mew 2000
Shiny Celebi
Intro/back story
back in second grade you would get stickers for writing books and stuff which if you got five you got a prize so being into pokemon i choose to write up a pokemon story with myself and my friend as the main characters, this story didn't take place in any particular region but after i got pearl it became sinnoh,normally i would have used cards for movesets of the pokemon we had but when i lost my cards i didn't have any way of knowing their moves so i stopped writing them. Unfortunately it was that same friend who made me give up pokemon for some number of years but i want to remake the stories i used to write and even include him like always, the names have been changed as they used to be the original names. I will be using some anime characters like i used to.
Edit- A great thanks to shaymin: http://www.serebiiforums.com/member.php?293762-Shymain for the help making this look more detailed and awesome
Prologue: The Journey Begins
One morning, early in the summer, a young boy named Fred woke up. He rubbed his eyes and looked out the window, peering at Professor Rowan's lab. Sleepily, he flopped out of bed and looked at the calender.Finally, it was the day he had been waiting for for years. His birthday. And now he was finally old enough to own a Pokemon! He quickly got dressed and headed downstairs.
His friend, Jacob was already down there waiting. His hair was sliding sideways, and he was hunched against the wall, impatiently tapping his foot against the ground.
"Would you hurry up? I want to get my Pokemon, already." he said with an air of frustration.
Jacob had been waiting for Fred for awhile, so he had a bit of a temper. The only reason he had waited to go on an adventure was because Fred was his friend, and he wanted to go with him.
"Sorry I'm late, let's go!" Fred said.
Fred's mom intercepted him on the way to the door, gave him a bag lunch and hugged him. Tears dripped from her eyes.
"I can't believe my little boy's about to go." she said, sniffling.
She emphathetically said this with great sorrow. Like all mothers, she didn't want her child to go out into the world all by himself– she didn't want to lose him.
"Come on, mom, you're embarrassing me." Fred said, disengaging from her swiftly.
"Be safe on your travels, son."
Fred's mom kissed him on the cheek and gave him another hug.
"I'm sure he'll be fine, dear. He's a responsible young man, after all." said Fred's father.
His mother sighed.
"I'm sure you're right, dear." she said sadly. "Goodbye, Fred. Goodbye, Jacob."
"Bye!" chimed the two friends simultaneously.
She watched them go, sniffling, and her husband patted her on the shoulder.
"Don't worry, he'll be back some day. He has Jacob, he'll be fine."
She found comfort in his words and decided to believe that he was right.
As the boys were walking down the route which led to Rowan's lab, Jacob asked Fred a question.
"Do you know which Pokemon you're gonna get?" asked Jacob quizzically.
Fred started to answer, but then stopped, puzzled. He hadn't put much thought into it– he didn't know what Pokemon he wanted! He looked straight ahead at Rowan's lab.
"I'm not sure yet." he replied tensely.
They reached the lab and knocked on the door. There was silence for a few minutes, so Jacob knocked on the door one more time, but no answer once again..
"Is he not here?" queried Fred anxiously.
Jacob felt that something was wrong. Rowan's lab was always open at this time of day! So why was the lab empty today? Curiosity took him over. He wanted to know what was going on.
"Let's check out back." suggested Jacob.
They walked around the to the back and found nothing. They preceded to check the windows the entire lab was dark. Fred, still worried, started thinking that he might be dreaming since all the lights were out.
"Is he not awake yet?" asked Fred worriedly.
Jacob felt the tension. He knew something was wrong. But then again, maybe Fred was right, and he was asleep, or away, or something. But he wanted his Pokemon NOW. He couldn't wait any longer.
"Let's just sneak in and grab a pokemon." said Jacob.
Jacob slowly opened the window, being careful not to make any noise. He checked the surrounding area to make sure no one was watching. The window came up slowly until it was fully open. He crawled in, then helped Fred get in as he was to short to reach the window.
As they walked through the lab, they checked each hallway for lights, in case he was in a room. Near the very back of the lab, a single door had light seeping though the slight opening in the door. They tiptoed slightly closer. Fred thought he might be studying.
"Maybe he's in there researching something." said Fred.
"Shhh, I hear voices." replied Jacob in a whisper.
They crept towards the door and opened it slightly enough to see what was inside. A Team Galactic member had Rowan in a head lock. Rowan's only Pokemon lay on a desk too far away for him to reach. He was flustered from being grabbed, but remained mostly calm. The grunt spoke:
"Give me your research papers– or else..." snarled the grunt.
"I do not answer to men so rude as you, and your fashion sense is as just as good as your haircut– in other worlds, awful." replied Rowan with indignation.
"You wanna get it, old man?" growled the blue-haired man.
Fred became furious seeing Rowan being held up. He didn't want that man to get away with this. He turned to Jacob.
