My first Sprites

[Carpetted!]

Yeah I got bored one day and decided to try some spriting. Well here they are... http://img430.imageshack.us/img430/1470/1stgeneration3rq.png
Honest criticism people.

 

[jhoto moto]

Awsome sprites is this really your first time although the shading on the first two seems a little off

 

[ultimatepokemonchamp]

Look alright, but still some elements there of cut and paste. Work on the transitions between the different sprites being combined. 6/10

 

[upsy-daisy]

you do some wierd sprites really wierdback on track nice sprites for a firt timer

 

[Frecyo]

For a first, your using some pretty difficult pokemon, like Clamperl, Cloyster and Porygon. Armaldo and Crawdaunt are difficult to work with also.

Work on your shading and outlining for one. Look at Absol/Skar for a second, I love the idea with the feets, but the connection isn't good and you didn't recolour.

The Machamp/Dusclops is your best, but the upper body/shoulder area seems meh.

 

[Carpetted!]

Okay thanks for the criticism people
EDIT: Oh, and by the by, here's another... http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/4200/houndiper0nm.png

 

[Koneko]

Okay thanks for the criticism people
EDIT: Oh, and by the by, here's another... http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/4200/houndiper0nm.png

the first seem a little coppy try blending
but the new one looks good

 

[Emo Saria]

good work, these could use a little adjustments but otherwise, pretty good