my first sprite ever

[tinfoil]

Here just a few simple mixes please give constuctive critisisim

::Mixes::

zunich

torchisaur
chimeform​

 

[Deoxytwo]

Good sprite!

 

[Flying Tropius]

lol great job

 

[-Espacio-]

Great fusion, but the outline needs a little work.

 

[tinfoil]

Thanks I wanted to do that one after looking at the avatars and one was called torchisaur

 

[Dark_Lukerio]

W33rdn3zz... Don't take that the wrong way though, it's OK for the 1st!

 

[Dawnstar]

Constructive Criticism time: Yeah...it's quite simple, the head feathers need to be attached better. You missed some of the lines on the face that you need to recolor. The right-most feather looks like it's dripping...you might want to fix that.

Out of Criticism: It's quite a good first. *pokes other people* They asked for criticism, lol. The first 2 posts were a few words in a post with nothing more...

Well, good luck in spriting!

 

[tinfoil]

Thanks I have another I present zunich i changed the outline a little

 

[Mega]

I liked the first one better.

 

[tinfoil]

chimeform something seems off about the bell though

 

[tinfoil]

I don't like to double post but I have a new sprite

I felt like recoloring scyther;123;

 

[Samayowa]

Those are really good for your first ones! Keep up the good work!

Diamond and Pearl

 

[tinfoil]

Thanks what should I do next?

 

[P-Man]

Crap. Hardly any outline, too simple and done bad. IMPROVE

 

[tinfoil]

i don't like this one much though

 

[Carpetted!]

They're good, but not that good. If this wasn't your first time they would be so-so, but now, they're great! Sort of sketchy though, and poorly outlined.

 

[tinfoil]

I've got another pretty meh though just a spoink recolor
EDIT: Shnesael

 

[tinfoil]

got more just recolors

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