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My Pokemon crossover fanfic

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Sorry about the error message, I cancelled the page as there were friends knocking on the door for me. Sorry again for the link I promise I looked at the rules and there didn't seem to be one against linking, but for that I apologise. To show my sorry-ness here's the fic in full (it's long so sorry for that too, not complete yet).

TRANSFORMERS & POKEMON (working title)

DISCLAIMER: This is a fanfic, all events in it are fictional and any person/event similar to anything in this fanfic is pure coincidence. This fan fiction is (c) to me, Transformers is (c) &TM to Hasbro inc. & Takara inc. Pokemon is (c) & TM to Nintendo and Game Freak.

Chapter 1: Arrival from Cybertron

"DIE AUTOBOTS!" shouted the Decepticon leader as he and his troops stormed the Autobot ship known as 'Ark' (the events happening right now are the same as the beginning of the original G1 cartoon with the Autobots searching for new Energy from the energy depleted Cybertron (their home world) the Decepticons followed them and attacked their ship) the Autobots fought valiantly as their kind have against the Decepticon menace for many millennia, but the smaller autobots weren’t much of a match for the bigger Decepticons as Soundwave single handedly out fought Jazz, Sideswipe and Ratchet.

Optimus Prime, the legendary Autobot leader, who some would call "More human than other people and he's a robot!" was once again face to face with his dreaded nemesis Megatron (Decepticon leader) "You're nothing but a bully Megatron, even when we try to find new energy sources to help the innocents of Cybertron survive and you still attack us, it's like a Decepticon killing an Autobot medic when he's helping the wounded both Autobot and Decepticon!" Megatron grapples with Prime, "This is to good an opportunity to destroy you Prime, and once I terminate your energon core I will find where you were going and plunder its energy!" snickered the Decepticon leader as he had Prime to his knees with a sly knee of his own to Prime's abdomen.

Suddenly an alarm went off on the Ark and the voice of Teletran-One (the Autobot's super-computer, a computer so advanced that IT nerds on Earth could only dream of it) boomed throughout the ship "Warning, gravitational forces from unknown planetary atmosphere, pulling ship down." All the Transformers stopped, with the threat of am imminent crash anyone would stop fighting for a moment. Prime shouted to Jazz, the Autobot spy commander (a fun loving robot who was rarely never seen not smiling, but in this case no one was smiling) "JAZZ pull us out now before we crash!”

Jazz replied to the order "No luck Prime this ship is falling faster that a Decpticon aircraft which was shot by a missile!" The Ark and the Decepticon ship which was attached to the Ark 'Nemesis' (the Decepticons boarded the Ark by pulling it up next to it with their own ship and boarded through a special ship boarding contraption which allowed them to raid Autobot spaceships) fell to the then prehistoric Earth, the Nemesis ship detached from the Ark, no-one then knew what happened to that ship but as for the Ark where most of the Decepticon forces had boarded and all the Autobots found themselves spiraling closer and closer to the Earth's surface.

(Authors note :) Now this is where our story differentiates from the original Transformers cartoon story, for the 'gravitational' forces that pulled the ship to its doom on Earth, this is not what happened. The forces that pulled the Ark down were actually telepathy waves which pulled the ship to Earth, and the telepathic source? We will get to that in a sec.

The Ark was headed to the continent of Pangaea (the single continent of Earth in Prehistoric times) the ship crashed into a mountainside and in the distance, two figures looked on, at first glance you would think they were some kind of Dinosaurs, but not so, one was a tall 7 foot being, that looked so sinister, Megatron would look away in horror, and standing next to this being was a large Black and white winged dragon/beast with the most haunting red eyes you'll ever have the displeasure of witnessing. These beings were not from this time, they were actually from millions of years in the future, the 7 foot being who was both light and dark purple in areas had immense psychic powers at his disposal, so advanced he eventually learnt the art of time travel, the Dragon beast was (as you could call in some way or another) his pet, or his chariot as you will, used to bring terror to those who look upon them.

The purple being smiled and pronounced to his 'pet' telepathically "my destiny, has begun......."

Chapter 2: Dream of Darkness

Millions of years later (4 million to be precise) in the town of Pallet in the Hoenn region of North America a 16 year old girl by the name of Amy Coolson was in bed, but she couldn’t sleep. You see in this world today the whole world is populated not just by animals but creatures with special powers and abilities, creatures who are both socially and intellectually more advanced than normal animals, thus bonds with humans spawned, these creatures worked side by side and cared for each other. Eventually a brilliant scientist who is just called 'Prof. Oak' invented the "Capture ball" these balls somehow could fit these creatures of any size in it, allowing the creature's owner to carry them around anywhere.

