My (okay...) sprites

[fORRETRESS MASTER]

kay this is my three first scratch sprites. i like Spiquill and zaprik but quillectrik is a little too big. they are all ground/electric and evolve into each other.
p.s.i'm working on a ghost/ground turtle...so i'll post it when done.

Version 1.0

Version 2.0
(Shiny on the right, and normal on the left.)
"]Specturt/Ghostoise



i need suggestions. constructive criticism is okay.​

 

[Myuuvuirocon]

they look a tad blocky, but overall, pretty nice! ^^ I like 'em

keep it up! I hope I see the turtle soon!

 

[♥~Darkness Within~♥]

They look pretty nice, great job

 

[Mawile XD]

The first looks a bit like Swinub... Otherwise, good job!

 

[fORRETRESS MASTER]

i know.. i was in a swinub obsession when i made them.

 

[.Bambi.]

They're pretty good, but their armour looks a little pixely. Use darker shades of the main colors to outline so it doesn't look so blocky.

There's potential.

 

[fORRETRESS MASTER]

thanks! i'm working on the turtle now! I'll use that advice.

edit:kay, here's the turtle i was raving about:

The one on the left is Specturt and the one on the right is Ghostoise. They are both rock/ghost and Specturt evolves into Ghostoise at Lv.35. What do you think???

 

[Grandmaster Chao]

Pretty cool. I like em.

 

[Drakid]

Nice Forretress Master!

 

[Myuuvuirocon]

The one on the left is Specturt and the one on the right is Ghostoise.

they're cool! I like 'em. the pose that they're in is really good, ^^

keep it up! ^^

(I'm not good at constructive critizem... >_>)

 

[whiteabsol]

The shading can use a little work but other than that, the'yre okay.

~W.A~

 

[[Kingdra]]

They're not the best animation but they are good (-:

 

[Drakid]

they are not animations, they are sprites...**sigh**

 

[Shadow_Fox]

They do look nice, although a bit blocky and the shading needs some work on all five. You have quite a bit of potential here, keep it up.
~

 

[fORRETRESS MASTER]

thank you, thank you *bows courtly* the icons are coming soon! you know, these things: ;205;

 

[.Bambi.]

I can see much improvement with your new sprites, as the colors just flow better, but there is till some shading issues [such as the shell and claws].

Keep trying, though. With a little work you'll make quite a good Spriter.

 

[fORRETRESS MASTER]

kay... here's version 2.0 for Zaprik and quillectric. I think that they are better, the normal on the left, and the shiny on the right.

 

[Myuuvuirocon]

kay... here's version 2.0 for Zaprik and quillectric, and the icon for spiquil. I think that they are better:

er... I can't see it... it has that thing that says- "Oops! My image isn't here anymore!" or something like that... -_- gr...

 

[fORRETRESS MASTER]

sorry! i'll post the image in the first box!

 

[Myuuvuirocon]

sorry! i'll post the image in the first box!

thanx! hey, is that its shiny? I like this one better, ^^ it's cool!

can't wait t' see more! <--Make your smily's count! XD
but seriously, yer only allowed 1 smily in a message, so make it count... ^^