My Sprites

[Aqua's Dolphin]

These are my sprites, C&C but i'm a total n00b so don't be too harsh...

 

[Rheine]

You've improved!

I liked the Roselia most

 

[Aqua's Dolphin]

Thanks! I took your sprites as inspiration!

 

[Rapiido]

I gave "below average"

Yes your recolours are good, but recolours are pretty simple to do. So I marked your Electrode/Crobat. Which doesn't go well together at all. Not your fault, but the Pokemon won't fit together properly because of their shape.

 

[spareux]

Yeah, the Electrode/Crobat don't go well together... plus it's just too much of a copy + paste job.
I like the fact you tried to give the Totodile's head a Cyndaquil pattern, except it's just a straight line.
The recolours, as said before, are good, but they're just far too easy to do imo.
I give below aveage aswell.

 

[Aqua's Dolphin]

Says the guy with copy/paste Kecleons...
How's this?

 

[the_black_deoxys]

B...E...A...utiful cool shiney

 

[spareux]

Says the guy with copy/paste Kecleons...

Excuse me, do you realise how completely inappropriate, rude and childish that comment was?

For one, I was giving you constructie critisicm which is the entire point of asking for people's opinions without them flaming and bashing you, and is the most polite manner of giving your advice. I was helping you, telling you where to improve which is what constructive crit is. As a rather advanced spritier, I do not take kindly to someone replying in that tone to me when I help them out, particularly considering your current skill.

And secondly, my Kecleons are by no means 'Copy and Paste.' About half of the body patterns are all custom drawn, and if they it is so obvious that they are apparently 'copy and pastey,' then why, on the three different forums I have shown them on, has no-one commented on it, but in fact complimented the custom parts?

Lashing out at someone for giving constructive crit is not taken kindly on these Forums. To me it is rudeness of the highest level. This is the first time I have EVER had to say things like these to another Spriter or even Serebii member. I hope to not have to again.

And please do not start accusing me of 'flaming' or 'bashing' or whatever, because I have handled this in an appropriate way and I have not said a single bad thing about you during it.

 

[Aqua's Dolphin]

particularly considering your current skill.

What is that supposed to mean?

 

[spareux]

It is supposed to meen that you are obviously (as you even stated yourself) new at spriting and looking for advice.

I find it even more annoying now that you went for a last attempt to get me into trouble.
Now, I do not intend to go on and end up Spamming up this topic. If there is anything else you would like to say to me, you may PM me and we may let someone of higher authority handle this, but I do hope you do not intend to take it that far, because I won't have you Spamming your own topic quarelling with me, that's not what a Sprites thread is for. So should you post anything more, know that for my decency of SerebiiForums I will not reply on this thread.

 

[Rheine]

I can't vote now, because you can improve it.
Make more

And the Venomoth is sooo cute! Shinyy

 

[Aqua's Dolphin]

How's this?

 

[Zahro]

Nice recoloured. But the fakemon are yuck. You only added new arms or a new face.
The Swampert-Metang is also not good. His right (left if you look) arm is not good pasted, and come on, it's only a Swampert with different arms.

 

[Aqua's Dolphin]

(Dripping with sarcasm) Oh, thank you.

 

[DarkAbyssWolf]

Zahro is right about swampert thing and the arms should AT LEAST be the same colour

 

[Wietse]

(Dripping with sarcasm) Oh, thank you.

Have you ever heard of CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM???? He is just trying to help you! You are a beginner spriter and almost every beginning spriter starts with just copy-paste mixes, even you! He just tels you you should scratch at the arms a bit so it looks natural, and it will be better. He don't say this to make you feel bad... He has nothing against you (me neither), we don't even now you (I think) so why would we want to hurt you. It's just the simple truth, the Swampert-Metang one isn't well done but THAT'S NORMAL FOR A BEGINNING SPRITER!!! I understand you worked very hard for it and than it's not nice people say it's not good, but it is not good, the swampert isn't even recolored, the arms are just pasted to it. you should try recoloring swampert to the colors of metang, scracth a bit at the arms, give him metangs nose... and it will be a much better sprite! I hope you now understand the meaning of CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM, and BTW, your recolors are very well done, i see you got the recoloring skills, why dont you use it in your swampert mix! I'm sure if you practise a bit more, you will become a great spriter!

Keep up the good work

Nokkid

 

[Pikario]

Amazing! I could never do these even if my life depended on it...

 

[Aqua's Dolphin]

Thanks! And how's this?

 

[Prime Wolf]

You need slight improvment, the best things you have is the recolours, and well they arent much of a challenge.

Oh and on your Swmapert/Metang you didnt recolour the arms, fix it and it may look better

 

[Wietse]

Your getting better but again its just a copy paste work, make it so the sentret really sits on the tail (and you should give him azurill's ears)