My first team plz look!

[lordvale1]

OK! so this is my new team! i have thinked this pretty long time but i dont know what items i put on these pokemons yet... so here they are!


;242; Blissey
item:leftovers
nature:bold
EVs HP 252 SPD 100 SP.ATK 158
Moves:
Stealth Rock
Thunder Wave
Ice Beam
Softboiled


;248; Tyranitar
item: dont know yet
nature:adamant
ATK 252 HP 126 DEF 126 SPD 6
Moves:
Dragon dance
outrage/earthquake
crunch
Stone-edge


;477; Dusknoir
item: dont know yet
nature:adamant
EVs ATK 252 DEF 126 SP.DEF 126 SPD 6
Moves: (this might have chances)
Ice punch
brick break
earthquake
shadow punch


;149; Dragonite
item: dont know yet
nature: adamant
EVs ATK 252 SPD 126 HP 126 DEF 6
Moves:
Fire punch
Aqua tail
dragon dance
dragon claw/outrage/thunderpunch


;212; Scizor
item: i dont know
nature: adamant
EVs ATK 252 HP 58 DEF 200
Moves:
X-scissor
Sword dance
Roost
Iron head


;466; Electivire
item: maybe Focus sash
nature adamant
EVs ATK 252 SPD 200 HP 58
Moves:
Thunder punch
Fire punch
Ice punch
brick break/earthquake


So what ya think?

 

[Prio]

Needs a couple of special sweepers, also don't sweep with Dusknoir

 

[aipomkong]

Blissey needs Seismic Toss, otherwise you have 'Pokemon with CM + Recovery move / Raikou' weak

Aqua Tail is pointless on Dragonite.

Dragon Dance / Outrage / Earthquake / Thunder or Fire Punchor Fire Blast @ Life Orb

 

[lordvale1]

well i have been thinking porygon Z and moves would be ice beam psychic tri attack nastyplot/darkpulse/signal beam.. but i dont know what i should replice?

 

[lugiatamer493]

porygon-z

tri attack
t-bolt
ice beam
nasty plot/psychic

 

[lordvale1]

i decided to leave tyranitar and take porygon Z! so is this good change? or do u think i should leave other one?

 

[unknown calamity]

OK! so this is my new team! i have thinked this pretty long time but i dont know what items i put on these pokemons yet... so here they are!


;242; Blissey
item:leftovers
nature:bold
EVs HP 148 SPD 4 SP.ATK 104 DEF 252
Moves:
Stealth Rock/Seismic Toss
Thunder Wave/Sing
Ice Beam
Softboiled

Try using blissey as your special wall with these evs and moveset. Sing can be used over thunderwave to threaten your opponent more otherwise stick with thunderwave if your afraid of accuracy.

;248; Tyranitar
item: Choice Band
nature:adamant
HP: 60 / ATK: 252 / SPD: 196
Moves:
Pursuit/Focus Punch
outrage/earthquake
crunch
Stone-edge

If you're afraid of choice items go with life orb

;477; Dusknoir
item: dont know yet
nature:adamant
EVs ATK 252 DEF 126 SP.DEF 126 SPD 6
Moves: (this might have chances)
Ice punch
brick break
earthquake
shadow punch

I'm not ready to tackle dusknoirs yet as I'm currently training them XD

;149; Dragonite
item: Lum Berry/Life Orb
nature: Jolly
HP: 58 / ATK: 252 / SPD: 200
Moves:
Fire punch
Earthquake
dragon dance
outrage

This should be workable

;212; Scizor
item: i dont know
nature: Impish
EVs SPD 148 / HP 184 / DEF 176
Moves:
X-scissor
Sword dance/Roost
Agility
Iron head/Baton Pass

I think you should make your scizor more defense-oriented by making him a Baton passer to one of your other pokes that can use the boost from atk and spd

;466; Electivire
item: Expert Belt
nature Lonely
EVs ATK: 252 / SPD: 176 / Sp. Atk: 80
Moves:
Earthquake
Cross Chop/Low Kick
Ice punch
Thunderbolt


So what ya think?

Well I think you seriously need to get some special sweepers. Your team is unbalanced and thats a fact. Well hope I helped

 

[Blue Ace]

Cross Chop is better Than Brick Break? or do u want it to destroy barriers and too lazy to rebreed?

EQ over Fire Punch

Electivire hits alot of types super effectively w/ the right moveset so go w/ Expert Belt