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[Jinchuuriki Hunter]

First time I attempted drawing Diaruga and Parukia Pokémorphs. They look kinda cyber-isheey...

Feel free to comment/critisize my artwork.

 

[Markisious]

Keep...............on! Firstly, do not use line paper(it doesn't look good)Secondly, Ther ok but ,there is something on them that I didn't like..........................I don't know...........

 

[Uber peanut]

Try not to upload drawings on line paper. (you can see through the back and that doesn't look good)

Anyway, nice job on drawing them (Diaruga\Parukia) in pokemorphs.

Diaruga's left arm might be a bit thick and his left hand is a little messed up, but other than that he's fine.

Parukia is good except her left hand is messed up too.

 

[ZOMBIE!]

I thought they'd be the other way around...
Diaruga - Girl
Parukia - Guy
Hm thats just my opinion...

ONTO the picture! Line paper sucks, shakey lines look bad, P's right hand looks strange.
It is an alright picture but I think you should do a version 2 of it.

 

[Shadowfaith]

Keep...............on!

Please don't spam. State why you like/dislike the picture. The artist gets no advice or comment from what you wrote...

 

[Jinchuuriki Hunter]

The artist gets no advice or comment from what you wrote...

Maybe not...but he does get encouragement.

Yeah, line paper stinks. But I was drawing stuff at school and I thought of this so I drew it on line paper which was what I had at the moment because we don't have blank paper here but I will make another one on blank paper as soon as I get a pencil in my hand.

 

[Kamileah]

The first one's face is kinda buggy. However, good traces, hm. o:

The girl looks quite good.

 

[Jinchuuriki Hunter]

Well, I took Autumn's advice and made a Version 2 sketch of Diaruga and Parukia Pokémorphs. This time, it's not on line paper.

If you ask me, I think it looks better.

 

[Peaches]

Wow i like how you've made the new legendaries into people
Only criticism is Parukia's facial expression it lacks feeling if you know what i mean? Other than that it's awesome

 

[Spookz]

Not too bad, though they would better if they had some shading- they look pretty flat right now. D:

 

[chrisivy]

Nice. Start sketching the backround. It might look better that way.