My first Sprite!!!!

[Uchiha Obito]

um this is my first sprite, its called Murer Gengar. Please tell me if its good or bad.

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[umbreot]

Bad. Sorry.

 

[Dark Venusaur]

I dont see anything at all. All I see is

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[Atari]

What's up with the blue ear? It doesn't blend well with the purple and gray body. And why is the scythe red but not fully colered? 2/10

 

[MysticFlames]

It's...bad...The outline's messed up in some places, the ear is randomly blue, awkward shading. The scythe doesn't even have shading and some parts aren't colored. Read turtorials and practice.

I hope I didn't sound harsh. o.o

 

[Uchiha Obito]

yeah i know its really bad!!The scythe is only partially red because its blood.

 

[.:Tremolo:.]

It's really bad and whats a murer?

 

[Shadow Scizor]

What's a murer?
It's bad. What's with the one blue ear? And the outline is messed up in places, like the scythe and mouth.

 

[MysticFlames]

yeah i know its really bad!!The scythe is only partially red because its blood.

The scythe just looks weird with lots of random white dots. It should look more liquid-y.

It's really bad and whats a murer?

I'm guessing he meant murder or murderer. ^^;;

 

[umbreot]

I'm really nice, so I'll revamp it for you.

 

[umbreot]

All done, Give credit no matter what the pourpose.


OR


I did both of them in 5 minutes so don't expect a lot.

 

[Uchiha Obito]

thanks Umbreot!!! But i wont use them!! BTW, can i PM you sprites i made so you can help me fix them?