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My first two Fusions.

kirapwns

PS3?OverNLNEthousand
Mind rating these? ^.^
http://i39.*******.com/2hoz8ky.pnghttp://i43.*******.com/20hts77.png
Skarcroak and Zanviper!

haha, I just made these, and they're my first. I used Photoshop CS3.​
 

[aka]

Well-Known Member
Simple...but good nonetheless.
I'd suggest adding more from one Pokémon to another.
 

[aka]

Well-Known Member
Thanks. ^.^
Yeah, I'm going to try that soon.
I just can't think of any 3 pokemon to do.
Hmm...that's not what I meant.
I meant putting more than just a tail or wings onto the base.
I suggest looking at some others' work. Here.
This guy has some of the best fusions I've ever seen.
Try adding a bit more of each pokemon in the fusion.

EDIT: Rank Up! Post #1000!
 

Tacharine

Not From Concentrate
Simple but, very good. Indeed.

As [aka] has already said, more of the other pokemon to add to another would improve the quality of the fusion.

I would hate to see someone with a talent for fusions have to keep putting themself to lower leveled spriting.
 

Yami Ryu

Well-Known Member
Very good? Aha. No.

Simple yes. Alright, yes. Good? Not really- because all they are, are simple cut and paste sprites. Yes it is good to see you recolored the cut and paste parts for the most part- and actually saved in something that didn't slaughter the sprite.

But I wouldn't call them that good.

Because all you did was attach wings to one and a bit of a tail to another- you did nothing to try and make the parts look more attached, didn't scratch, didn't do anything that goes beyond the cut off parts and hide behind the body, technique.
 

kirapwns

PS3?OverNLNEthousand
Simple but, very good. Indeed.

As [aka] has already said, more of the other pokemon to add to another would improve the quality of the fusion.

I would hate to see someone with a talent for fusions have to keep putting themself to lower leveled spriting.

Hehe, thank you. ^.^ I'll make more tonight, and I'll make sure to add more into it. Again, these are just the first two fusions I've ever made, or even tried making.

Very good? Aha. No.

Simple yes. Alright, yes. Good? Not really- because all they are, are simple cut and paste sprites. Yes it is good to see you recolored the cut and paste parts for the most part- and actually saved in something that didn't slaughter the sprite.

But I wouldn't call them that good.

Because all you did was attach wings to one and a bit of a tail to another- you did nothing to try and make the parts look more attached, didn't scratch, didn't do anything that goes beyond the cut off parts and hide behind the body, technique.

Thanks for being the *** of the thread, much appreciated.
And just for the record, I never used cut or paste on making both of them. So yeah, think before you speak.
 

pika3

Snowball attack, go!
These are good but I agree that you should try putting more of one pokemon on the other.
 

Yami Ryu

Well-Known Member
Thanks for being the *** of the thread, much appreciated.

Sweety if I wanted to be an *** I would have been like Lemon! and two other known flame baiters that Lemon! and co, agreed with and partied themselves to, I would also have NOT offered crit and told you the truth about them. They are basically a Zangoose with a Seviper tail, and a Croagunk with Skarmory wings.

There is truly nothing special about them.

And just for the record, I never used cut or paste on making both of them. So yeah, think before you speak.

Sorry but I doubt you really scratched the wings and tail, because if you could scratch that well, then why stop at simply wings and a tail?

And if you DIDN'T scratch them, then all you did was cut off the tail and the wings, and paste them on. Sure you recolored them, but you added nothing else to the combination.
 

kirapwns

PS3?OverNLNEthousand
Sorry but I doubt you really scratched the wings and tail, because if you could scratch that well, then why stop at simply wings and a tail?

And if you DIDN'T scratch them, then all you did was cut off the tail and the wings, and paste them on. Sure you recolored them, but you added nothing else to the combination.

What I did was Select the part of the tail I wanted, dragged it over to my Zangoose, rendered Zangoose's tail, and simply dragged the Seviper tail all the way so it looked like a tail. No cut, no paste.
 

Cubone's Mother

The Hero has come...
Yami Ryu isn't being an ***. Yami telling you the truth instead of pampered jibberish for a newbie.. Sure, Yami may seem a bit blunt in his C&C, but I think that the way he or she posts is the way that everyone should post. Instead of saying "good" to add to your post count and move on, you should actually help...besides, his or her reasoning only seems harsh because nobody else does it right.

In all honesty, I have nothing else to add. What should have been said has been said, and not much can be said about such simple works. To be quite frank, I don't understand why you posted these in the first place. Did you want praise? Expect glory? If so then maybe you should have made them seem more unique to deserve such attention..
 

sapphire_addict

Brooklyn rage!
Very good? Aha. No.

Simple yes. Alright, yes. Good? Not really- because all they are, are simple cut and paste sprites. Yes it is good to see you recolored the cut and paste parts for the most part- and actually saved in something that didn't slaughter the sprite.

But I wouldn't call them that good.

Because all you did was attach wings to one and a bit of a tail to another- you did nothing to try and make the parts look more attached, didn't scratch, didn't do anything that goes beyond the cut off parts and hide behind the body, technique.
woah i actually agree with yami ryu!
i think if you challegened your self you could produce some great sprites.
 
Unfortunally they are all correct. May I suggest not just sliding different pecies together but rather combine different padderns and details that both pokemon have to make a completely new pokemon. Look at some tortials and others people work and you will learn the correct way to fuse. Good luck.
 

Lishus13

Poli-Spriter!
Your work is simple. Almost too simple. True spriting takes effort. Unfortunately, these do not display the "effort" to be considered "good" sprites. They are just...sprites. That's it.
Sorry, try being more adventerous.
 

kirapwns

PS3?OverNLNEthousand
I seriously rofl at all your comments. ^.^
I agree, adding more and such would make them alot better, ALOT better.

But are you forgetting these are my first ever? I mean, yeah, go ahead and comment about how I need to add more, but I just did these, adding a single part and re-coloring, and thats all. You can say "Hey, those are well for your first one." Or you could say "Those ones totally blow, you should try different pokemon" or something, but comment the ones above, not what I SHOULD'VE done. Catchin' meh drift?

Yeah, mod, close plz kthx.
 

Lishus13

Poli-Spriter!
I seriously rofl at all your comments. ^.^
I agree, adding more and such would make them alot better, ALOT better.

But are you forgetting these are my first ever? I mean, yeah, go ahead and comment about how I need to add more, but I just did these, adding a single part and re-coloring, and thats all. You can say "Hey, those are well for your first one." Or you could say "Those ones totally blow, you should try different pokemon" or something, but comment the ones above, not what I SHOULD'VE done. Catchin' meh drift?

Yeah, mod, close plz kthx.

You posted these on this thread for the sole reason of receiving constructive criticism on your sprites. If you can't handle what we say, think twice before you post your next thread.
 

kirapwns

PS3?OverNLNEthousand
You posted these on this thread for the sole reason of receiving constructive criticism on your sprites. If you can't handle what we say, think twice before you post your next thread.

Thats not what I was saying.
I meant to rate the two sprites up there, yet none of you rated anyways, but yeah. Think what you want.

I just did this.
Cynduskray.
http://i39.*******.com/k538k3.png​
 
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