My Fusions

[peterrab]

1st Mega-Fusion Thing:

Dunservipicunizor

;144; ;336; ;206; ;212;

 

[pokemon rulez!!!!!]

Very nice fusion,bad name.What about Duncuizer for a name.

 

[~Lucario Master~]

To Cut and Pastish. It looks like a collage of Pokemon. Also the wings don't look right on it.

 

[OmegaDragon]

Too copy and pastish, add some custom parts, and never flip body parts. Screws up the shading and makes it too symetrical.
Also, try to blend your parts more. Everything, especially the wings, dont fit that well.

 

[peterrab]

A bunch more sprites there

 

[Rixo]

To me, Aireon-Solareon-Espeon/Mew are the best in the second batch.
Even though they are like recolor/copy and paste, they are ok. LOL your Ty/Fly/Char mix is kinda.... awkward.

:] The wings on the Dunsparce thing are kinda weird.

 

[peterrab]

Thanks. Im not too good at scratching so I mostly just add parts on.
I also have a whole bunch at school but I need to get them to my house.

 

[yazzel]

they are to copy pastish

 

[TiagoGR]

The first one (Dunsparce) is way too Copy Pastish. On the other ones, the Delcatty/Armaldo one is too copy pastish, and the tail in the Typhlosion/Flygon is bad, the custom parts you draw are horrible and the tail is misplaced (it should be behind the body). The rest is good, but you could made more changes in most of them.

 

[BlazikenGurl]

The Dunsparce fusion is all right I guess, but the wing don't really seem to be attached and try to shorten the name a tiny bit. On the other batch of sprites some of the mixes are copy and pastiesh. The Delcatty/Armaldo one just has Armaldo's claws and really isn't considered a fusion that much. Probably recolour it Armaldo's colours and make it more Armaldo-ish? Yeah. The Flygon's tail seems to be placed wrong on the Typhlosion/Charizard/Flygon mix. The Shroomish/Manaphy's antaennas aren't really seem to be what attached and not really like a Shroomish and Manaphy fusion. And why is Seel/Spheal's hand fin (whatever it's called lol) attached to its stomach? No offense, but try to learn how to scratch parts. If you want try reading a scratch tutorial. It makes things easier. Plus, you should recolour some of the fusions and try to make them more like a fusion next time in the future. ^_^

 

[Expert Socky]

Pretty good for a first "mega fusion", except the claws are too copy pastish.

 

[peterrab]

Another bunch

 

[Kamikaze]

The porygon 2/Houndoom are pretty good and so is the Tyranitar/Dragonite

On the Quagsire/Breloom i think you should have Quagsires feets and Brelooms coloring.

 

[Mex]

Interesting works.

 

[peterrab]

A centaur with scratched staff thing

Some C+C other than scratch, as you see my scratches suck big time.

 

[peterrab]

2 fusions for the Scizor Contest

 

[DS lite man]

ok why is the beak ontop of his head

 

[BlazikenGurl]

Your Xatu/Scizor mix is very awkward. The beak, why is it on the head? Perhaps scratch it on Scizor's mouth, or leave it out. The Espeon/Scizor one is all right I guess. Oh, and the feet on the Xatu/Scizor looks awkward too.

 

[peterrab]

2 totally scratched fusions :

Aron/Trapinch and Vibrava/Lairon

Are they any better than my old ones ?
And I didnt add the beak because it looked cooler as a horn. I may have another go later on.

 

[Wild Cherry]

Too copy and pastish, add some custom parts, and never flip body parts. Screws up the shading and makes it too symetrical.
Also, try to blend your parts more. Everything, especially the wings, dont fit that well.

I agree alot with OD.

All though you scratched that staff, it still dosent look right, no good shading, dont use primary colours either, the edges can have a very dark shade of yellow.