With the invention of this device people finally gave a name to these creatures 'Pocket Monsters' because they could be carried around with you, then some important people got together, they decided to create a "pocket monster battle tourney" they came up with the idea of owners of pocket monsters would battle their captured creatures for grand championship prizes. With the introduction of that people all over went mad for pocket monsters as everyone wanted to fight for the championship (anyone could join, any age, sex, etc) with this companies sought for merchandising rights, games, movies, cartoons, toys, t-shirts, etc were made. The merchandising companies sought to give the merchandise a good name, in the end they combined 'pocket' & 'monster' to make the official name 'Pokemon', the name has stuck with fans ever since.

And Amy was a rabid pokemon fan. Last week she has finally collected her eighth Hoenn league pokemon gym badge, this would gain her the right to fight in the pokemon champions’ league, a dream she has had since she started as a 10 year old girl. Her party was a fearsome one, unlike the stereotypical pokemon fan girl who likes the 'cute' 'mon she prefers the rather intimidating ones, her party consisted of Feraligatr, Pikachu (ok so she had a soft spot for Pikachu but who doesn’t?) , Arbok, Charizard, Wailord & Steelix. Tomorrow morning would be the first leg of the Hoenn championship (if you win that league you eventually go on to face the winners from the Orange, Johto and Kanto leagues, win that league and you face the elite four, beat them and your world champion!) and she was very excited, but as time wore on she eventually dozed off.

Amy suddenly found herself in infinite darkness, nothing but black, she felt as though she were floating with nowhere to go. She felt rather scared. Then a horrendous roaring noise as a figure appeared before her eyes, it looked like a Lugia pokemon, but much bigger and its skin was black, its belly and eye crests were white and its eyes red with white circles for pupils. Amy screamed but she couldn’t move she was caught in a psychic grasp. Amy suddenly felt pain on her right shoulder, she pulled down her top and saw a tattoo, it looked like a black heart and it was glowing red, emitting pain in her shoulder. The dark lugia then drew closer with his right hand out ready to grab her, Amy struggled but to no avail as she looked again the giant right hand that was about to grab her grew closer and closer......when..........BANG!! Amy woke up to find herself fallen out of bed. "OW!" she moaned. It was morning, her mother Suzanne shouted up "AMY! It’s your big day today."

Amy pondered about the dream the night before. "What a strange dream, such a scary lugia......ah what am I saying? There is no such thing as a black Lugia, that dream must've been caused by my over-excitement last night." Amy got dressed and grabbed her backpack and pokeball belt where she kept her pokeballs. A quick wash then downstairs for breakfast where she met Mom "Oh Amy I am so proud of you! My little girl in the championship" "Yeah mom me and my team are going to wipe out the competition!" Amy replied confidentially. Her excitement went through the roof again as she hurried to finish her breakfast.....

Chapter 3: The Awakening

It didn’t seem long but the Decepticon seeker Skywarp (the Decepticon special air assault team was a trio of triplets, Skywarp was black, Thundercracker was blue and the leader Starscream was red) regained power, what he saw was a scene of devastation, Autobot and Decepticon parts were strewn across the entire ship interior, caused by the crash, but in his awe he noticed the Autobot computer teletran one was repairing his left arm (using the ships many emergency repair systems) Skywarp had no idea why the autobot computer was helping his enemy, but the crash must've damaged teletran-one's memory banks and was unable to tell the difference between autobot and decepticon.

Skywarp pulled his leader Megatron close to the repair systems. It fixed Megatron back together with relative ease; this was a SUPER computer after all. "Megatron my Leader we are alive again" Skywarp pronounced joyously to his reactivated leader. Megatron ordered Skywarp "Quickly we must revive the other Decepticons!" one by one the Decepticons were repaired and functioning again. On top of the mountain Megatron looked in wonder "We are on a planet far from Cybetron; my readings indicate that this planet is full of energy for the taking!" Megatron was extremely excited, all this energy to plunder and it was all his, in his excitement he had totally forgotten about the Autobots (either that or his ego got the better of him and thought the autobots were as good as dead anyway) back in the Ark teletran-one continued his repair work, first off fixing the autobot leader Optimus Prime. Eventually all autobots were alive and kicking again.

