My Revamps, Eggs and Fakemon

[Magic kid930]

I'm going to put in all the revamps, eggs and fakemon I do, into this thread. Please do not let this die.

A Few Rules:

Do not post requests. This is NOT a request shop!
Do not post criticism UNLESS it will help me do better.
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Eggs:

Chansey

Porygon

Spoink

Revamps:

Togepi (S)

Aerodactyl (S)

Diglett (S)

Devamps:

R/S style to R/B style

R/S style to R/B style

Fakemon (order: date of creation):

Starem, pre-evolution of Staryu

Nosey, the Tiny Nose pok'emon

Noser, the Big Nose pok'emon. Evolution of Nosey

Snaker, the Small Snake pok'emon. Pre-evolution of Ekans

Boomecho, the Booming pok'emon. Evolution of Chimecho

Petal, the Bud pok'emon.

Monsoon, the Rain pok'emon.

Molten, the Winged Lizard pok'emon.

Custom trainers:

Based on: Youngster

Fakedex (no Starem) (more information):

001:

Petal, the Bud pok'emon. The flower around it's neck grows with this pok'emon.
004:

Molten, the Winged Lizard pok'emon. It's starts to learn to fly when it evolves.
007:

Monsoon, the Rain pok'emon. Monsoon is only found when the weather is stormy.
013:

Nosey, the Tiny Nose pok'emon. If this pok'emon catches a cold, it will slow down it's evolution proccess.
014:

Noser, the Big Nose pok'emon. Evolution of Nosey. Unlike it's pre-evolution, Nosey, this pok'emon rarely catches colds.
021:

Snaker, the Small Snake pok'emon. This pok'emon can call other Snaker's by rattling it's tail.
022:

Ekans, the Snake pok'emon. Evoltuion of Snaker. It flicks it's tounge in and out to sense danger
023:

Arbok, the Cobra pok'emon. Evoltuion of Ekans. The pattern on it's belly appeares to be a frightening face.
041:

Chimecho, the Wind Chime pok'emon. It uses it's long tail to pluck nuts and berries.
042:

Boomecho, the Booming pok'emon. The suction cup on it's head grows bigger as Chimecho evolves.

 

[Ice Cold Glalie]

You need sprites to post before you open one of these


;362; ICG

EDIT: sprites now, it's ok

 

[Luke the Almighty]

Ugh... Why do people do these things... READ THE RULES!!! And no, you can't say stuff like "I'm new here," or "I'm only 8."

 

[Magic kid930]

I accidently pressed "Post new thread" instead of "preveiw post" so it was an accident!

They're up now

 

[Neopolis]

Okay... Now that it's edited...

Chansey egg thingies look weird. The hair (?) looks deformed.

The devamps have ALL BLACK OUTLINES! AHHHH! *hides*

Starem is... Very simple. Shading needs some work too.

 

[Torchic23]

Chansey

Porygon

These are ok, but I've seen better

Togepi (S)

Aerodactyl (S)

Diglett (S)

These are not revamped enough. They still look oldish [is that a word?]

Starem, pre evo of Staryu

This one is ok. It's not a thing with random simple parts like most of the fakemon I see

 

[ø®ΑпGЗ ♠]

You should try to det rid of the checker shading when you revamp.

 

[Starter530]

Chansey

Porygon

These are okay, if anything adding chansey's feet was overkill

Revamps:

Togepi (S)

Aerodactyl (S)
Bad

Diglett (S)

They're okay. Not good but Okay, you have to change the outline they have way too much black in them. Also fix the shading make it more like R/S style.

Starem, pre evo of Staryu[/quote]
Really Bad
1. too big to be a pre-evo of anything
2. the outline is all balck
3. the shadfing is way off. The light should be coming from the upper left. And no pokemon has the entire right side dark.

 

[-aocom v2-]

Listen to Starter. yup. Everything I was going to say is in his post.

On Starem:
- Wayyy to big.
- You need a custom palette. You used the grays on the default paint bar.
- doesn't look symmetrical (unless the bottom 'spike' is supposed to be thinner than the top one)
- bluntify the edges of the spikes 0-o;; staryu and starmie arent so sharp.

 

[Magic kid930]

Ok, I followed the advice and tried another fakemon. I call it... Nosey!

 

[miken park]

Noesy still has a black outline. Please colour it.

 

[Magic kid930]

Ahh, I can't really outline shade, if there was a Tutorial I'd follow it. So please don't rate on black outlines

Here is Nosey's evolution, Noser:

 

[Electabuzz]

Well, outline shading is really no different then other shading. What you do, is when there's a place where there's lighter colors, you put a lighter shade. Usually, the outlining color is the tone darker than the color it's next to. Thus, the lightest color would have the second lightest color as an outline.

Try to make your sprites a little bit less squarish. They are very unnatural if you just have them rigid and stiff.

 

[Magic kid930]

Hmm, okay I've tried outlne shading for this new one. Please tell me if there is too much, too less or just right outline shading.

It's a pre-evolution of Ekans, but I can't decide what to call it, so for now, Snaker

EDIT: So I don't double post, I'll post my new eggs here:

 

[Neopolis]

Hmm, okay I've tried outlne shading for this new one. Please tell me if there is too much, too less or just right outline shading.

It's a pre-evolution of Ekans, but I can't decide what to call it, so for now, Snaker

EDIT: So I don't double post, I'll post my new eggs here:

Outlines are a lot bette.r But it's a bit... Let's say it looks a bit squashed.

 

[Magic kid930]

Ok, I personally don't think this one looks squashed. It's an evolution on Chimecho, Boomecho

EDIT: And the grass starter to go on my soon-to-come Fakedex... Petal!

EDIT2: And the other two starters, Monsoon and Molten (I'll put these in order for my fakedex on the first post)

 

[Magic kid930]

Sorry to DP but i've added the Fakedex

 

[Neopolis]

A note, 'Snaker' dosen't make any sense. Ekans and Arbok are all reversed names. Snake and Kobra. So Ekans should be something like that too. Adnokana

 

[Electabuzz]

If you look at your sprites in comparrison to the official sprites - that's all you need to see. Do you see how much smoother they look, and how they aren't just a side view. Try to base your designs of something, not just using freehand.

 

[Magic kid930]

A note, 'Snaker' dosen't make any sense. Ekans and Arbok are all reversed names. Snake and Kobra. So Ekans should be something like that too. Adnokana

I see what you mean... Psa? Aob (or Rotcirtsnoc)? I can't think of all those Snake's names.

I was thinking of Asp, Boa or Constrictor.

If you look at your sprites in comparrison to the official sprites - that's all you need to see. Do you see how much smoother they look, and how they aren't just a side view. Try to base your designs of something, not just using freehand.

Hmm.. I don't quite see what you mean. Do you mean like Ekans is based on a snake?