my FR LG vershon of new bark town

[mew08]

this is my FR LG versin of new bark town I just need to find a pic. of the lab.

can some one get me a pic of the lab? also i want your coments but no number ratings.

 

[miken park]

URGH! That is horrid. Firstly, you need to join the Trees together so they don't overlap. Secondly, there needs to be no white showing, so fix that.
Thridly there are just fences sticking out of the trees. Get rid of it!
Read the tutorials plz.
~The Arbiter

 

[Swablue]

Sorry, but this ain't good ;/

I marked what I think is rong with Red
You seem to have a problem with your pasting..

 

[Capt.Miko]

Not good. White spaces showing, bits of trees overlapping, bits of trees cut off, "tree patches" not aligned evenly aligned, and the houses seem to be sinking into the ground. Shouldn't this be in the Sprites section?

 

[DanK84]

Not very good at all. When you make towns, you need to make sure all of the image you copied is there. And all that white space, everything's overlapping, and the water area looks too choppy.

 

[Dark Venusaur]

Yeah pretty much swablue pointed it all out.

;003;Dark Venusaur;003;

 

[▼■DoomWing■▼]

I could fix it up for you if you give me the permission

Other than that,its kinda not well done

Of Topic: Dark Venusaur is banned again :/

 

[Torchic23]

Sorry, but this ain't good ;/

I marked what I think is rong with Red
You seem to have a problem with your pasting..

You forgot the sinking sign.

This is awful! Overlapping trees, sinking houses, uneven water! Work on this a bit and then re-post it

 

[Carpetted!]

I think there was a bridge over the water or something

 

[castiboy]

you need to use tiles, you're taking the trees from allready done maps... get some tiles and then try again.

 

[Politoed]

He is Wonderful!

No he isn`t.
He sucks!

 

[Pikafirefight]

please tell me this is a joke

 

[Atari]

Really. This is BAD. It looks like a kindergardener made it while he was about to get run over by a train. The copy-pasting sucks, the white spaces, the bridge, I can go on and on forever. Plus up near the top there's a black space. + the sinkings really bad. .003/10

 

[Electabuzz]

as casti said, you need to use tiles, which are 16x16 pixels of land, water, buildings, etc.

 

[Pikafirefight]

and everyone who says there was a bridge, there wasnt

 

[-aocom v2-]

He is Wonderful!

No he isn`t.
He sucks!

Well, I'm sure that really helped him to improve. -_-;;

Needs less choppiness. It also needs people, because if no one lives there, the town isn't very exciting. But you definately have a lot of work to do.

 

[Cheez Puf]

ugh. You should use this.

give credit to Spallding.

 

[castiboy]

ugh. You should use this.

give credit to Spallding.

now for everyone else, THIS is helping, no need to insult or flame the guy, maybe he just doesn't know how maps work, so stop this n00biness and think twice beforeposting the 1st thing that comes into your mind. that won't help anyone.

 

[-aocom v2-]

Here's the lab (gotten from TSR, but tile-ified by me)

 

[Eevee95]

Pretty good. Its not like i could do that much better on my first try with out tiles. Good try.