The Autobots looked for Megatron but he was long gone. The Autobots re-assembled back in the Ark (now stuck inside the mountain due to the millions of years that passed as land grew over it) Prime started to brief his troops "We are on a planet far from cybertron, there must be energy around here at it's an inhabitable planet and if there is any energy here Megatron must know about it by now." Prime was pondering what to say next when a large grey dinosaur looking creature entered the Ark, it was the Pokemon known as Aerodactyl, it saw the now awakened autobots as trespassers on its territory (the creature lived in the mountain) and attacked. It used Aeroblast on the closest Autobot Braun, he got hit and was sent flying to the back wall, and fortunately his strong armor was more than enough to withstand the punishment "Stupid bird brain" he cursed.

The little yellow Autobot Bumblebee, not the strongest, smartest or biggest Autobot but was certainly the most courageous (just as much as Prime) grabbed the monster by the tail "Hey bird breath my smell sensors indicate you need a shower and now 'cuz any smellier and you'd melt metal itself ha ha" but the poor little autobot found himself being flung across the room. Ironhide came running "Hold that shower thought bee buddy, I'm going to give dodo head one right now" Ironhide's right hand pulled back and out came a fire hose nozzle that blasted a strong stream of water that pinned Aerodactyl to the wall. Prowl, the Autobot's second in command shouted "C'mon lets terminate that thing before it damages anything else" but Prime intervened "NO this isn’t a Decepticon, it's a neutral creature and we do not harm innocent life Prowl" "But it sure wants to harm us sir!" Prowl obviously stated. Perceptor intervened (the autobots chief scientist) "Wait, this creature seems to have incredible powers, I suggest we capture it and I shall study it to determine what it is and how it uses its powers, perhaps we could use it to our advantage" (really perceptor wanted to study it, he was a very curious guy and loved meeting new life forms).

Prime agreed, the creatures powers is impressive, Prime launched an energon net which enslaved aerodactyl. With the beast subdued Perceptor stepped to the cage and injected Aerodactyl with a harmless sleeping dart from his gun. Hours later Prime stepped into Perceptor's lab. "How is it coming Perceptor?" "Brilliantly Prime, this is so interesting, from what I've learnt this creature somehow is born with it's powers, you see when this creature grows older it somehow is able to call on new powers from sources I can't explain" (Perceptor ran a sort of battle test by letting Aerodactyl roam free in an observation pen which was all but indestructible, Perceptor observed Aerodactyl use Aeroblast, whirlwind and other assorted powers to escape but to no avail. Prime was impressed but stated to an afterwards disappointed Peceptor that "You've found out what you want to know about it Perceptor now let it go, we don’t take advantage of innocent life forms" you see Perceptor wanted to use the creatures power to be converted into energy, but that was a tactic which only the Decepticons would stoop to. And that is exactly what they did.

Chapter 4: Prepare for Trouble with a capital D

In the hours that past, the Decepticons revival, they had re-located their ship the Nemesis which was fortunately intact at the bottom of the Pacific Ocean. While the Autobots studied Aerodactyl, the Decepticons too had found out for themselves the power these 'Pokemon' posess. While flying over Japanese forests (All Decepticons could fly regardless of their alternate mode) Soundwave, the Decepticon's chief spy and energy reconnaissance agent had detected a high energy reading emitting from a creature running in the forests. "I am reading energy patterns from a moving source megatron" (Soundwave sounded like a robotic synthesizer) Megatron looked down. It was Entei, a rare and powerful Pokemon, a monster of that caliber was bound to give off a high energy reading. Megatron looked puzzled. "Soundwave, confirm it's that creature that's emitting the energy reading" "Affirmative" Soundwave replied.

Entei running suddenly felt danger he picked up speed, he wasn’t sure what the danger was but he didn’t want to stop to find out. He suddenly found himself being fired upon by a large red F-15 (American made fighter) it was Starscream that flew over him. Entei thought of it as curious humans wanting to get a close look at the legendary pokemon, but it was turning towards him again, this time firing a Null-Ray (a concussion laser) rather than a photo as Entei would've thought. He stumbled for a good 10 feet at the speed he was going, Entei eventually stopped sliding. He was strong and was back up quickly but not before he was surrounded by giant robots. Megatron stepped forward "I am Megatron leader of the Decepticons and future ruler of the Universe, you have a high amount of Energy within you, either give it to us or we will force it from you!"

