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My FMA Art

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i dont know 2 A.K.A. quilava lover

PLEASE JUST A DONUT!
the top two their head aren't tall enough they are liked squished
 
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Kingiej

Cascade Trainer
Beside that squished thing,its nice.Keep up the good work.Perfect drawned Edward Elric ^^

:172bros: ~Kingiej.
 
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Master-sprite_maker

...yup...
Well Not to be mean but they could be better, Scar lookes kinda fat at the angle, (Not saying your a bad drawer I am saying it could be the angle)

And Ed well kinda lookes smushed (probably camera) Other than that they are good. I have been a fan of FMA for a wile, and i am glad someone has posted some art about it.
 
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Mimori Kiryu

Well-Known Member
I'll rate them all single:

Ed - His is really good, other then his eyes seemed to be kind of smushed and not even. Other then that, it's really well drawn.

Hohenhiem - This one is my favorite of the three. I like the style in which you drew him, along with the correct coressponding colors. Nice. ^^

Scar - I like the postion of this character but his hands seemed to be messed up slightly. Other then that, I like it a lot.


Keep up the good FMA art. You should try other characters such as Winry, Roy or Riza. ^^
 
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Clockworkz

SURPRISE BUTTSECKS
Look, man. Just re-scan/photograph them on a flat angle, and I'll give you a detailed crit. That angle is just too severe.
 
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MegaGirl

Hello! :3
Pic #1.- Err... please tell me the guilty one for squished eye is the scanner. If don't, do guidelines in the face to help you in doing the face correctly.
Pic #2.- Errors on the fall of hair on his face, and i just noticed his ears are way too small. Ears start near the level of the upper eyelash, and end near the end of the nose.
Pic #3.- There are a lot of anatomy problems here, most notorious ones are the legs, and the hand doesn't looks in a natural pose. I'd recommend doing the background.
 
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SugarFairy

I love Dara <3
Edward looks all squished together. Sorry if that mean ^^;; The Scar one is pretty good.. Just the fingers.. They bother me ;-; But I absolutly love the Hohenheim Elric one.. That onis really good ^_^ These are good, the really are ^_^ Keep up the great work! (and sorry if i sounded mean ;-; )
 
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Metal Force

o^_^o PWNZOME
They're good but the third one makes the person a little fat & on the left it's hand & foot are'nt drawen.
 
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