My first sprite

[brandonberry]

here are my first sprites:
electalax


omacargo

 

[Dark_Lukerio]

Whoa. 100% AWESOME! Keep it up!
BTW, would you like to try out my Master Spriter Contest? Check my sig. vvv

 

[LannyZ4444]

I, however, will give you some constructive comments and criticism.

Omagcargo is extremely well thought up and well presented. However, may I suggest that you move the bubble on the left side of his mouth? It just looks funny.

Electalax is a little mediocre, but has potential. The shading in the cut and paste parts needs to be fixed (dark is down and light is up), and I will suggest omitting the hair in the middle of his head. Fix up some of the outlines and Electabuzz stripes, and you'll have a fairly good sprite! Keep it up!

 

[brandonberry]

okay thanks. i am fairly new at spriting and could really use some tips and stuff.

 

[Rezduis]

I Can't see them

 

[castiboy]

that magstar is really impressive for a firt, you have potential kid! i can tell you it's really good. keep it up!

 

[intergalactic platypus]

Omacargo is excellent, and Electelax is good. My only suggestions is that Electalax looks fairly washed out and could use a recolor. But your quite good

 

[mrpython1991]

Yes, very good.

Yeah, it's sorta hard to distinguish the colors on Electalax. Id try making the goldish colors on his a bit darker, so you can tell where his feet and belly begin.

I'd really appreciate it if you'd leave come CC's on my sprite thread.

^_^ Thanks!

 

[castiboy]

let's start with this: snorlax's original colour was really dark, so its outline is made to match a dark palette, you may need to edit it aswell as the shading to look more natural with the new bright colours.

and... the tail looks not connected to the body, and flat, make it start a bit higher and don't sepparate it from the body with outlines.