Entei could sense great evil surrounding him, he spoke "I....I do not know what you mean but be warned evil one, attempt to harm me and I will destroy you......" Megatron was taken back by this "Well well well, looks like you can talk which is all the better as you can understand what I am saying which is hand over the energy NOW!" but right after Megatron had finished Entei had completely covered him with intense fire from his fire blast move (he shoots out a stream of fire from his mouth) Megatron felt his circuits heat up inside, although he was fire-proof a certain intensity of heat could damage his interior. Megatron dove away from the jet stream, while Entei was firing at Megatron Soundwave picked up the high energy readings again "Megatron, this creature is immensely powerful, suggest we enslave it for our use" "Yes we shall" Although Megatron was badly charred he still cracked a smile as if he felt nothing. Entei couldn’t believe it that blast would've destroyed even the hardest of Kakunas but Megatron was able to withstand his wrath. Entei charged Megatron, the other Decepticons attempting to intervene only to be halted by Megatron "Halt! I will deal with this insolent flesh creature personally!”

Megatron equipped his Energon Mace (the Mace was a medieval weapon with a spiked metal ball attached to a chain) as Entei pounced Megatron clobbered him with a right swing from the Mace. Entei hit off a tree unconscious. Megatron gloated over his victory and ordered the Decepticons to return Entei to Decepticon HQ. All the meanwhile Entei and the Decepticons were not alone. Through the dense forests the Team Rocket trio of Jessie, James and Meowth watched on, astonished by the huge robots they contacted their boss Giovanni. Team Rocket is a criminal organization intent on capturing every pokemon in the world, to use them for evil purposes such a theft of valuable items and eventually, the conquest of the world. Giovanni listened to Meowth over the Radio "You've got ta' see dis boss, dere's giant robots and dey just caught Entei wid no sweat!" Giovanni didn't trust Mewoth's gang as they were huge failures and thought of them crazy but the mention of Entei interested him, such a strong pokemon was probably worth a look. Giovanni contacted his recon dept. a team Rocket grunt answered the phone "Yes sir what are your orders!" "I want our satellite on the co-ordinates I’m sending you now" and the phone went dead. Next to the grunt a team of operators controlling the Team Rocket satellite read the co-ordinates Meowth was sending them through a secure messenger program from Jessie's PDA.

The Satellite in space zoomed into a forested area outside of Kyoto Japan, the Satellite operators were streaming the images to Giovanni's computer in his office, and Mewoth was right, there in the images stood a group of giant robots standing over the Unconscious Entei. The Satellite Operators and Giovanni stood up in their chairs, what an unbelievable site! Giovanni thought of the possibility that they were new species of Pokemon. But then that theory was proven wrong as Pokemon don’t usually attack legendary pokemon (and win for that matter!) as Pokemon usually look up to the Legends as protectors, or Gods as you will. Giovanni then smiled, perhaps he could somehow take advantage of these new creatures to help him in his evil dreams as anything that can beat a legend is worthy of even Giovanni's interest.

Back to the Decepticons in Japan, Entei was being loaded into Thundercracker's cockpit when Soundwave's HUD (Heads-Up-Display) picked up a satellite transmitting images of them back to an unknown source "MEGATRON! We are being spied upon" Megatron at first thought of Autobots "Is it an Autobot transmission Soundwave?" "Negative, it is an alien satellite" Megatron scanned the sky for satellites and fair enough there it was, Team Rocket's satellite. "I will deal with it." Back in Giovanni's office he saw Megatron looking directly at him through his monitor and then a stream of purple energy erupted from Megatron's arm cannon at the satellite and then there was just the usual fuzz (same as you would get from an un-tuned TV program) Giovanni's phone rang, it was the same Grunt from the Recon dept. "SIR! We lost contact with the satellite" "Easily replaceable" he replied and put the phone down.

He smiled then activated a video conversation to Jessie's PDA. "Hey you guys" said Jessie "It’s the boss!" Giovanni's face was appearing on Jessie's PDA screen. "I have a new very important assignment for you" Giovanni's tone was very serious as always. "Yes sir anything to please you as always" replied James, who in reality was a bit of a Butt-kisser, he might not have been if he had known what the new orders were. "I want you to make contact with those robots right now! introduce yourselves to them then hand the PDA over to their leader whoever it is" Team Rocket's hair almost jumped from their skin as Meowth questioned Giovanni "ARE YOU NUTS!? We aint going anywhere near 'dem robots dey'll squash us flat!" "DO AS I SAY or you're off the team!" Giovanni barked. Team rocket is all the James, Jessie and Meowth had, career wise, this is the reason they do almost anything for Giovanni, if he told them to jump off a cliff they would (although this has already happened many times at the hands of Ash and the 'twerps'). Giovanni pondered to himself "If Meowth's crew should be eliminated by those robots it would do me great. I wont have to deal with those idiots again so they'll be doing me a favor" and he cackled to himself.