"He's in trouble, we should help him." said Fred firmly.
Jacob looked at him like he was insane.
"With what Pokemon, genius?" he mumbled back.
Rowan and the grunt still stood there, the grunt continuing to threaten him.
"I won't give you those papers." said Rowan.
The grunt then threw Rowan into a desk. Three Pokeballs that were on it rolled over towards the ground by the door where Fred and Jacob were. The grunt, then taking a Pokeball from his belt, threw it at the ground. A Glameow popped out of the ball. Fred grabbed the closest Pokeball without thinking.
"Let's see how you'll answer to me after I rough you up. Glameow, use Scratch!"
Fred threw the Pokeball, not even knowing what pokemon was inside and gave a single command:
"Please save Professor Rowan!"
A Turtwig burst out in a flash, tackling the Glameow before it could touch Rowan, knockin it into the desk across the room.
"Get away from the professor." shouted Fred.
"A kid? You should go back to the playground, adults are doing business here "
Jacob saw what Fred had done and scanned the remaining two Pokeballs. Wanting to help as well, he picked up a ball and summoned the Pokemon out of the ball to find it was a Chimchar. He became excited seeing that his Pokemon had a type advantage to Fred's Pokemon. He gave Chimchar a command: "Use Ember on his stupid bowl haircut!"
Chimchar used Ember, setting the grunt's hair on fire. The grunt panicked and started flailing his arms about, hitting his hair repeatedly. He ran out of the lab, towards the ocean, to put it out.
"Thank you, boys! Thanks to you, I'm unharmed." congratulated Rowan earnestly.
Jacob was confused at this statement.
"He threw you against a desk and messed up your office. You call that unharmed?" replied Jacob.
"It's nothing, compared to what could have happened." stated Rowan grimly. The Professor looked at the Turwig and Chimchar next to the boys. Surprisingly, the seemed to have taken a liking to the boys.
"Well, you two seem to have bonded with these Pokèmon already. Why don't you take them, as a gift of thanks?
Fred grinned and said "Thanks!"
Jacob, already intending to take the Pokemon, pretended to be surprised and grinned. He didn't bother to mention the fact that he intended to steal it in the first place.
With that they visited the Pokecenter in Sandgem Town to heal up their Pokemon. The two boys were excited ready to start their adventures. They wondered eagerly what was to come.
The two began their journey, walking towards the next town together.
comment on how to improve it thanks for reading ^.^
back in second grade you would get stickers for writing books and stuff which if you got five you got a prize so being into pokemon i choose to write up a pokemon story with myself and my friend as the main characters, this story didn't take place in any particular region but after i got pearl it became sinnoh,normally i would have used cards for movesets of the pokemon we had but when i lost my cards i didn't have any way of knowing their moves so i stopped writing them. Unfortunately it was that same friend who made me give up pokemon for some number of years but i want to remake the stories i used to write and even include him like always, the names have been changed as they used to be the original names. I will be using some anime characters like i used to.
Edit- A great thanks to shaymin: http://www.serebiiforums.com/member.php?293762-Shymain for the help making this look more detailed and awesome
Prologue: The Journey Begins
One morning, early in the summer, a young boy named Fred woke up. He rubbed his eyes and looked out the window, peering at Professor Rowan's lab. Sleepily, he flopped out of bed and looked at the calender.Finally, it was the day he had been waiting for for years. His birthday. And now he was finally old enough to own a Pokemon! He quickly got dressed and headed downstairs.
His friend, Jacob was already down there waiting. His hair was sliding sideways, and he was hunched against the wall, impatiently tapping his foot against the ground.
"Would you hurry up? I want to get my Pokemon, already." he said with an air of frustration.
Jacob had been waiting for Fred for awhile, so he had a bit of a temper. The only reason he had waited to go on an adventure was because Fred was his friend, and he wanted to go with him.
"Sorry I'm late, let's go!" Fred said.
Fred's mom intercepted him on the way to the door, gave him a bag lunch and hugged him. Tears dripped from her eyes.
"I can't believe my little boy's about to go." she said, sniffling.
She emphathetically said this with great sorrow. Like all mothers, she didn't want her child to go out into the world all by himself– she didn't want to lose him.
"Come on, mom, you're embarrassing me." Fred said, disengaging from her swiftly.
"Be safe on your travels, son."
Fred's mom kissed him on the cheek and gave him another hug.
"I'm sure he'll be fine, dear. He's a responsible young man, after all." said Fred's father.
His mother sighed.
"I'm sure you're right, dear." she said sadly. "Goodbye, Fred. Goodbye, Jacob."
"Bye!" chimed the two friends simultaneously.
She watched them go, sniffling, and her husband patted her on the shoulder.
"Don't worry, he'll be back some day. He has Jacob, he'll be fine."
