My Region

[-SI-]

This is my first region. It is a remote island with no gyms.

Please feel free to comment, but remember... This is my FIRST region i have ever made, so take it easy. ^^

 

[☼Latias☼]

maybe add some routes to the top-right island, & zoom in, otherwise 9/10

 

[-SI-]

Yeah... The story (oh boy) goes, that the island is the Island of Misfortune XD

They closed it off, and it is illegal to go there...

Thanks for the comment...

 

[Prominn]

There are three things that I see wrong.
1. The upper-right island doesn't have any routes/cities; you should add some.
2.The island itself doesn't look like much of a island, it's about five times bigger than Hoenn ;;You can't change that much, though. So on your next map, you should save a map of Hoenn, and put it beside the first starting outline, so you can compare sizes.
3. The separate shades of green are too sharp, you don't need to change this, I'm just being nitpicky. If you want to though, try editing the edges so that they look smoother.

Good map for first try! I've seen other people do way worse, beleive me. *cough*brother*cough*

 

[-SI-]

Yeah. I know i could touch it up a bit.

I will do beter on the next one though ^^

 

[splat]

what's up with the five blue spots on the bottomright?

 

[Eevee_Master]

I think it's cool ^.^

 

[-SI-]

New One!

what's up with the five blue spots on the bottomright?

The Cinco Dungeons. Like the Sevii Islands, but dungeons. Sorry. Doesnt make sense.

Here is another I just made. Really big, but it isnt going in my sig, so it is ok.

Tioro Region. More cities, Big islands, Lots of caves and dungeons (kind of).

Hope you like!

 

[ø®ΑпGЗ ♠]

So the dungeons are underwater?

 

[-SI-]

No. You surf to get to them. Maybe i should add a route. >_<

 

[Chaotic Houndoom]

So far its looking good, keep it up! =D

 

[-SI-]

Thanks. I am trying to improve. What am i doing wrong though?

 

[☼Latias☼]

Thanks. I am trying to improve. What am i doing wrong though?

hmm.... Regions maps usually have the where you are.... like ini a pokenav map

 

[ø®ΑпGЗ ♠]

I think it's too simple. There are no mountains or depressions, just a plateu.

 

[-SI-]

Yeah. I thought about that when i compared it to Hoenn.

 

[Twitch]

The first thing I noticed was that the Routes are too small. They should be the same width as the cities/towns.

Also, try to make your edges look more rounded and not look jagged and straight. On the right-most side of the first one it looks like a square.

And then I noticed that the water Routes weren't shaded in. if they're surf Routes you have to color them accordingly and the same for regular Routes over water and not just have a regular Route color.

Sorry if I seem overly critical or anything.

 

[Eevee_Master]

I like it! Nice Job!!!

 

[-SI-]

The first thing I noticed was that the Routes are too small. They should be the same width as the cities/towns.

Also, try to make your edges look more rounded and not look jagged and straight. On the right-most side of the first one it looks like a square.

And then I noticed that the water Routes weren't shaded in. if they're surf Routes you have to color them accordingly and the same for regular Routes over water and not just have a regular Route color.

Sorry if I seem overly critical or anything.

No. I needed and deserve that v_v

I am making a new one now, hopefully a lot better. Thanks for comments guys.

 

[striker]

no gyms ......................................

 

[Eevee_Master]

You can use yellow over water! look:

here