Right after Megatron had destroyed the Satellite, he was discussing with Soundwave about the subject. "That Satellite must've come from this planet, which means there must be intelligent life here after all, but where?" Soundwave butted in "Megatron, alien life forms approaching" and Sure enough it was James, Jessie and Meowth approaching, all very scared. Megatron approached them "Well what do we have here?" Team Rocket was too scared to talk. Megatron saw a device which seemed to be talking in Jessie’s hand (It was Giovanni shouting to Jessie to give the PDA over) Megatron turned the screen towards him (the PDA was tiny in Megatron's fingers) he saw the face of Giovanni.

"Ah I finally see those idiots handed the PDA to you. Allow me to introduce myself, I am Giovanni" Megatron returned the favor "Greeting Giovanni! I am Megatron leader of the Decepticons, what is it you wish to tell me?" "I am the leader of an organization, a rich organization with unlimited resources" that was enough to get Megatron's attention "Resources you say? Where I want energy now!" "Patience Megatron, I don’t mean the energy resources, but if you are willing to co-operate I can supply you with vast amounts of Energy" Megatron grew more interested "Very well, and what do you want in return Giovanni?" Giovanni smirked "we can trade you energy for that creature you just captured...." before he could finish Starscream butted in "NEVER flesh creature this is OUR catch and OUR energy!" (Starscream was a cold, merciless being and had little respect to other life-forms, whether of any use or not, But Megatron is always seeing the potential of useful life forms) Megatron shoves Starscream to the ground.

"SILENCE Starscream you FOOL! Now as you were saying Giovanni?" "Yes, as I was saying, the more of these powerful monsters you can catch for me, the more energy you can attain!" "Excellent Giovanni let us set up a meeting at my headquarters..." "NO megatron, come to my Headquarters, you can learn more about this planet and the monsters I want you to catch here." Megatron didn’t like being interrupted but Giovanni was right, they need to upgrade their education on Earth. "Very well send us the co-ordinates and we will meet you there in fifty million astro seconds, we want to run tests first on this captured beast." Giovanni sent the co-ordinates to Megatron (who saved them to his data banks) He sat in his office chair thinking "These robots will be the weapons I may need to conquer this world, and eliminate that Pokemon I myself created, who turned his back on me, once he is finished, I will then see off Megatron and his bunch and I will rule supreme." Giovanni laughed away as visions of world conquest came to his insane mind.......

Chapter 5: The Journey begins

With a kiss from her Mom, Amy set off on the road to the champions league, her Mom waved wildly (like an air traffic director at the airport) sobbing "Goodbye my sweet! GOOD LUCK!" "Don't worry Mom I'll win it for you!" Amy shouted back as she turned around with a smug on her face. Her destination was the central bus station which would take her through the deserts of Colorado to where the championships were being held in California. Even though it was the Hoenn championship all Pokemon championships are held there, maybe for the possibility of attracting all the tourists that go there and for it's huge stadiums. Before she could get to town to get the bus, she would have to take a short cut through a small wooded area. It was full of Pokemon (as anywhere) but she didn't really need any more new ones, her team was just fine.

Once in the wood she was approached by someone, it was a small boy, probably 12 who just started his pokemon career, as any new trainer, he was eager and always on the lookout for new opponents. "HEY!" the kid said "Want to battle?" he drew a pokeball. Amy had plenty of time before the bus left (she actually set out early HOPING to find an opponent, the warm up would do her team good) "Sure kid let's battle! But be warned I don't think you should go against such an older opponent like myself" the Boy had to fight anyway, the rules stated that once a challenge has been issued, neither party is allowed to back down (not that either of them wanted to back down anyway) the boy started "Go Squirtle!" and out came the blue turtle. Amy thought to herself "a squirtle? This kid is obviously just starting" so she replied to the boys move "now let me teach you a lesson in water pokemon! Go FERALIGATR!" and out came the 7 foot plus Alligator pokemon, it was indeed a fearsome beast.

