I shall comment on the second page.
The absol pre-evo's shading didn't seem quite right on it's back.
When you edited it though it became more baby like. The shading on it's back was fixed up and good thinking on taking the claws away to make it more baby like

With the zebra, it should either have a darker outline or make the black to a dark grey.
Overshade, seems fine to me.
Doomup v.3 looked better with the mane. Now it looks a little too plain.
With the blue snakey thing, It's a bit confusing where the light source is coming from.
Blue dragon scratch, wow such an improvement. Posing, shading, colours.
I love those pixel overs, perfect to me. They may need shading editing but great still.
Dragonair Chao, really cute. I have never seen a chao like this before. I'd like to see more of these. Nice scratched parts as well.
Karoon's shading doesn't seem right at all. Nice outlines. With the shading where is the light comin from?
Wow that was a lot of typing.