My Paint Made Art

[*umbreon*masta*1*1*]

I've been working on my fave pokemon...but i make them on paint.

heres an absol i made

so...what do you think ^^ ;004;​

 

[Yami Ryu]

... practice more. The whole thing looks flat and poorly shaded. The claws look .. like elongated, and wierdly shaped toes. Ever see a real claw? And Absol's ffs? They're curved and spaced. The Absol also looks squat and squashed, well both are the same. Meaning, your absol is squished into a small pic and only futher enhances the tacky quality. The front legs are also short/thick and the hind legs are very, very wtf small and thin.

Anyways as I said; Practice More.

 

[*umbreon*masta*1*1*]

ok...but it's my first try...why does everything i make need to be better...exet my sprites in my shop >< ;004;

 

[Yami Ryu]

because no one is perfect >> and it takes time and practiceto get better. Sheesh.

 

[JirachiMan]

very true, and for your first try it is not too horrible. Work on shading.

 

[*umbreon*masta*1*1*]

ok i made this stuf from babybel wax...(it's my hobby ^^;;...)

and

^^ ;004;

 

[Belgian Pokemaster]

ok i made this stuf from babybel wax...(it's my hobby ^^;;...)

and

^^ ;004;

Very cool idea^^

 

[Joshua the Shadow Lugia]

Nice art, I'm guilty with wax aswell. Why don't you try to use the different colours of the bell for the different colours on the pokemon.

 

[*umbreon*masta*1*1*]

I try but...i cant find any other colours ^^;;...and have a new one,an Absol chair (Be warned it dont look like a chair or an absol ><;;...)

EDIT:I also made a crying flygon wich is very badly drawn...i am open to C&C

 

[*umbreon*masta*1*1*]

sorry for the double post but i made starters for the fanfic im making...rember im very bad at shading but...here they are

thats Sealee the water one.

Lika-momo the fire one and finally

Lifi the grass one...so what do you think ^^??;235;

 

[Inukie]

the last three are so ccute!
on to critiques,
the absol drawing....Claws are very deformed... they should be small with no rounded ends. And the frount legs are very thick, the back paws are... literaly deformed, from thatpos nly claw should show from the hind legs. dont feel obligated to make every last bit of something in a pic, cuse thats hat i was thinking when i saw it.

the drawings on the bottem, are so cute um...Find a freindlyshort haired dog and have it sit, and stare at its cuteness. It might help ya with the shadows the body casts on itseelf as well as general shadeing, from what i can tell, the lightis from the left, then there should be a shawdow on the right feet.

the wax ones, are amazeing. The pic quality is poor but the actual thingys are great. Unfroutonitly the image quality is to pooor for me to find anything else to say about em.

 

[*umbreon*masta*1*1*]

thanx for the advice ^^...and i dont have a skanner so i had to use my webcam thats why the quality is bad ^^;;...;235;

 

[*umbreon*masta*1*1*]

sorry for the double post but i made a new pokemon

Its Jabo ^^...he's not coloured yet ^^;;...;235;