She found comfort in his words and decided to believe that he was right.
As the boys were walking down the route which led to Rowan's lab, Jacob asked Fred a question.
"Do you know which Pokemon you're gonna get?" asked Jacob quizzically.
Fred started to answer, but then stopped, puzzled. He hadn't put much thought into it– he didn't know what Pokemon he wanted! He looked straight ahead at Rowan's lab.
"I'm not sure yet." he replied tensely.
They reached the lab and knocked on the door. There was silence for a few minutes, so Jacob knocked on the door one more time, but no answer once again..
"Is he not here?" queried Fred anxiously.
Jacob felt that something was wrong. Rowan's lab was always open at this time of day! So why was the lab empty today? Curiosity took him over. He wanted to know what was going on.
"Let's check out back." suggested Jacob.
They walked around the to the back and found nothing. They preceded to check the windows the entire lab was dark. Fred, still worried, started thinking that he might be dreaming since all the lights were out.
"Is he not awake yet?" asked Fred worriedly.
Jacob felt the tension. He knew something was wrong. But then again, maybe Fred was right, and he was asleep, or away, or something. But he wanted his Pokemon NOW. He couldn't wait any longer.
"Let's just sneak in and grab a pokemon." said Jacob.
Jacob slowly opened the window, being careful not to make any noise. He checked the surrounding area to make sure no one was watching. The window came up slowly until it was fully open. He crawled in, then helped Fred get in as he was to short to reach the window.
As they walked through the lab, they checked each hallway for lights, in case he was in a room. Near the very back of the lab, a single door had light seeping though the slight opening in the door. They tiptoed slightly closer. Fred thought he might be studying.
"Maybe he's in there researching something." said Fred.
"Shhh, I hear voices." replied Jacob in a whisper.
They crept towards the door and opened it slightly enough to see what was inside. A Team Galactic member had Rowan in a head lock. Rowan's only Pokemon lay on a desk too far away for him to reach. He was flustered from being grabbed, but remained mostly calm. The grunt spoke:
"Give me your research papers– or else..." snarled the grunt.
"I do not answer to men so rude as you, and your fashion sense is as just as good as your haircut– in other worlds, awful." replied Rowan with indignation.
"You wanna get it, old man?" growled the blue-haired man.
Fred became furious seeing Rowan being held up. He didn't want that man to get away with this. He turned to Jacob.
"He's in trouble, we should help him." said Fred firmly.
Jacob looked at him like he was insane.
"With what Pokemon, genius?" he mumbled back.
Rowan and the grunt still stood there, the grunt continuing to threaten him.
"I won't give you those papers." said Rowan.
The grunt then threw Rowan into a desk. Three Pokeballs that were on it rolled over towards the ground by the door where Fred and Jacob were. The grunt, then taking a Pokeball from his belt, threw it at the ground. A Glameow popped out of the ball. Fred grabbed the closest Pokeball without thinking.
"Let's see how you'll answer to me after I rough you up. Glameow, use Scratch!"
Fred threw the Pokeball, not even knowing what pokemon was inside and gave a single command:
"Please save Professor Rowan!"
A Turtwig burst out in a flash, tackling the Glameow before it could touch Rowan, knockin it into the desk across the room.
"Get away from the professor." shouted Fred.
"A kid? You should go back to the playground, adults are doing business here "
Jacob saw what Fred had done and scanned the remaining two Pokeballs. Wanting to help as well, he picked up a ball and summoned the Pokemon out of the ball to find it was a Chimchar. He became excited seeing that his Pokemon had a type advantage to Fred's Pokemon. He gave Chimchar a command: "Use Ember on his stupid bowl haircut!"
Chimchar used Ember, setting the grunt's hair on fire. The grunt panicked and started flailing his arms about, hitting his hair repeatedly. He ran out of the lab, towards the ocean, to put it out.
"Thank you, boys! Thanks to you, I'm unharmed." congratulated Rowan earnestly.
Jacob was confused at this statement.
"He threw you against a desk and messed up your office. You call that unharmed?" replied Jacob.
"It's nothing, compared to what could have happened." stated Rowan grimly. The Professor looked at the Turwig and Chimchar next to the boys. Surprisingly, the seemed to have taken a liking to the boys.
"Well, you two seem to have bonded with these Pokèmon already. Why don't you take them, as a gift of thanks?
Fred grinned and said "Thanks!"
Jacob, already intending to take the Pokemon, pretended to be surprised and grinned. He didn't bother to mention the fact that he intended to steal it in the first place.
With that they visited the Pokecenter in Sandgem Town to heal up their Pokemon. The two boys were excited ready to start their adventures. They wondered eagerly what was to come.
The two began their journey, walking towards the next town together.
comment on how to improve it thanks for reading ^.^
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