The boy was stunned; he had definitely bitten off more than he can chew. But he fought on nevertheless. He made the first move "Squirtle use your head butt" the turtle charged but just bounced off Feraligatr. "Nice try kid but I want to end this now, Feraligatr use your whirlpool attack" and Feraligatr reared up and shot a spiraling waterspout out of his mouth. This was enough to KO Squirtle and the Boy returned his pet. Amy waited for his next move but fact was that was the kid's only pokemon. She was right in her presumption that he was just beginning. The lad came up to Amy "Gee that was an awesome pokemon you had" she replied with a "Thanks" the continued "I'm sure your Squirtle will be awesome some day too" the boy asked Amy "So where you headed? I've been in this forest all day" he approached Amy a little closer, but as he did, she felt the same pain in her dream last night causing pain to her right shoulder, but as quick as it came it was gone. "Must be coincidence" she thought.

The boy asked again "What's your name?" Amy replied "Amy, Amy Coolson, and yours?" meanwhile in the shadows of the wood, a figure was watching and thought to itself "Good, it is her" back to the conversation, the boy said his name was just "Lu" he continued "Can I get your phone number? So I can challenge you again in the future?" "Sure why not?" Amy gave him her number on paper. The boy smiled and said "Thanks, I can't wait to challenge you again!" and ran off. Amy thought to herself "Strange? Why didn't he just store the number on his phone? Oh well he is young probably doesn't have one yet" and she continued on her way. The mysterious figure that was watching her smiled "So we finally have her, but not yet, when the time is right, she will lead me to supreme power" the same boy that had been talking to Amy approached the figure, it wasn't a boy at all, in reality he was more than meets the eye, the mysterious figure waved his hand and the boy changed from a small child into a Lugia, but not the light Lugia as we all know, it was evil looking, black skin with red eyes. The same creature that watched the Autobot ship crash all those years ago....

The mysterious figure too was his owner, the same person that also watched the Autobots crash all those years ago. "And as for the girl, she will be yours for the taking, to give YOU supreme power my pet" the mysterious figure then waved his hand in a circular formation, a purple cyclone enveloped them both and when the cyclone vanished, they too were gone.....

Chapter 6: Contact!

In the deserts of Colorado, a group of Decepticons (consisting of Soundwave, Starscream, Thrust and Blitzwing) were flying overhead (apart from Soundwave all the others had transformed to their jet modes) Megatron had ordered them to check out the Ark to make sure the Autobots were dead (in Megatron's excitement in finding new energy, he forgot about the Autobots) They were 50 miles and closing......

Meanwhile on the ground a Bus was driving through the same desert. Amy had finally caught her bus and was on her way to California. She was sleeping; the journey so far had been very long. Back at the Ark, once all repairs to the ship and teletran-one had been finished, Optimus Prime could finally think about what to do next, he organized sorties to explore the area and others to hunt the Decepticons. "Jazz, Hound, Bumblebee, Wheeljack, assemble at once" the four Autobots lined up in front of their leader. Prime continued "I want you to go out and explore the surrounding area, see if you can make any further contact with any intelligent life forms, and be careful of anymore of that dangerous wildlife, who knows what other creatures are out there." Jazz replied "What no deceptitrash cans to kick? And I thought this was going to be fun!" he smiled "C'mon Jazz we all know you’re an explorer at heart, besides be thankful that you DON'T run into any Decepticon."

With their orders the four Autobots headed out in their car modes. Back in the Decepticon search party Soundwave looked down, he could see a road with a bus on it "Attention Starscream, unknown vehicle below us, possible Autobot” Starscream ordered the other jets to transform, and below them was a bus. "Hmm my warning systems aren't alerting me to any threats, let's check it out" Starsream flew down and the other Decepticons followed. The bus driver was listening to the Bus radio, the station was a rock channel playing some 80's metal. But just as metal was the huge figure that landed in front of him, it was Blitzwing. He was the first of his kind, along with Astrotrain he was what is known as a 'triple changer' a transformer with two alternate modes instead of one, one mode was his jet mode and the other a tank.

He turned to his tank mode, and the bus drove right into him. Everyone on board the bus including Amy turned to the front to see a tank inside the bus (fortunately the bus driver ran near the back and survived the impact) no one was hurt, but not yet anyway, as giant metal hands started smashing into the bus, grabbing the passengers. Amy too was caught, by Soundwave. Outside the Decepticons studied their captives. Starscream came to a conclusion "Judging by the vehicle they were riding in, their outer clothing shells and their ability to speak and communicate with each other, I think this is this planet's intelligent life forms." Soundwave suggested the next course of action "I suggest we take the prisoner back to base for further study" "SILENCE" Starscream bit at Soundwave. "These flesh creatures are of no use to us, we terminate them immediately" (as I said before, Starscream had no respect for other life forms and thinks they are insects who must be terminated, he himself once famously stated "I will rule the universe, even if I'm the only one left in the Universe!")

