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My Jimmy.

Spriteman

Sometimes a bit rude
BEFORE ANYONE SAYS SOMETHING I ALREADY KNOW, I TOOK A PICTURE OF THE DRAWING BECAUSE I DON'T HAVE A SCANNER!


Okay, first of all,0 Jimmy is my Dotaitos in my Pokemon Diamond, in case anyone was wondering who Jimmy was. Anyway, I shall now give you a brief history of the magical wonder that is 'Jimmy'.
I gave him the name about a month after the DP starters were released, and well, it stuck. This is meant to be a drawing of him when I first recived him from Prof. Nanakamado. He's also gonna appear in a fan-fic I plan to write, and he has a minor facial deformaty; The bottom half of his jaw is a little disfigured, but allows attacks like Bite and Crunch to do more damage. Anyway, now that I've stopped going on about the history of Jimmy, here's the drawing!


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I might post some more stuff on this thread, and anyway, give me some constructive critisism, no 'You could do better' or 'I like it'. Me wants critisism!
 
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EmberGryphon

Meowth Fanatic <3
I like giving critisism, so it works out fine. :3

I like the picture and I don't have a Naetoru picture handy, so I can't tell you how well you captured the pokemon- but I can mention that it's tiny, which you might want to avoid. Draw bigger, and you can put in more details- then resize it on your computer. :3 The pose looks a little basic, and there needs to be more shading. Look at some reference pictures or, better yet, the shadows and highlights on real objects, and work from there.

All in all, it's not bad, and I like this thick, dark lines, that make it easy to see even though you took a picture. :3
 

eevee-me

Mayness Yayness!
I like it and think its very good if a little basic, I like how it looks like your own pose not one copied form a picture like some people (me) do.
The only crit I can think of is that the jaw looks a little big to me.
 

pichu bro.1

Aqua leader-Pichu
BEFORE ANYONE SAYS SOMETHING I ALREADY KNOW, I TOOK A PICTURE OF THE DRAWING BECAUSE I DON'T HAVE A SCANNER!


Okay, first of all,0 Jimmy is my Dotaitos in my Pokemon Diamond, in case anyone was wondering who Jimmy was. Anyway, I shall now give you a brief history of the magical wonder that is 'Jimmy'.
I gave him the name about a month after the DP starters were released, and well, it stuck. This is meant to be a drawing of him when I first recived him from Prof. Nanakamado. He's also gonna appear in a fan-fic I plan to write, and he has a minor facial deformaty; The bottom half of his jaw is a little disfigured, but allows attacks like Bite and Crunch to do more damage. Anyway, now that I've stopped going on about the history of Jimmy, here's the drawing!


Picture93.jpg



I might post some more stuff on this thread, and anyway, give me some constructive critisism, no 'You could do better' or 'I like it'. Me wants critisism!

The jaw is really mest up.
 

Spriteman

Sometimes a bit rude
I know, I did it without any refferences, just out of memory, and if I'm roleplaying with a Naetoru, I make his jaw messed up anyway. But, it is kinda crooked though, I didn't see anything wrong with it until I'd done the outline with pen and noticed it was kinda ruined, but meh. And, I hadn't shaded it because I was only getting coloured pencils later in the day, and I've coloured it now.
 
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