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My (okay...) sprites

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fORRETRESS MASTER

Guest
kay this is my three first scratch sprites. i like Spiquill and zaprik but quillectrik is a little too big. they are all ground/electric and evolve into each other.
p.s.i'm working on a ghost/ground turtle...so i'll post it when done.

Version 1.0
d1.png

Version 2.0
(Shiny on the right, and normal on the left.)
"]Specturt/Ghostoise



i need suggestions. constructive criticism is okay.​
 
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Myuuvuirocon

<--- Destoria
they look a tad blocky, but overall, pretty nice! ^^ I like 'em

keep it up! I hope I see the turtle soon! :D
 
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fORRETRESS MASTER

Guest
i know.. i was in a swinub obsession when i made them.
 

.Bambi.

Be Wise, Tell Lies.
They're pretty good, but their armour looks a little pixely. Use darker shades of the main colors to outline so it doesn't look so blocky.

There's potential.
 
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fORRETRESS MASTER

Guest
thanks! i'm working on the turtle now! I'll use that advice.

edit:kay, here's the turtle i was raving about:
edd.png


The one on the left is Specturt and the one on the right is Ghostoise. They are both rock/ghost and Specturt evolves into Ghostoise at Lv.35. What do you think???
 
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Drakid

Well-Known Member
Nice Forretress Master!
 

Myuuvuirocon

<--- Destoria
fORRETRESS MASTER said:
edd.png


The one on the left is Specturt and the one on the right is Ghostoise.

they're cool! I like 'em. the pose that they're in is really good, ^^

keep it up! ^^

(I'm not good at constructive critizem... >_>)
 

whiteabsol

.:Daisy Dancing:.
The shading can use a little work but other than that, the'yre okay.

~W.A~
 

Drakid

Well-Known Member
they are not animations, they are sprites...**sigh**
 

Shadow_Fox

Chaotic Dreamer
They do look nice, although a bit blocky and the shading needs some work on all five. You have quite a bit of potential here, keep it up.
~
 
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fORRETRESS MASTER

Guest
thank you, thank you *bows courtly* the icons are coming soon! you know, these things: ;205;
 

.Bambi.

Be Wise, Tell Lies.
I can see much improvement with your new sprites, as the colors just flow better, but there is till some shading issues [such as the shell and claws].

Keep trying, though. With a little work you'll make quite a good Spriter.
 

Myuuvuirocon

<--- Destoria
fORRETRESS MASTER said:
sorry! i'll post the image in the first box!

thanx! hey, is that its shiny? I like this one better, ^^ it's cool!

can't wait t' see more! :D <--Make your smily's count! XD
but seriously, yer only allowed 1 smily in a message, so make it count... ^^
 
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