Soundwave and Starscream were both Megatron's Lieutenants and so they both were arguing what to do with the humans. Meanwhile in Soundwave's left hand Amy finally got an arm free, during Soundwave's bickering with Starscream his grip loosened and she was able to pull out a pokeball. "HEY METALHEADS!" she shouted, the Decepticon lieutenants turned to her "When I have something to say, I say there will be no killing today, GO WAILORD!" Starscream looked on puzzled as he saw a red and white ball hit the floor. It opened up and some sort of spectacular light show seemed to come out of it. Then the light seemed to completely dwarf the Decepticons and the light started changing, it started changing into Wailord. A massive whale pokemon, it was the biggest in existence, 47 feet tall from the top of it's head to the floor and length wise it was around 100+ feet it dwarfed the alien robots.

In their amazement the Decepticons dropped the humans out of their hands, they all ran in different directions, Amy sought the protection of Wailord. Starscream stuttered "D...D....Decepticons, attack that thing!" Soundwave started by firing his shoulder mounted gattling gun, Wailord countered by slamming its tail on the floor which flew rocks into the air in front of him, these rocks blocked Soundwave's laser fire and Wailord fought back by shooting a waterspout at Soundwave through its mouth. Soundwave was sent flying for a good 20 feet but his heavy metal structure was able to stop him from being blown into the sky. Blitzwing and thrust charged Wailord, Amy finally shouted out a command "Wailord use your pound attack!" Wailord jumped to the sky and Thrust and Blitzwing saw a massive underbelly coming directly on top of them when eventually Wailord landed right on top of them with an almighty thud. Wailord rolled over and the two unfortunate Decepticons were buried into the ground, still functioning though. Starscream finally lost his temper and shouted "YOU BEAST I WILL DESTROY YOU FOR EVER CROSSING THE DECEPTICONS!" he too charged, not thinking strategically.

Wailord just sat there waiting, Starscream grew closer drawing his right fist, when Starscream tried to land it, and Wailord simply opened its mouth. Starscream tripped over Wailord's bottom lip and landed on its tongue, before he could think of what was happening, Wailord slammed its mouth shut and swallowed. "Good job Wailord, I hope he was nice and tasty" Amy said with glee to her prized pokemon. Soundwave was now on his own, Thrust and Blitzwing were still pinned into the ground and Starscream was in the belly of Wailord. Soundwave would not run away, he was a loyal fighter and a true Decepticon warrior, thinking his next move his intercom came online, it was Megatron "Soundwave, I've been watching the whole thing from your live video feed, and I've sent backup, which should be more than enough to take down that overgrown fish face."

And sure enough backup had arrived; it was the 6 Constructicons, Scrapper, Hook, Longhaul, Mixmaster, Bonecrusher and Scavenger. Amy smiled "Well more of your friends come to the slaughter, good 'cos my Wailord is still hungry and itching for a fight." Scrapper the leader of the Constructicons countered "Stupid flesh creature, it's not just you who has all the special abilities on this planet" with that he gave the order, the order which for many years on Cybertron struck fear into the Autobots "CONSTRUCTICONS, MERGE!" and with that the 6 constructicons combined into one huge robot, the robot known as 'Devastator' Amy was taken back, he was huge, about 70 feet tall, much taller than Wailord. Devastator made the first move; he lifted his foot and slammed it down causing an Earthquake.

A large crack on the Earth's surface began to appear, and it headed for Wailord, who fell down the crack with a thud. It opened its mouth in pain; Starscream who was stuck inside Wailord finally saw the chance to escape and did so. Amy was shouting to Wailord "Wailord c'mon get up!" but it was no use, the fall had hurt him and he lay there in pain. Starscream now sensing victory "Stupid flesh creature, you will pay with your life for resisting the Decepticons! Devastator, bring her to me" Devastator marched forward ready to grab her. Amy was horrified "NO" she shouted, With Wailord down there was not much she could do against the huge robot. Suddenly loud music was booming throughout the area, it was 80's power metal music, the same off the bus radio. Amy turned around, it was Jazz, he had tuned into Earth's radio stations (he was a great lover of music) and was using it to disorientate Devastator. The other Decepticons too held their heads in agony "AAAAHHH somebody make it stop" Starscream screamed (pardon the pun) the music was very loud and disorientating.

