What a talent you are! These are extremely great works!! Totally loved them..... I will comment on every fakemon you got since I've got nothing better to do-
(Common line for all the pokemon: They are awesome)
The grass starter line: They do not have the flair of a starter line. The basic form just look too well-developed to be a starter. Maybe they could be a complete different line. I personally would like to be the generic dragons with grass/dragon grass typing.
The fire starters: Simply great! Though kind of have reminiscence to the cindaquil line.
The water starter: Very nice. But why is the final form half-red. If you ask me a final form of water starter should not be half-red since that's the fire department's color.
Birds: Oh boy! no complaint here.
Mosquito: I have my own mosquito fakemon and i thought no one could make better fakemon based on mosquitoes than mines'. But you certainly have proved me wrong.
Armadillos: Well, sandshrews were better.
The dark fighters: the basic form is really cute. looks something an elite-4 would have in their team.
Earthworms: Not so pokemonish - the leaves kinda make them so
Polar bears: I got you! I think mines were better. But good combination there with snow-man and polar-bears.
The crustacean: The basic form is a really good one(I would have one on my team if there really was one). But the evolved one not so much. For one it looks like its missing half of its body....
platypus: The purple tail is kinda eyesore but overall good job. My water starters are based on platypus, you know. While you took a more "bibrael" approach, I went for the "golduck"-ish approach.
Spongola: if its this cute, of course it's important.
The algae: very unique idea and very well done. i thought the evolution was based on kelp.
Peacock: IMO your one of the two best creations.(The second ones are coming). A peacock based fakemon just can't be better than this one. Mine are just total crap!
Ground and flying pika: What do you mean mister? Are they pika evolutions? If so then you are outta your mind. Otherwise nice pokemon.
Gas-tank: This really shows your talent. Its one of those rare works where the pokemon is based on not just an animal/object but also an impression. The eyes totally say something.
brain pokemon: Why is the final stage sporting beard?
Stonehench: good good! very unique!
grass dragons: kinda like the turtwig line....good drawing and everything but could have spared them.
Centipede/millipede: Not up to the mark.....expected better bugs from you.
Fossil ones: I prefer the foot fossil ones. You have too many grassy dragons in your roster. The foot-fossil basis one seems more developed than its evolved form. If you ask me the evolved form should have that crest-spike and the beak-looking-lips. BTW cool fossil-rock arts!
Ghost grass: What an idea! ingenious!!
More birds: yay! nice art.....the kingfisher one could have been better though. Kingfishers always look moody to me.........
The squids: Super-cool!
The sperm-whale: The second best set! Simply awesome work! The painting looks especially well-done in this set. The shading is perfect-flawless!
Swalot evo. looks good but the pelipper evo.-not so much(a personal fav. you say; well, I'm sorry)
Gaudi lizards: Not so pokemonish. IMO you need to work on pokemonifying your lizard. Look at treecko, charmander etc.
Marvelous burmy and rotom forms. The rotom forms specially are just too good....
HOoffff! There you go! Hope to see more of your works soon!
