My first sprite

[Tyranitar]

It's my sprites

-Manafi

-Perappu

Please Vote

PS I later do other sprites

 

[.Bambi.]

The head is kind of awkwardly placed. It's almost lopsided, and the Sprite itself is quite small, but for your first Sprite, it's quite good.

I see potential.

 

[Tyranitar]

- Perappu but without colour

PS. Thx for Coments

 

[.Bambi.]

It would be better if it were colored, but it's still too small. Let's compare it to a Pidgey Sprite.

[img139]http://img455.imageshack.us/img455/9817/b1hp.png[/img139] [img139]http://www.serebiiforums.com/images/avatars/218.gif[/img139]

The head is far too small, and considering Perappu is bigger than Pidgey, it needs to be a lot larger.

 

[Final Flash]

Ok for a start, but every one gets better, even I am getting better right now.

 

[Tyranitar]

and considering Perappu is bigger than Pidgey, it needs to be a lot larger.

The perappu is nearly the same small like Pidgey

The head is far too small

You have right, i will corect it

EDIT:

-Perappu
Please vote

 

[Kinginsoar]

There isn't ant shading. You also need to make it bigger, than its head.