Jazz shouted to his comrades “NOW Wheeljack!” Wheeljack was behind a large rock with Hound and Bumblebee. “Right Autobots here is the plan, Hound you use your hologram technology to duplicate your self and keep Devastator guessing. Bumblebee when he’s distracted put this device into his memory bank uplink socket” Wheeljack handed Bumblebee a sort of memory card device “You can count on me Wheeljack!” meanwhile Hound transformed to his army land rover jeep mode and approached Devastator.

“Hey big, mean and stupid come and get me” Hound teased Devastator as he Transformed to robot mode again. Devastator looked down and saw over a 100 Hound clones (Hound had an uncanny ability to create Holograms of anything) Devastator moaned “Rraaaahhh! Destroy Autobots!” he fired at the hounds but couldn’t get the right one.

Meanwhile Bumblebee drove up behind the big metal beast in his Bug car mode. He transformed and climbed up Devastator (for a small autobot like Bumblebee it was like climbing a vertical mountain) he eventually reached the back of Devastators head. He opened a panel and there it was an insert point for Devastators memory banks. Bumblebee rammed the memory card into the slot. It started to override Devastators merger sequence by uploading a virus into the command sequence, thus breaking it.

It worked; it caused Devastator to fall into pieces, back into his 6 constructicon parts. Now that Devastator was no longer a problem Wheeljack commenced the final part of the plan “Good thing I bought my Cluster bomb today” Wheeljack had a missile launcher on his right shoulder in robot mode. He fired it into the sky.

Where was Amy in all this fighting you ask? The first time she saw the Autobots she thought “Great more of them” but not so. They for some odd reason to her started fighting each other; she took the time to return Wailord to its pokeball. She also saw Wheeljack’s missile flying into the sky, sensing danger she took cover into the ravine which was caused by the earthquake from Devastator’s foot.

The Missile split into hundreds of part, you see this was a cluster bomb, it detaches into many tiny explosive parts and the small explosions cover a wide area. The explosions covered the Decpeticon forces; after all the fire and smoke had cleared they were all badly damaged. Starscream ordered to his troops “Decepticons retreat back to HQ!” all the decepticons flew off, barely making it off the ground. But Starscream had seen Amy climbing out of the Ravine.

“You may have won Autobots but your friend will not be so lucky!” he fired his null-ray at Amy. It hit her with huge effect; she slumped to the floor unconscious. The Autobots walked up to her, their victory cheers short lived. “Poor creature” said bumblebee. Jazz asked “What shall we do with her? She could be dying” Wheeljack being a scientist and with huge respect for other life ordered “C’mon we’ll take her back to the Ark and see what Ratchet can do for her.”
 

Cybernetic Angel

Servant of Darkrai
...I'm sorry to say, but I think I had a brain lapse reading this.

First of all, the crossover combination. You can make it work, but it get's harder as the genre's grow farther apart. Not that it's a stupid idea; I myself have though of a Pokémon/Transformer crossover. Unfortunately, from what I was able to read (I stopped early on), you were not able to make a good connection between the two series.

Next, the writing style. You started the entire story off with some dialog. It's not against the rules, but the way you worded it was confusing. You also summed up the events too quickly in paranthesis, so people who know nothing about Transformers don't have a clear picture of what's behind this story. You got your facts right, which is good, but not everyone knows the same stuff.

Onto the dialog itself. Doesn't seem realistic, there are clichés and they sometimes seem out of character. For example, Megatron said 'This is to good an opportunity to destroy you Prime, and once I terminate your energon core I will find where you were going and plunder its energy!' It's a run-on, and I would imagine Megatron saying something shorter and to the point, such as 'Wretched Autobot! I'll tear out your processor with my bare hands!' And when you have one of the characters say something, it's good to start a new paragraph with each line of dialog.

Then we get to you're OC, Amy. CLICHéY McDEADHORSE. Person has fought in the league, has a super-powered team, blah blah blah. Seems almost Mary-Sue as well. Not that it's against the rules, but I really doesn't seem to fit in this type of x-over.

You get a B- for effort, but overall, if you REALLY want to make this x-over work... start from square one. Thinking about your human characters again, watch some G1 episodes again to get a feel for the characters (or at least go to a Transformers fansite) and also work on your general writing skills. Just because this is a fanfiction and not a homework assignment doesn't mean you should cut corners and such. I'm not trying to be the bad guy here, but seriously, this piece of work... not clicking with me. Please try harder next time, the general idea is really something I'd like to see done. Peace out.
 
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