(For those of you wondering, yes, I'm still doing the whole flock of Spearow. I just altered the storyline a bit so that Ash nobly defends Pikachu first, thus prompting Pikachu to do the same thing for Ash later.)
Holy smudge, this comic is really good, both in quality and humor! I thought you only just draw cartoons! Well... I can still see it in the comics. Especially in Pikachu.
I love your adaption to the TV series. Adds more... originality to an otherwise clichéd plot. And more laughs . I think I've laughed the hardest on seeing Pikachu in a kennel, having Pikachu disobey orders, and the black-eye joke. Oh, and it's so strange how Ash can only understand Pikachu, though it's all thought-bubbles.
And I don't know why, but I was reminded of Calvin and Hobbes in the first Sunday comic on panel two XD.