exactly have a light source), and black where no light hits it. Also, the outline on areas where milotic is red or blue should be red or blue, not beige. That's just being lazy, now.

Keep trying, I s'pose...