my new manene sprite

[maxxa]

i know its not great but i like it the outline is meant to be black in some places to look proffesional
comments? EDIT2 some slight colour tweaks and a shiny

im thinking about doing him in a jumping pose or this one:http://www.pokebip.com/images/octobre2005/49.jpg
well what do you think??
i deleted my old thread since the name said manafi

 

[Luke the Almighty]

It's pretty good! The nose is a little too big, and the arms are too long. But otherwise, it's really good!

 

[Bulk]

Nice pose but, yes, the nose is too big. If you made it slightly smaller, it'd be a very nice sprite.

 

[maxxa]

umm thats as small as it will go
and should i sprite it in a diff pose?

 

[Bulk]

Ah, now I see. I sujest making the mouth a slightly different colour as it looks like it's part fo the nose. The pose it perfect but another would be great.

 

[Magical Trevor]

I like the idea of the shiny You should try all the other 4th genarations

 

[miken park]

Try use your own colours instead of coronis's. :/
It's quite well done, but theres something it don't like about it.

 

[maxxa]

there not coronis's colours there mr mimes colors

 

[Magma Grunt Alex]

hmmm..... the color seems to be a little different that the original one.....

 

[maxxa]

ill start work on all the comments and changes that need doing now ok
p.s thx for all the crit
EDIT: here it is the edited manene: